The Freeflow Sticky

[Samurai Rhythm]

Sir Vanity

Samurai Rhythm

LonelyAznBulldog_OutKast

Quote:

What was this? A rhyme or an idiotic rant?

Maybe its both.

1. Remove this unseen target or object you're attacking with your words in your rhymes.
2. Lose the constant, stereotypical use of profane words, there are plenty of other more creative words in your vocabulary to choose from!
3. Write about what you know. Things you've seen, memories, events, possessions, dreams, goals, struggles, etc.
4. Start off writing your rhymes in couplets, focusing only on end rhyme. This allows you to get control over rhythm & flow while still comfortably getting your ideas across to an audience.

If you're new to emceeing, I will help you improve.

Those are all good tips. I'll keep them in mind.
I'm new myself..well..a bit more like a repeat offender.
As in I've tried and failed multiple times before.

I'm glad you can gain something from this advice. I'd be more than happy to provide more assistance and just general tips if you'd like.

Have fun with it. Remember, Rap is the only genre of music where lyrics make up 70% of the song...so you can rhyme about ANYTHING.
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@Lil Demyn: Ok, give me a short while and I'll write a new verse for you to compare your skills with mine.

Just finished. Enjoy.

Smooth is the diction and conviction of my words,
soar through the sky like the wings of a bird.
Feathered ends, piles of pages written on
with feather-pens, merge timelines of all artists-
so we'll paint together, then.

It is an instinct to find a distinct style,
rethink previous thinking, blink twice and smile.
Chill for a while, lie in the colors, breathe in
and saturate your mind with what you've discovered:

A new world, a realm full of a wonder.
Where rhymes produce wind, rain & thunder.
New natural forces to build bridges of life,
now write a second verse and give Music a wife.

[Avery Jones]

I retract my bet... with that sweet a** poem
since you seemed to show signs of being in line with other fe-mi-nines
I suggest you retract and head over whre they love to show'm
and since you countered my mans rhymes with the dipped in tea
why dont we go back to spittin lines about bitches and nines, and weed for free


<,<
[--]

[Lil_Demyn]

Samurai Rhythm

Sir Vanity

Samurai Rhythm

LonelyAznBulldog_OutKast

Quote:

What was this? A rhyme or an idiotic rant?

Maybe its both.

1. Remove this unseen target or object you're attacking with your words in your rhymes.
2. Lose the constant, stereotypical use of profane words, there are plenty of other more creative words in your vocabulary to choose from!
3. Write about what you know. Things you've seen, memories, events, possessions, dreams, goals, struggles, etc.
4. Start off writing your rhymes in couplets, focusing only on end rhyme. This allows you to get control over rhythm & flow while still comfortably getting your ideas across to an audience.

If you're new to emceeing, I will help you improve.

Those are all good tips. I'll keep them in mind.
I'm new myself..well..a bit more like a repeat offender.
As in I've tried and failed multiple times before.

I'm glad you can gain something from this advice. I'd be more than happy to provide more assistance and just general tips if you'd like.

Have fun with it. Remember, Rap is the only genre of music where lyrics make up 70% of the song...so you can rhyme about ANYTHING.
--------

@Lil Demyn: Ok, give me a short while and I'll write a new verse for you to compare your skills with mine.

Just finished. Enjoy.

Smooth is the diction and conviction of my words,
soar through the sky like the wings of a bird.
Feathered ends, piles of pages written on
with feather-pens, merge timelines of all artists-
so we'll paint together, then.

It is an instinct to find a distinct style,
rethink previous thinking, blink twice and smile.
Chill for a while, lie in the colors, breathe in
and saturate your mind with what you've discovered:

A new world, a realm full of a wonder.
Where rhymes produce wind, rain & thunder.
New natural forces to build bridges of life,
now write a second verse and give Music a wife.

you should thank me for those internal instincts/
cuz i'm so old school,i'm the missing link/
last of a dying breed i'm nearly extinct/
history's full of you haters po lil tink tink/

I'll take you off ya legs/
wit a uppercut from some pegs/
that'll leave ya a block away ghostriding your head/
grinding like clinton you sliding on ya neck/

ride around town on that dam i'm fly feelin/
i'm hip hop superhero lemme stand on my building/
smoke on my blunt wit that dam i'm high feelin
look down and see that man hatin fans in my vision/
so i land behind that sneaky underhanded sly villain
give it up,
the jig is up Samurai Rhythm/

can somebody tell me what crew Samurai is in/
cuz samurai's a lil p***y,i mean Samurai's kittens/
i am a sabretooth tiger Samurai's mittens
even asian bulldogs like dam that guy killed em/
like I'm Vegeta and Samurai's Krillin/
he can use the timechamber to magnify his bland skillz in/
stay in there for a hundred years times a million/
crowdsurfin the whole time still nobody'll feel him/

you beat me pinch yaself boy ya just dreamin/
my style so fly even when it's down it's jetstreamin/
ya mad stuck on the ground just screamin/
"I'LL GET YOU NEXT TIME LIL DEMYN!!!

