this beat i made

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sounds like it was made for a rapist

[GhostlyMark]

reminds me of this video



oh god....i've got goosebumps gonk

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eek ok holy s**t i said rapist not 6 a headed monster leading gordon with a porn soundtrack

thats some s**t you see aliens do to people in movies xD

[Doc Dee]

Couldn't peep, Chrome didn't like the link

But still, you wouldn't make a beat for me

Am I REALLY that bad? Be honest. Be BRUTALLY honest.

[GhostlyMark]

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eek ok holy s**t i said rapist not 6 a headed monster leading gordon with a porn soundtrack

thats some s**t you see aliens do to people in movies xD

Good thing it's dead emotion_donotwant

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Doc Dee

Couldn't peep, Chrome didn't like the link

But still, you wouldn't make a beat for me

Am I REALLY that bad? Be honest. Be BRUTALLY honest.

make you a beat? damn i totattly forgot, i got you in a few until you find one. i cant listen to soundcloud so i downloaded throw away raps 4.your flow is ON POINT, you have good hooks! but i must stress this WORK ON YOUR CADENCE EXTREMELYYYYYY ESPECIALLY to make up for the lack of mic quality cause thats unfortunately a big turn off. example in bigger threat at the end when you said "******** outta here dude" use that voice, its more live, its a good sounding voice, but if want to keep using your voice "nasally" try putting more bass in at the same time see how that sounds? make more fun tracks like you did in luscious v, but don't laugh so loud lol. but yea cadence first thing i learned from my brother who has a very strong voice so its easy for him, but the more you try to strengthen your voice the stronger it gets. example if you've seen that art of rap documentary by ice t & they were talking (i think with chuck d) about how strong melle mel's voice is that he can talk over the equipment, thats what i mean, cause its easy to miss the most random syllables you said. maybe im trying to say have a more powerful & precise/sharp pronunciation. makes it easier to master. my criticism.

ps. you should jump on less instrumentals? Where do i send you beats at? & tryna reach the peak is cool

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GhostlyMark

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eek ok holy s**t i said rapist not 6 a headed monster leading gordon with a porn soundtrack

thats some s**t you see aliens do to people in movies xD

Good thing it's dead emotion_donotwant

but the doc dee.stroyed himself emo

[Doc Dee]

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Doc Dee

Couldn't peep, Chrome didn't like the link

But still, you wouldn't make a beat for me

Am I REALLY that bad? Be honest. Be BRUTALLY honest.

make you a beat? damn i totattly forgot, i got you in a few until you find one. i cant listen to soundcloud so i downloaded throw away raps 4.your flow is ON POINT, you have good hooks! but i must stress this WORK ON YOUR CADENCE EXTREMELYYYYYY ESPECIALLY to make up for the lack of mic quality cause thats unfortunately a big turn off. example in bigger threat at the end when you said "******** outta here dude" use that voice, its more live, its a good sounding voice, but if want to keep using your voice "nasally" try putting more bass in at the same time see how that sounds? make more fun tracks like you did in luscious v, but don't laugh so loud lol. but yea cadence first thing i learned from my brother who has a very strong voice so its easy for him, but the more you try to strengthen your voice the stronger it gets. example if you've seen that art of rap documentary by ice t & they were talking (i think with chuck d) about how strong melle mel's voice is that he can talk over the equipment, thats what i mean, cause its easy to miss the most random syllables you said. maybe im trying to say have a more powerful & precise/sharp pronunciation. makes it easier to master. my criticism.

ps. you should jump on less instrumentals? Where do i send you beats at? & tryna reach the peak is cool

I have not seen the Art of Rap, as much as I wanted to.

Also, my voice is different on every s**t I record, as far as I can tell. It mostly depends on the beat and the track etc. But word, you say "put some bass into it," fine.

Also, CADENCE?! My cadence is FLAWLESS, if anything you mean enunciation. Plus, that laugh at the end of Luscious V was genuine. I was literally cracking myself up over that stupid s**t.

It's hard for me to enunciate s**t SUPER CLEARLY. But honestly, most of my favorites can't do much better, and I've heard far worse (IH YUU A TOHH NOHH BIHH, LEMEHEYEHAWLLA etc.)

NOT THAT THAT'S AN EXCUSE, just saying it's very difficult for me.

Also what do you mean, "jump on less instrumentals"?

