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The best proof of concept you have is an extremely rough premise. Comparing it to the idea behind Hitman Reborn!, we can only see that they are remarkably similar. The fact that you flipped the ******** out instead of keeping your head cool shows that you probably lack the maturity to get this done.

When you pitch an idea, expect people to find an example of something that feels similar to your pitch. They will then question what makes yours special. Your job is to convince people that not only is your idea thought out but that you are worth working with to complete it.

You want a Japanese character but you did not do the research to make him believable to anyone who isn't an idiot who squeals with glee at the idea of reading something about someone who is Japanese. You don't bother to spell correctly or use proper grammar. Worst of all, you act like a four-year-old whose parents refused to buy them candy at the supermarket and now you want the world to shut up.

Get the ******** over yourself. You are not a special little snowflake.

Jesus. What browser are you using? Upgrade to something with integrated spellheck, because this is just embarrassing.

And they've told you what they think you can do to improve this concept. Namely, come up with something else. Go back and re-read the first few replies. Even if you weren't aware of the similarity between your potential comic and the Shonen Jump comic everyone is mentioning, it's best to concede to the better-known property.

Wrong. A real writer that takes real pride in their work pours thought into every word and sentence that they type. They make sure that they have communicated their idea in the clearest manner possible; they double- and triple-check for embarrassing misspellings and other typos; they re-read three or four times to make sure that every idea flows well and is phrased the best possible way. Everything you type, literally, is representative of you as a writer -- and I mean "literally" there in the traditional sense, instead of as a generic intensifier. If you don't care enough about your writing to make sure that your forum posts are understandable, what the hell good are you?

Never going to change, eh? Enjoy being a horrible writer forever.

Even if the internet isn't all serious, your spelling, grammar, and overall tone is how you represent yourself to the world. If it types like an idiot, acts like an idiot, and sounds like an idiot, what must it be???

(hint: an idiot)

(hint: that idiot is you)