[Lil_Demyn]

Samurai Rhythm

Sir Vanity

Samurai Rhythm

LonelyAznBulldog_OutKast

Quote:

What was this? A rhyme or an idiotic rant?

Maybe its both.

1. Remove this unseen target or object you're attacking with your words in your rhymes.
2. Lose the constant, stereotypical use of profane words, there are plenty of other more creative words in your vocabulary to choose from!
3. Write about what you know. Things you've seen, memories, events, possessions, dreams, goals, struggles, etc.
4. Start off writing your rhymes in couplets, focusing only on end rhyme. This allows you to get control over rhythm & flow while still comfortably getting your ideas across to an audience.

If you're new to emceeing, I will help you improve.

Those are all good tips. I'll keep them in mind.
I'm new myself..well..a bit more like a repeat offender.
As in I've tried and failed multiple times before.

I'm glad you can gain something from this advice. I'd be more than happy to provide more assistance and just general tips if you'd like.

Have fun with it. Remember, Rap is the only genre of music where lyrics make up 70% of the song...so you can rhyme about ANYTHING.
--------

@Lil Demyn: Ok, give me a short while and I'll write a new verse for you to compare your skills with mine..

wait you given lessons now xd what are ya hip hops Dahlia lama rofl get the ******** outta here

[Shin Maikaru]

I punt midgets/ Over the distance of London Bridges...
Watchin'em s**t they britches/ Beatin' MCs with in inches...
Of they life on the MIC/ I EXCITE amidst the NIGHT...
But it ends in FRIGHT/ Cause I finger'em with a KNIFE...
Now that's for-play FOUL/ Now that's word play, WOW!
All for words movin' foreword/ THAT's my forte now...
HEY! No horsePLAY! But I pin the tail on the donKEY...
Always give the banana up RIGHT to the monKEY...
I'm on key/ Lo-key with a kilo of that PREMO...
Gettin' higher then inhalin HELIUM while in a HELO!
Killin' motha ******** beLOW/ But keep it on the d-LO...
Both my BALLS and THEE-flow more Grande than the RIO...
You know the steelo/ Humbled swag with a bit of ego...
Followed by two or three ho's/ No matter where the ******** he go...
They tickle balls while I piss on bras like "la-di-da~"
Then I'm like the wolf in sheeps clothing b***h/ "Bah-di-bah!" 1

[2TPO]

Sir Vanity

Samurai Rhythm

LonelyAznBulldog_OutKast

Quote:

What was this? A rhyme or an idiotic rant?

Maybe its both.

1. Remove this unseen target or object you're attacking with your words in your rhymes.
2. Lose the constant, stereotypical use of profane words, there are plenty of other more creative words in your vocabulary to choose from!
3. Write about what you know. Things you've seen, memories, events, possessions, dreams, goals, struggles, etc.
4. Start off writing your rhymes in couplets, focusing only on end rhyme. This allows you to get control over rhythm & flow while still comfortably getting your ideas across to an audience.

If you're new to emceeing, I will help you improve.

Those are all good tips. I'll keep them in mind.
I'm new myself..well..a bit more like a repeat offender.
As in I've tried and failed multiple times before.

Been a while Vanity. *is Jazz from then if ya dun recall*

[2TPO]

Open Hand - No Weapon Required.

This ism isn't of a store or for a palette's core to be
Valid but exists the center of my imbalance. (Ha. Ha.)
Chemically coded for a callous behavior? I challenge
Supposed saviors that survive by the saber's salvaged.
Later to crocks caught by the card; the whole facade
Embargoed by those that live with the odds placed
In their favor elicit an almost similar behavior to that of
Favorable phantoms trying to create layers of some
Significance. That being perjury in purgatory is not the
Furthest story from the truth of a gory self murder.
Yet, remaining with a certain opinion against the dominion
Of this slaughterhouse's intent, still burgers (I Guess.)
Appeal to savagery of the moment like a buzzard after
Opponents agreed upon circumstances none over-stand.
Still I survive on the battlefield, appealing to those with
No wish of a future, which I face with open hand spoken.

But if any, preferred choice of weapon's a bokken.

[2TPO]

I hold back like old cats knowing their strengths
Where a feat of overexposure is not the same...
Phased not by provocative language, I entertain
No rubbish since I am not here for other's opinion.

[Avery Jones]

Lil_Demyn

Samurai Rhythm

Sir Vanity

Samurai Rhythm

LonelyAznBulldog_OutKast

Quote:

What was this? A rhyme or an idiotic rant?

