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Wanna hear a secret? You still can't spell!

As an artist who was looking for a comic writer just a few days ago, I came across your thread and took just 2 minutes before moving on.

You don't care. You don't care about good grammar or spelling, and that to me is the sign of a lazy writer. As an artist, I don't want a lazy writer. Why should I pour out my heart and sweat blood over a comic where the writer won't even take a few extra minutes to spellcheck his work?

The people here have given you good advice to make yourself more appealing to comic artists. However, you blatantly refuse to listen to them or give any careful consideration. If you want to keep being an artist-less comic writer, then by all means, continue bringing out s**t. No decent artist will want to partner with you if you keep acting like a child.

Unless one is in politics, one eventually figures out that what EVERYONE is telling them just MIGHT BE TRUE.

OP, your spelling sucks, your story sucks, and your attitude sucks. No one here has said otherwise. Do you think that, maybe, even though this is "a random bunch of people you don't know," they just might be on to something? If you don't want everyone to regard you as a complete moron, you should probably not present yourself to everyone as a complete moron.

And I have yet to see, on base of concept, spelling, grammar, or grasp of the English language in general, any evidence that you would be a writer worth working with.

Sure, I do edit a bit on what my writer sends me, and occasionally correct a spelling or make a sentence flow better. But the thing to remember is that I edit only a LITTLE. God, I can't imagine what working with you would be like... your artist would spend probably 75% of their work time working on deciphering just what the ******** you were trying to say, another 15% of their time trying to make it actually make sense and not suck, and 5% of their time doing the actual drawing. And considering how much time is involved in drawing a comic page... that's a shitload of time spent deciphering your garbage.

Do everyone a favor, take your attitude and go home. You can come back to the playground when you grow up a little bit, you're not ready.

You seem like a real fun person to work with, I can't see why artists aren't breaking down your door.

What's perfatinole? I seriously don't know D: Good spelling would make people understand you (I'm not even talking about how that's unattractive for an artist that is looking for a writer, that was said before)

You came here to ask people's opinions, but you can't accept them. I seriously can't think of a way to make your story better, because... well, I don't like it at all :/ Reborn! is silly but enjoyable. Now with a story like yours, I sincerely wouldn't read that comic.

Yes, I chose my words badly. But you did eventually ask for our opinion on how your plot could improve.

I would also like to know what you tried to spell with 'perfatinole'. My native language is not English, and now I'm curious

P.S. - If you ever post again bring a new idea or be explicit about not wanting opinions about the plot. But do change your attitude and spell correctly. Writers should spell correctly, no matter the place.

P.S.S - I reported your PM.