Funspoiler
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- Posted: Sat, 21 Jul 2012 11:06:14 +0000
X-Armored Pillow-X
i'll break down both of them...
The s**t you type is the worst game,
You couldn't be number ONE if KRS was your first name.good start xD
Ready yourself for some psychological pain, I'll beat you out of your brain,
with lyrics to drive you insanethe multi-syllables are nice but you shoulda put on more rhyme in there. To think you're at the top, you must be sniffin' rock.
I'll break through all frames, you wannabe killer stick to your Call of Duty games.
Regardless of your claims, I'll inject your veins and set your entire body to flames.
These growing pains make me wanna splatter your brains, I'm breaking these chains,
And stabbing these lames with words to make people forget all their names.the last part wasnt so shiny but it was good enough.put more multi-syllables in there.one per line or,like me,two per line biggrinthis had to be done razz that houston guy is garbage.sorry,but its the truth xD
Agreed.
Pillow, what did your lovely intelligent mind think of the verse?
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X-Armored Pillow-X
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HOUstone STUnna
straight from the north of h town texashouston,we have a problem..., where most fake f**gots start thinkin their the bestesthe what?, but get put down and spit on from real ***** rapperscan ya find one for me?, just rapin and killin em like we were some mo'fo campers..., just killin every beet beat with each flow i spit, while yall singin bout love tryin to make another hit, im not ordanary extoranaryspell checks are boring..., i aint a simple lil flower, i speak threw the rhythem and start makin the clow colder, and hitin hard like a baseball game and makin homeruns, and anything thing your thinkin of doing its been done...and?lol, but the first mc to make it to the topwhere? with just flowin with greatness doctor seuss rhymes not even sniffin rock, maybe smokin pot but getin blowed keeps you steady, be prepaired for when i come cuz most niggas arnt readyfor how bad you suck... and just doughtlololololololololol go back to school son. my inner skill sayin i dont got talentyou dont have talent., but when i drop it on the trackyou're a stripper? xD, their lil spits cant handle this you spit bars...the kind that get handled lol man s**t i talk about and lettin you know, you better think twise befor you ******** with baby breezie to a flow. . . ughhdone takin that s**t?cause thats all you just gave us...
The s**t you type is the worst game,
You couldn't be number ONE if KRS was your first name.good start xD
Ready yourself for some psychological pain, I'll beat you out of your brain,
with lyrics to drive you insanethe multi-syllables are nice but you shoulda put on more rhyme in there. To think you're at the top, you must be sniffin' rock.
I'll break through all frames, you wannabe killer stick to your Call of Duty games.
Regardless of your claims, I'll inject your veins and set your entire body to flames.
These growing pains make me wanna splatter your brains, I'm breaking these chains,
And stabbing these lames with words to make people forget all their names.the last part wasnt so shiny but it was good enough.put more multi-syllables in there.one per line or,like me,two per line biggrin
Agreed.
Pillow, what did your lovely intelligent mind think of the verse?
I laughed my d**k off at your comments to his.