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Doc Dee

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Doc Dee

Couldn't peep, Chrome didn't like the link

But still, you wouldn't make a beat for me

Am I REALLY that bad? Be honest. Be BRUTALLY honest.

make you a beat? damn i totattly forgot, i got you in a few until you find one. i cant listen to soundcloud so i downloaded throw away raps 4.your flow is ON POINT, you have good hooks! but i must stress this WORK ON YOUR CADENCE EXTREMELYYYYYY ESPECIALLY to make up for the lack of mic quality cause thats unfortunately a big turn off. example in bigger threat at the end when you said "******** outta here dude" use that voice, its more live, its a good sounding voice, but if want to keep using your voice "nasally" try putting more bass in at the same time see how that sounds? make more fun tracks like you did in luscious v, but don't laugh so loud lol. but yea cadence first thing i learned from my brother who has a very strong voice so its easy for him, but the more you try to strengthen your voice the stronger it gets. example if you've seen that art of rap documentary by ice t & they were talking (i think with chuck d) about how strong melle mel's voice is that he can talk over the equipment, thats what i mean, cause its easy to miss the most random syllables you said. maybe im trying to say have a more powerful & precise/sharp pronunciation. makes it easier to master. my criticism.

ps. you should jump on less instrumentals? Where do i send you beats at? & tryna reach the peak is cool

I have not seen the Art of Rap, as much as I wanted to.

Also, my voice is different on every s**t I record, as far as I can tell. It mostly depends on the beat and the track etc. But word, you say "put some bass into it," fine.

Also, CADENCE?! My cadence is FLAWLESS, if anything you mean enunciation. Plus, that laugh at the end of Luscious V was genuine. I was literally cracking myself up over that stupid s**t.

It's hard for me to enunciate s**t SUPER CLEARLY. But honestly, most of my favorites can't do much better, and I've heard far worse (IH YUU A TOHH NOHH BIHH, LEMEHEYEHAWLLA etc.)

NOT THAT THAT'S AN EXCUSE, just saying it's very difficult for me.

Also what do you mean, "jump on less instrumentals"?

YES ENUNCIATION! lol your favorite artist has good a** mics thats why it doesn't matter to them. its been getting harder for me recently cause i haven't recorded in months. what state you livin in? & less instrumentals cause if you rap on someone's favorite song, they're gonna compare you...so with that already known knowledge use it to your advantage. oh and i guess i should upload a folder and pm it?

[Doc Dee]

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Doc Dee

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Doc Dee

Couldn't peep, Chrome didn't like the link

But still, you wouldn't make a beat for me

Am I REALLY that bad? Be honest. Be BRUTALLY honest.

make you a beat? damn i totattly forgot, i got you in a few until you find one. i cant listen to soundcloud so i downloaded throw away raps 4.your flow is ON POINT, you have good hooks! but i must stress this WORK ON YOUR CADENCE EXTREMELYYYYYY ESPECIALLY to make up for the lack of mic quality cause thats unfortunately a big turn off. example in bigger threat at the end when you said "******** outta here dude" use that voice, its more live, its a good sounding voice, but if want to keep using your voice "nasally" try putting more bass in at the same time see how that sounds? make more fun tracks like you did in luscious v, but don't laugh so loud lol. but yea cadence first thing i learned from my brother who has a very strong voice so its easy for him, but the more you try to strengthen your voice the stronger it gets. example if you've seen that art of rap documentary by ice t & they were talking (i think with chuck d) about how strong melle mel's voice is that he can talk over the equipment, thats what i mean, cause its easy to miss the most random syllables you said. maybe im trying to say have a more powerful & precise/sharp pronunciation. makes it easier to master. my criticism.

ps. you should jump on less instrumentals? Where do i send you beats at? & tryna reach the peak is cool

I have not seen the Art of Rap, as much as I wanted to.

Also, my voice is different on every s**t I record, as far as I can tell. It mostly depends on the beat and the track etc. But word, you say "put some bass into it," fine.

Also, CADENCE?! My cadence is FLAWLESS, if anything you mean enunciation. Plus, that laugh at the end of Luscious V was genuine. I was literally cracking myself up over that stupid s**t.

It's hard for me to enunciate s**t SUPER CLEARLY. But honestly, most of my favorites can't do much better, and I've heard far worse (IH YUU A TOHH NOHH BIHH, LEMEHEYEHAWLLA etc.)

NOT THAT THAT'S AN EXCUSE, just saying it's very difficult for me.

Also what do you mean, "jump on less instrumentals"?

YES ENUNCIATION! lol your favorite artist has good a** mics thats why it doesn't matter to them. its been getting harder for me recently cause i haven't recorded in months. what state you livin in? & less instrumentals cause if you rap on someone's favorite song, they're gonna compare you...so with that already known knowledge use it to your advantage. oh and i guess i should upload a folder and pm it?

I'm in Colorado. Still can't afford a fancy a** mic setup because I bust my a** for what little money I get.

Also yeah, the instrumental thing makes sense, but that's why that's Throw Away Raps, honestly.

If you REALLY gonna send me beats, you could e-mail them, or upload them to divshare and PM a link to that folder, if you're srs about it, whatever.

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sounds like an intro to some MF DOOM song. lol