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Yo, they say the third time's the charm, can't believe another verse
Coming from you, ain't you realized yet, yo a** is cursed
To be another notch on my belt, on my holster, you're a number to me
Like Danny Trejo said in Con Air, they call me Johnny 23
But the victims I'm talking about didn't come with a p***y
But a p***y coming at me like he shouldn't be
Goddamn dawg, I don't recognize you anymore
My lyrics bite your ear worse than Tyson in his Holy-war
Oops, I'm sorry, I should just slow down
The way you've gone cross-eyed, seems you've drowned
In the midst of my wit and intellect, suffocating, you can't hardly breathe
I know you're struggling with the replies you'll send to me
Don't give up, let it free, send them right to me
I'll be much obliged to shoot them back down to earth
Seems I just changed the verse's rhyme scheme
Now I've wasted enough time, my rhymes supersedes your worth

A reply in a freshly-archived thread.
Bobby Daniels
Yo, they say the third time's the charm, can't believe another verse
Coming from you, ain't you realized yet, yo a** is cursed
To be another notch on my belt, on my holster, you're a number to me
Like Danny Trejo said in Con Air, they call me Johnny 23
But the victims I'm talking about didn't come with a p***y
But a p***y coming at me like he shouldn't be
Goddamn dawg, I don't recognize you anymore
My lyrics bite your ear worse than Tyson in his Holy-war
Oops, I'm sorry, I should just slow down
The way you've gone cross-eyed, seems you've drowned
In the midst of my wit and intellect, suffocating, you can't hardly breathe
I know you're struggling with the replies you'll send to me
Don't give up, let it free, send them right to me
I'll be much obliged to shoot them back down to earth
Seems I just changed the verse's rhyme scheme
Now I've wasted enough time, my rhymes supersedes your worth

A reply in a freshly-archived thread.


This was so kickass xd
See I dunno why you keep putting yourself down, you're not as bad as you think.
This is kinda slow....
i went to town
lookin like a clown
i had a frown
then i turned brown
i went to the sto
for a pac of 24
when i was drivin home
i hit a damn deer
then i had a ******** peer

i mite b white but i'm black inside
so thats y i act the way i ******** do
what does have to do with u
b***h get back get back cuz u don't kno me like that

...peaceout....
kaylie_02
This is kinda slow....
i went to town
lookin like a clown
i had a frown
then i turned brown
i went to the sto
for a pac of 24
when i was drivin home
i hit a damn deer
then i had a ******** peer

i mite b white but i'm black inside
so thats y i act the way i ******** do
what does have to do with u
b***h get back get back cuz u don't kno me like that

...peaceout....
neutral .................HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! xd not to be mean but that sh*t sucked a** 3nodding
kaylie_02
This is kinda slow.... ( lose weight)
i went to town
lookin like a clown ( you always do...)
i had a frown ( so did everyone who saw your face)
then i turned brown ( someone shitted on you)
i went to the sto (they let you in? can't be black...)
for a pac of 24 (apple juice?)
when i was drivin home (big wheels)
i hit a damn deer (your mother)
then i had a ******** peer (get glasses)

i mite b white but i'm black inside (when i boned you)
so thats y i act the way i ******** do (cuz i boned you)
what does have to do with u ( everything, cuz i boned you)
b***h get back get back cuz u don't kno me like that (until i boned you)

...peaceout....
I'm new at this so don't be so harsh... sweatdrop






Hey, this verse might come out to be incomplete,
As soon as start that imaginary simple beat,
but you that it needs to be smooth and silky,
To come out to match with my amateur spitting,
I need someting to combust my inner self rapper,
Ignite the burning flames which move my infinite flow,
you know, i might be quite new to this game,
Like a rookie who got drafted from to the NBA,
But I'm not comepletely clueless,
I know how to do this,
I'm know not awful but I know I'm not good,
knowing this just makes me hope could be better.




I know I need a lot of practice. gonk I'm kinda young so I don't have a very good vocabulary.
Evil Twinkie
I'm new at this so don't be so harsh... sweatdrop






Hey, this verse might come out to be incomplete,
As soon as start that imaginary simple beat,
but you that it needs to be smooth and silky,
To come out to match with my amateur spitting,
I need someting to combust my inner self rapper,
Ignite the burning flames which move my infinite flow,
you know, i might be quite new to this game,
Like a rookie who got drafted from to the NBA,
But I'm not comepletely clueless,
I know how to do this,
I'm know not awful but I know I'm not good,
knowing this just makes me hope could be better.




I know I need a lot of practice. gonk I'm kinda young so I don't have a very good vocabulary.


