Webcomic Angel Protected

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Redfox44

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You changed almost nothing since the last time. So why are you back? Still have a million pictures before the comic starts, still have characterization and pacing issues.

I think you should go and take your own advice and stop trying to compare my work to yours...

I was going to retread the whole chef/soup metaphor, and remind you that I never compared my work to yours or anyone else's for that matter, but, not going to lie, I don't care about helping you any more. Enjoy mediocrity bro. You've earned it.

Iron Spike

Thanks for reminding me about the hollow apple. I read Understanding Comics years ago, but I only own Making Comics, so I forgot all about the concept. It's nice to remember useful info.

[dirtracer8]

really digging this comic! keep up the great work! heart heart heart

[[~Ramble.Corset~]]

I think the amount of grey you use is too heavy, try and cut back on it to really bring out contrasts and show off the lineart