real friends are not easily forgotten

[adorablemissashley]

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[I am The Compendium]

The shift and enter keys wonder what they ever did to you.

[t0bemadeofglass]

I am The Compendium

The shift and enter keys wonder what they ever did to you.

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[Tympest]

Why do you keep removing them? Even if the poetry isn't good, you could get more feed back by leaving it up instead of editing it out.

[I am The Compendium]

Tympest

Why do you keep removing them? Even if the poetry isn't good, you could get more feed back by leaving it up instead of editing it out.

Given that she never read the rules, she thinks valid criticism is a personal death threat.

[Tympest]

I am The Compendium

Tympest

Why do you keep removing them? Even if the poetry isn't good, you could get more feed back by leaving it up instead of editing it out.

Given that she never read the rules, she thinks valid criticism is a personal death threat.

A shame, especially given that she's stunting her own writing by refusing criticism.

[I_Write_Ivre]

Tympest

I am The Compendium

Tympest

Why do you keep removing them? Even if the poetry isn't good, you could get more feed back by leaving it up instead of editing it out.

Given that she never read the rules, she thinks valid criticism is a personal death threat.

A shame, especially given that she's stunting her own writing by refusing criticism.

I doubt she cared about her writing ability before the day she posted these 'poems'.

[Tympest]

I_Write_Ivre

Tympest

I am The Compendium

Tympest

Why do you keep removing them? Even if the poetry isn't good, you could get more feed back by leaving it up instead of editing it out.

Given that she never read the rules, she thinks valid criticism is a personal death threat.

A shame, especially given that she's stunting her own writing by refusing criticism.

I doubt she cared about her writing ability before the day she posted these 'poems'.

Probably not, but it still seems like a bit of a waste. You know?

[I_Write_Ivre]

Tympest

I_Write_Ivre

Tympest

I am The Compendium

Tympest

Why do you keep removing them? Even if the poetry isn't good, you could get more feed back by leaving it up instead of editing it out.

Given that she never read the rules, she thinks valid criticism is a personal death threat.

A shame, especially given that she's stunting her own writing by refusing criticism.

I doubt she cared about her writing ability before the day she posted these 'poems'.

Probably not, but it still seems like a bit of a waste. You know?

It's always a waste. I just doubt she wasted much, though.

[Tympest]

I_Write_Ivre

Tympest

I_Write_Ivre

Tympest

I am The Compendium

Tympest

Why do you keep removing them? Even if the poetry isn't good, you could get more feed back by leaving it up instead of editing it out.

Given that she never read the rules, she thinks valid criticism is a personal death threat.

A shame, especially given that she's stunting her own writing by refusing criticism.

I doubt she cared about her writing ability before the day she posted these 'poems'.

Probably not, but it still seems like a bit of a waste. You know?

It's always a waste. I just doubt she wasted much, though.

True, I just have a bad habit of framing things in my own experiences with writing where getting someone to give criticism is a real pain. Leaving after getting just a little criticism just seems silly to me.

[I_Write_Ivre]

Tympest

True, I just have a bad habit of framing things in my own experiences with writing where getting someone to give criticism is a real pain. Leaving after getting just a little criticism just seems silly to me.

Definitely. Especially since she was told that one of her poems could have been very moving, but she'd rather it be about a far weaker premise.

[Tympest]

I_Write_Ivre

Tympest

True, I just have a bad habit of framing things in my own experiences with writing where getting someone to give criticism is a real pain. Leaving after getting just a little criticism just seems silly to me.

Definitely. Especially since she was told that one of her poems could have been very moving, but she'd rather it be about a far weaker premise.

Seriously? What was the weaker premise?

[I_Write_Ivre]

Tympest

I_Write_Ivre

Tympest

True, I just have a bad habit of framing things in my own experiences with writing where getting someone to give criticism is a real pain. Leaving after getting just a little criticism just seems silly to me.

Definitely. Especially since she was told that one of her poems could have been very moving, but she'd rather it be about a far weaker premise.

Seriously? What was the weaker premise?

She wrote this poem (vignette?) where the narrator says she wants to protect someone close to them and that they are 'broken' more and more every time the narrator sees them. This could be about dealing with a friend or parent who has cancer, severely depression, or just a physical injury that is making them worse emotionally, physically, or mentally.

Instead is was about the narrator not liking that their friend was sad and instead of doing anything about it was whining, presumably on the internet.

[Tympest]

I_Write_Ivre

Tympest

I_Write_Ivre

Tympest

True, I just have a bad habit of framing things in my own experiences with writing where getting someone to give criticism is a real pain. Leaving after getting just a little criticism just seems silly to me.

Definitely. Especially since she was told that one of her poems could have been very moving, but she'd rather it be about a far weaker premise.

Seriously? What was the weaker premise?

She wrote this poem (vignette?) where the narrator says she wants to protect someone close to them and that they are 'broken' more and more every time the narrator sees them. This could be about dealing with a friend or parent who has cancer, severely depression, or just a physical injury that is making them worse emotionally, physically, or mentally.

Instead is was about the narrator not liking that their friend was sad and instead of doing anything about it was whining, presumably on the internet.

Yeesh, that is taking the weaker option. At least it seems in character for OP, but still.

[I_Write_Ivre]

Tympest

I_Write_Ivre

Tympest

I_Write_Ivre

Tympest

True, I just have a bad habit of framing things in my own experiences with writing where getting someone to give criticism is a real pain. Leaving after getting just a little criticism just seems silly to me.

Definitely. Especially since she was told that one of her poems could have been very moving, but she'd rather it be about a far weaker premise.

Seriously? What was the weaker premise?

She wrote this poem (vignette?) where the narrator says she wants to protect someone close to them and that they are 'broken' more and more every time the narrator sees them. This could be about dealing with a friend or parent who has cancer, severely depression, or just a physical injury that is making them worse emotionally, physically, or mentally.

Instead is was about the narrator not liking that their friend was sad and instead of doing anything about it was whining, presumably on the internet.

Yeesh, that is taking the weaker option. At least it seems in character for OP, but still.

I actually thought she had potential until then.