If you say that you're not good, don't ever rap again.
Be a man, stand up, device a new plan
And comeback to hit it like a tram
The main point about rappers is that they're cocky
And that they know that they don't suck, see
They fight of attacks with passionate strength like rocky
It's time to show selfconfidence, make a stance
Or piss of, cause you never would've had a chance.
=[ SIN ]=
kaylie_02
This is kinda slow....
i went to town
lookin like a clown
i had a frown
then i turned brown
i went to the sto
for a pac of 24
when i was drivin home
i hit a damn deer
then i had a ******** peer

i mite b white but i'm black inside
so thats y i act the way i ******** do
what does have to do with u
b***h get back get back cuz u don't kno me like that

...peaceout....
neutral .................HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! xd not to be mean but that sh*t sucked a** 3nodding


I agree.
My grandma rocks her wheelchair with
more style than that. ******** weak.
zero the last decepticon
=[ SIN ]=
kaylie_02
This is kinda slow....
i went to town
lookin like a clown
i had a frown
then i turned brown
i went to the sto
for a pac of 24
when i was drivin home
i hit a damn deer
then i had a ******** peer

i mite b white but i'm black inside
so thats y i act the way i ******** do
what does have to do with u
b***h get back get back cuz u don't kno me like that

...peaceout....
neutral .................HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! xd not to be mean but that sh*t sucked a** 3nodding


I agree.
My grandma rocks her wheelchair with
more style than that. ******** weak.


Who the hell are you to talk?!?! Dissing cats who are trying to do their thing is WHACK SON. Where are your "Oh So Blessed" rhymes?
=[ SIN ]=
kaylie_02
This is kinda slow....
i went to town
lookin like a clown
i had a frown
then i turned brown
i went to the sto
for a pac of 24
when i was drivin home
i hit a damn deer
then i had a ******** peer

i mite b white but i'm black inside
so thats y i act the way i ******** do
what does have to do with u
b***h get back get back cuz u don't kno me like that

...peaceout....
neutral .................HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! xd not to be mean but that sh*t sucked a** 3nodding


Same goes for you chump... who are you to diss? I've seen your stuff... you got no right to be dissin.
Cats love to diss rhymes when they remain without skill
this is Thorn talkin' who's been known to leave entire ciphers on kill
if you really spittin' fire, why ain't you postin' without stripes
when it comes to battlin' for props on the net or real life
I do both and spit quotes to leave these cats on collapse
so ill, cats listen to my tape twice just to feel the relapse
retract any statement made trying to insult my person
'cause personally, I'll make you howl in pain like that cat named Thirsin
What's worse than facin' me in a cipher with a mic?
Maybe flippin' down the highway at 200 on a CBR bike?
Is it hittin' a propane tank with a cigarette on light?
Hell no, 'cause I do that much damage with one strike!
This is a lightweight rhyme removin' taste from the mouths of these clowns
'cause if you ain't spittin, you can't critique; sit your n00bish a** down
and take a couple of lessons from those who stay skilled in the profession
of defending themselves with wordplay usin' the mic as a weapon.
IF you wanna come to spit then stop being such a twit,
Try to use your head for once use something besides your hand and d**k,
you stay home trying to avoid you dream to rap,
Just because others say you suck or you wack,
If you don't atleast to get up and follow the rythm,
You just won't what you possibly missing,
The feeling you feeling when let out your words,
Knowing that rap aint even about the million dolla bills,
Once you start it rough just like your mamas patience,
Once you start rappin you glow like you're radient,
Then you know that you rappin wasn't a mistake,
Sometimes you think that it's your big break to develop,
You trying to growing within time knowing that your rythm gets better,
It's like you controlling the weather,
I just have to say,
I'm happy that I found my flow.
These nigas got it locked, so imma show you how to c**k~it,
If you aint spittin on this level then n***a, you need to stop it,
Imma tape a pair of shoes to your lips, cuz ya cat's mouth is runnin,
This was a quick drop from styles, yea, im still gunnin.

Wing it... b***h!
Grand Styles
These nigas got it locked, so imma show you how to c**k~it,
If you aint spittin on this level then n***a, you need to stop it,
Imma tape a pair of shoes to your lips, cuz ya cat's mouth is runnin,
This was a quick drop from styles, yea, im still gunnin.

Wing it... b***h!
heart

Cats runnin they mouth never step to the best
They step to the rest, never take up the test
Forever thinking they blessed and so it's my quest
To show them the truth, to reveal the real mess
Booboo blows off the roof, Booboo knocks out yo tooth
If you doubt my skills, battle me and see proof
I'm somewhat self-obsessed and people say I'm aloof
I don't bother correcting them, cuz hey it's the truth

xd Yeah, ok I was bored...
its always hard to keep up with the game
it never seems to stay the same
its an animal like me can never be tamed
you wanna come and try, you'll be strait up maimed
but by the time the cops come i have you up and framed
its another victory, another chapter in my story
to be put down in this crazy thing called history
to be remembered for my words and not my name
thats the way i wanna end up with this fame
show these stupid bitches how i came to play
i'll never tone down and never speak what you say
all i wanna do is sit back and smoke my jay
like homer simpsons middle name, i had to move some s**t out my way
thats you and you and you too fool
cause everything i see and hear i use as my tool
to bring you down and begin my rule.

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