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TaylorRAWRxoxo
Workplace Boredom
TaylorRAWRxoxo
This is the worst party ever, can I join the not-having-fun party?
The more, the merrier!

Or rather, the more, the more monotonous.


Yay! No one's having fun!
*shanks* mwa ha ha ha
 
     
 
Nagoyako_the_noobmaster
This is a game in which whoever comes onto the forum must complete the story. Here are the instructions.
-You must write at least a paragraph that follows the previous post and relates to the story. when you do so you can edit the plot however you like.

Rules.
1. No finishing the story it has to go on as long as possible.
2. You have to write one or more paragraphs for each post.
3. You can only continue the story once every other post, this gives everyone a chance to create their part of the story.
4. If you have any comments pm me and keep them of this forum. we don't need comments getting readers lost.
5. Have fun!!! mrgreen
6. if your not having fun and just want to ruin the forum then leave. it's only making it hard for the people who actually want to write something.


Story Part one.

It's July 13th, 1888 and the day was wonderfully sunny in Victoria Canada. Too sunny for Luke. You see, Luke hates the sun and the heat, no one in the town knows why, he never says much about it, but it's quite obvious he does. For when a sunny day rears it's bright and shinning head Luke always seems to stay inside, working late hours in order to leave work at dusk. No one really bothered him much about it, and Luke was glad they didn't. Luke worked in a clothing shop owned by and old friend of his, a 30 year old man by the name of Eric. Eric was a tough buissnes man but he had a soft heart. Luke lived most of his life with this man even though he had no blood relations with him.
Luke was absolutely miserable today, the combination of the sun and the lack of customers caused him to suffer endless boredom. This was stupid, he thought to himself. There was going to be no customers today, they were all busy having fun in the horrible sun. Then, as he was about to take a nap the store door opened and in stepped a young woman in a light blue dress. "How may I help you?" Luke asked.
"Oh, nothing at the moment, I'm not here to buy anything." The woman said as she pulls out a small journal and starts writing. "But thanks for asking. This place has a lot of history, doesn't it?"
"Uh..I think so. Why are you writing?" Luke asks.
"A love story....well....more like a vampire story.....it has a bit of a Romeo and Juliet theme to it." The young woman says, tucking a piece her scarlet hair behind her ear. "It's not fully developed yet but for some reason this place gives me some inspiration."
Luke chuckles, "Vampires, eh? Seems pretty interesting. Well, I kind of know a thing or two about vampires if you want a little more research just ask."
"Thanks, do you do a lot of reading on old myths on vampires? It seems like you do." She smiles and laughs.
"You could say that ha ha." Luke laughs. "Well, take your time."
"I think I have enough inspiration for now, thanks. Oh, sorry for being so rude, what is your name?" The young woman quickly asks.
"It's Luke Becker." Luke says. "What's yours?"
"Lydia Edwards." Lydia giggles and prances out the door.
"Lydia....hmm....what a lovely name." Luke sighs and stairs out the window.
     
As Lydia lay on the grass, scribbling thoughtfully into her notebook, she felt a strange presence. It was as if someone were watching her... she shrugged it off. "I'm getting too involved in this..." she muttered, continuing her writing. Drafting out characters really drew her in. This woman in her soon to be story was kind and warm and very malleable, but when she was neglected she grew impossibly cold, not budging for anyone or anything. The man was...

"There's that feeling again..." Lydia looked around, trying to find the source of the unpleasant sensation. There was a tree, the grass, some wild daisies growing in the distance, the beautiful sun, and the shop. What was behind the window was a mystery; the glare of the sun was too bright. Lydia decided to play it. She grabbed her things and quickly (but not too quickly to gather attention) walked away from the area.
 
     
I am not here and you do not know me. It's quite simple.
 
This was it, Luke decided. He would make this woman his wife, turn her, and use her womb to create the first generation of his clan, Vampyren Bloodfartus.

Walking out into the grass, he knelt beside her. His mind convinced him he wouldn't be staying out here too long, for the sun would be lethal to him. "It's a little slow inside the shop today, thought I'd come out and keep you company, stranger." He cooed.

She smiled, looking up at him, her sparkling blues shining through her curly head of red hair. "Hiya." She replied, resting her chin on her fist.

He licked his lips subtly, his eyes once again finding their way over her body, her light blue dress barely covering her pale thighs. He was fully erect, and had an unquenchable bloodlust. Trying his hardest to mask his sudden excitement. He stuttered a bit and laughed nervously, shaking as he said "How's that vampire story going?"

She was halfway through her answer before he clamped down on her neck hard, piercing through the flesh and ripping the skin off, blood spurting onto his face and muscle tissue falling out in a nauseating manner. Her shrieks of pain and terror ran through the alley as he tore off her dress, revealing her perky, succulent breasts. Drinking up the blood he thought would be a necessity to his life, he was about to undo his pants and release his pulsing member before realizing people were screaming and running in terror. Police would be here soon, no doubt.

He stood up, frantically trying to wipe the blood from his mouth and took off down the street, leaving Lydia's seizing, dying body lying on the grass. as to where it didn't matter. He needed to get away, his plan had failed for now.
     
"They say if you comment a painting in progress, you get seven years of bad luck. Maybe that's why the artists themselves are always miserable."
Are we having fun yet?
 
     
Dear mods, please take note that posts are easy to misinterpret, so I wish to tell you now that I do not post about threads being in the wrong forum.
 
Luke ran into a beautiful meadow not far from there, where all was happy, the sun was shining, the flowers were growing, the birds were chirping. He ran over a tree pulling a birds nest from it and devouring the birds whole. Licking his lips he ran over to a feeding bunny, with a beautiful white shiny coat.
"I must eat bunny, bunny looks so goood" Luke salivated as he sucked the life out of the pour bunny. But what he didn't see was that the bunny was not yet empty of it blood, and was now turning into a crazy vampire bunny! His name would be Tom and he would be feared for many years to come!

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*shanks* BAD PERSON NO FUN IT'S A LAW
     
Thats too much to read! Can i join the Not-having-fun party, too? razz
 
     
 


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I am a Female :O
 
zodiac kills you
lost take a map
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*shanks* BAD PERSON NO FUN IT'S A LAW


*dances around, laughing, having way to much fun* But I can't help it!! It's just so amusing!! xd
     

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*dances around, laughing, having way to much fun* But I can't help it!! It's just so amusing!! xd
I'll show you amusing *takes out machien gun*
 
     
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you guys are a bunch of stupid idiots. thank you for ruining this forum.
     
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