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[Enchantress Sabel]

zrac123

cool. was a nice break from my book ;P

oh?

[Profligates]

Some things that really bother me:

Callie goes around kissing Seth and Leon while she's dating Nick, but when Nick kisses one girl Callie completely flips out on him.

You have vampires named Spike and Angel, which are from Buffy the Vampire Slayer.

[Enchantress Sabel]

Teru Teru Koumori

Some things that really bother me:

Callie goes around kissing Seth and Leon while she's dating Nick, but when Nick kisses one girl Callie completely flips out on him.

You have vampires named Spike and Angel, which are from Buffy the Vampire Slayer.

she kissed Leon to test something and if I recall, didn't Seth kiss her? Either way, she was falling out of love with Nick as she fell in love with Seth and she more used the kiss as an excuse.

As far as the names, they may be the same name, but they aren't the same characters.

[Profligates]

Enchantress Sabel

Teru Teru Koumori

Some things that really bother me:

Callie goes around kissing Seth and Leon while she's dating Nick, but when Nick kisses one girl Callie completely flips out on him.

You have vampires named Spike and Angel, which are from Buffy the Vampire Slayer.

she kissed Leon to test something and if I recall, didn't Seth kiss her? Either way, she was falling out of love with Nick as she fell in love with Seth and she more used the kiss as an excuse.

As far as the names, they may be the same name, but they aren't the same characters.

Hmm, I'd suggest at least changing the names because even if the characters themselves are different it still relates too heavily to Buffy and may create issues.

[mcklan]

i wont to read more xd xd

[Enchantress Sabel]

OK, I know it's taking forever on chapter thirteen. Hey, unlucky thirteen, right? I'm sorry, I really do apologize. Anyway, I have a question for you all.
Who should Callie end up with at the end of the story? And I'd also like to know why you picked who you did.
OK, I'm sure I've put this in a poll SOMEWHERE. But I want to know your opinion.
Looking forward to hearing from you.

[Enchantress Sabel]

mcklan

i wont to read more xd xd

I hope it hasn't been too long of a wait and lost your interest

[Enchantress Sabel]

went through and fixed some typos I noticed.

[faded paintings]

Great! Keep writing!

[Enchantress Sabel]

currybun

Great! Keep writing!

thank you

[Enchantress Sabel]

~<3~ heart ~<3~
shouldn't be too much longer on chapter 13, I hope
~<3~ heart ~<3~

[divine_chaos666]

i can't wait^^

[Enchantress Sabel]

For those of you who have been waiting, Chapter Thirteen is now posted. I hope you like it!

[Enchantress Sabel]

Anyone want to comment on Chapter 13?

[drummergirl_4ever]

Where is the new chapter? question sweatdrop question