The PD Police V2 [Gosh guys don't you get it, we're dead!]

[afsdfsdfsdfs23432]

DETAILED RATE PLEASE
Name Candycafe
Raters name: you do not fill out
Advice: You do not fill out
Number rate: you do not fill out

ADVICE PLEASE
Name Candycafe
What would you like advice on: Make it look more candy like?
Raters name: you do not fill out
Advice: You do not fill out

[Straight Ace]

Candycafe

First off, I'm sorry but your profile does not remind me of candy at all, I'd suggest using some solid colour lines circles and other shapes for that theme as most candies and wrappers have that type of style.

Now advice. The first things you should see too are your text and multimedia. Silver on white is very difficult to read, and autostarting multimedia usually isnt taken very well as people generally tend to be playing their own sounds as they browse. So I'd get those fixed as soon as possible.

Design wise I think you've done good. The layout is original and simplistic, but the design you have in the pink parts keeps it from being too plain. However I'd change the buttons, as well as taking out the green "fresh mint" block as they completely stand out in the profile.

As a number rate I'd say 6.8/10. Its a good start, and certainly has a lot of potential. Theres so much you can still add, so its not too late for the candy theme either :3

[Silently Watching]

I have been to another good brush site if anyone is interested.
It's Brusheezy.com

They have a TON of brushes there by many different people. But if someone is looking to make commisions with them, they probably should go somewhere else. Everyone has there own rules on there on a little read-me thing, it seems most people don't like other people taking their brushes and selling them. (obviously. lol.)

[Cali Soca]

@ Candycafe.

As Ace said, your profile is simplistic, but doesnt have enough to make it "candy like", a vibe which I'm not feeling from this profile. I recommend you add more visible things to the top and bottom sections. I would suggest some vector circles. Try using different shades of pink in the profile: One light, dark, and average.
They used such a technuiqe in this tutorial: [Link]

Overall, you are really on the right track, and I can see what you're trying to get at. The font fits perfectly.

[[!Cactuar!]]

Latest Profile In progress xD


advice opinions?


I wanted a small type of profile, but one that looked, and made some sort of impact on the viewer, I don't even know if I'll have comments on this one, I somewhat like it, any ideas of what to improve?

[Catastrophii]

@Candy;
Lol. I think it looks like candy. I really like the entire concept
of how you're pulling off the "candy" look with the abstract
shapes and textures. I'd say add a little more color, maybe
some more textures that really REMIND you of candy, like
peppermint stripes and chocolate drizzle-looking stuff. But,
uh, try and make the music player the original size & have
it in a different place? (like lower left hand corner) or something.




@Cactuar;
BAH. It's too pretty. :< Just realign the contact buttons 'cause
they're a little off from each other and make the text justified
and not going over the white text space and it'll be PURFECT.
;D

[Shangrilicious]

cactuar, it's really nice, but I think it's too simple
That's probably just me though, because I like to see wild crazy crap all over the place.
andandand comments makes the world go round
DDDD:

[GerardisMine]

I, I'm in? biggrin

[GerardisMine]

[!Cactuar!]

Latest Profile In progress xD


advice opinions?


I wanted a small type of profile, but one that looked, and made some sort of impact on the viewer, I don't even know if I'll have comments on this one, I somewhat like it, any ideas of what to improve?

Are you going to add a comment section? D:

[GerardisMine]

Candycafe

DETAILED RATE PLEASE
Name Candycafe
Raters name: you do not fill out
Advice: You do not fill out
Number rate: you do not fill out

ADVICE PLEASE
Name Candycafe
What would you like advice on: Make it look more candy like?
Raters name: you do not fill out
Advice: You do not fill out

I really like it! 8.5//1o.

BUT (advice time! biggrin ), it's a bit too plain. Maybe, this will sound corny, maybe faded candies kind of falling from the sky in the pinkish area would be a good idea? xd

[[!Cactuar!]]

GerardisMine

[!Cactuar!]

Latest Profile In progress xD


advice opinions?


I wanted a small type of profile, but one that looked, and made some sort of impact on the viewer, I don't even know if I'll have comments on this one, I somewhat like it, any ideas of what to improve?

Are you going to add a comment section? D:

I'll have to see if there is a good place if not, no

Catas- Bah I thought they where misaligned xD I'll fix that for sure.

[GerardisMine]

[!Cactuar!]

GerardisMine

[!Cactuar!]

Latest Profile In progress xD


advice opinions?


I wanted a small type of profile, but one that looked, and made some sort of impact on the viewer, I don't even know if I'll have comments on this one, I somewhat like it, any ideas of what to improve?

Are you going to add a comment section? D:

I'll have to see if there is a good place if not, no

Catas- Bah I thought they where misaligned xD I'll fix that for sure.

*GASP!*

[Cali Soca]

Dont let this thread die!

[GerardisMine]

*gives CPR*

[[!Cactuar!]]

bahaha I should have given it cpr, but Cali, and gerardis already did :]

HOWS ABOUT YOU GUYS RATE MY PROFILE?