Maybe its both.

1. Remove this unseen target or object you're attacking with your words in your rhymes.
2. Lose the constant, stereotypical use of profane words, there are plenty of other more creative words in your vocabulary to choose from!
3. Write about what you know. Things you've seen, memories, events, possessions, dreams, goals, struggles, etc.
4. Start off writing your rhymes in couplets, focusing only on end rhyme. This allows you to get control over rhythm & flow while still comfortably getting your ideas across to an audience.

If you're new to emceeing, I will help you improve.

Those are all good tips. I'll keep them in mind.
I'm new myself..well..a bit more like a repeat offender.
As in I've tried and failed multiple times before.

I'm glad you can gain something from this advice. I'd be more than happy to provide more assistance and just general tips if you'd like.

Have fun with it. Remember, Rap is the only genre of music where lyrics make up 70% of the song...so you can rhyme about ANYTHING.
--------

@Lil Demyn: Ok, give me a short while and I'll write a new verse for you to compare your skills with mine..

wait you given lessons now xd what are ya hip hops Dahlia lama rofl get the ******** outta here

4laugh rofl rofl rofl rofl lol pirate blaugh ninja emo

real

[Avery Jones]

I'm mad my last rhyme couldn't be postd
but in short you got blasted and ya mans got roasted
... if my memory wasn't thick like the tip of my d**k
I'd let you know about the s**t
somthing like... facial expressions
and this world's degressions
mind states falling, to the sight can't take no more
let the five nines take lives till we facin the door
... wel anyway it ended with...
you :pirates: with mc's on ya back no homo
need to see I'm rotfl while ya whore dramallama and I'm all domo

[Qu33nDd]

Ok I Get It,
Let Me Think, I Guess It's My Turn,
Maybe It's Time To Put This p***y On Ya Sideburns,
He Say I’m Bad, He Problly Right,
He Pressing Me Like Button Downs On A Friday Night (Ha-ha),
I'm So Pretty Like,
Be On My Pedal Bike,
Be On My Low Starch,
Be On My Ecko Whites,
He Say Nicki Don't Stop You The Bestest,
And I Just Be Coming Off The Top As-best-es.

[Lil_Demyn]

Qu33nDd

Ok I Get It,
Let Me Think, I Guess It's My Turn,
Maybe It's Time To Put This p***y On Ya Sideburns,
He Say I’m Bad, He Problly Right,
He Pressing Me Like Button Downs On A Friday Night (Ha-ha),
I'm So Pretty Like,
Be On My Pedal Bike,
Be On My Low Starch,
Be On My Ecko Whites,
He Say Nicki Don't Stop You The Bestest,
And I Just Be Coming Off The Top As-best-es.

wahmbulance we got a disturbance call about someone jackin nikki minaj lines talk2hand we must ask that you cease and desist at once xp

[Avery Jones]

Qu33nDd

Ok I Get It,
Let Me Think, I Guess It's My Turn,
Maybe It's Time To Put This p***y On Ya Sideburns,
He Say I’m Bad, He Problly Right,
He Pressing Me Like Button Downs On A Friday Night (Ha-ha),
I'm So Pretty Like,
Be On My Pedal Bike,
Be On My Low Starch,
Be On My Ecko Whites,
He Say Nicki Don't Stop You The Bestest,
And I Just Be Coming Off The Top As-best-es.

I I I I can make ya bed Rock
I can make ya bed rock girlll
I can mak ya bed rock
I can make ya Bed Rock

[Samurai Rhythm]

Avery Jones

I retract my bet... with that sweet a** poem
since you seemed to show signs of being in line with other fe-mi-nines
I suggest you retract and head over whre they love to show'm
and since you countered my mans rhymes with the dipped in tea
why dont we go back to spittin lines about bitches and nines, and weed for free


<,<
[--]

80% of that did not rhyme. Failure.

@Avery Jones: Jealous because I have the wisdom and skill to share with those who actually want to improve? While you continue to show no growth or improvement and embarrass yourself by constantly posting terrible lyrics..sad, really.

Prove yourself with a battle. I'll do audio.

[Lil_Demyn]

Samurai Rhythm

Avery Jones

I retract my bet... with that sweet a** poem
since you seemed to show signs of being in line with other fe-mi-nines
I suggest you retract and head over whre they love to show'm
and since you countered my mans rhymes with the dipped in tea
why dont we go back to spittin lines about bitches and nines, and weed for free


<,<
[--]

80% of that did not rhyme. Failure.

@Avery Jones: Jealous because I have the wisdom and skill to share with those who actually want to improve? While you continue to show no growth or improvement and embarrass yourself by constantly posting terrible lyrics..sad, really.

Prove yourself with a battle. I'll do audio.

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