The Freeflow Sticky

[chookychan]

GODDAMN IT THE s**t HAPPENS TO ME EVERY DAT ON ******** GAIA!!!!!

[Guy Friday]

M.O.P. - How About Some Hardcore

[YoUnGpInOy!]

wow its 2 in the mornin, im still on this damn computer/
old lady gettin mad cause im still loud, but screw her/
just jabberring about nothing, just so I can get some money/
saving up to buy something, something to make my avi look funny/
trying so hard to make this a long post/
so at the end, ill have the most/
haha what a stupid and simple line/
see look, im just freestyling this stupid ryme/
i wonder how much gold would i make after this is done/
so i could hurry up and spend it, then ill be back to having none/
sheesh now im bored, what else shoud i say/
may,day,gray,hay, umm for that sweatshirt, how much should i pay?/
now ill make like a banna and split/
dang im tired, ill just quit./

holla ...hahahaha. that flow sucked.

[Warped]

Ha HA...

Though some words are irrelevant, I found it to be evident that I contain more credibility than the former president before...double ya doubled the damage actin billigerent now we're at war like erry one else and fifty cent. My two cents are worth more than that game. As simple as this, most in the mainstream are lame. Only making their aim the same. So mediocre, you'd think that they thought with one brain. Oh the pain...Too many are caught in the flow and more immature midgets mesmerized by the radio hoes. Bro's no longer lookin to rock a fro with too many corn rows. They've got to go if they don't fit the image than don't wear the shoes. These kinda people givin true artist the blues. Bad news for you dudes who think they are the rules think twice before I demolish these fools. One by one, two by three, however you wanna do this thing is cool with me. More cocky than your momma know. Don't give me that drama though just cause I'm mockin these people blatantly. Some quite don't see that it's the flip side of J A Z Z. Forget the peace talk, I'm pimpin in my walk. In short out of the way, you gettin me? If you not then you catchin the back of my hand and get in cardiac arrest quicker than the man will decide to fire about five rounds because you disturbin peace and plans. Stomp you out? that's just a waste of time. I know you gotta get yours but I gotta get mine, so to start yo ole lady's half of my dyme where she'll be makin that money in no time. "Ha HA" Let that little laugh echo projected through my ego, surpass what we call evil. It's almost like I don't give a damn about friends, family, associates and none of you people. Jump in like Mr. Kinevil doin dear devil tricks, then later on the side doin tricks for free cause they like my style so I don gotta pay. They yellin more than "YES" when I ask are you feelin me. That's just it and all about the flow, aint in the mood to discuss any differences with any of these pitches bein thrown my way. I'll hit any so hard they wish they never was.

That was sick...as well as wack. I fell out in more than one places, even I know that. xp

Gimme some feed.

[DuckiiEgg]

ummm... one problem here...how can you battle if there is no voice? i mean is that some people to need to here the flow- (like me)

[Warped]

Dragon Stylez

ummm... one problem here...how can you battle if there is no voice? i mean is that some people to need to here the flow- (like me)

Hoshite...if I'm not mistaken, you changed your avy around almost entirely if I'm not correct.

[J.P.C.]

Notorious_J.P.C

Alright I'm gonna go ahead and change my style a bit so don't be suprised if this this looks like crap.
Beat: Dead Presidents

Check it out,
Life in the word it what it SEEMS, Very time I go to bed I see the same DREAMS/
I see myself in a country during a war and hearing everyone's SCREAMS/
It ain't somethin I usually like to dream about but it might be one of God's SHCEME'S/
But I still gotta SAY/,
Even as as it might look bad now HE's been telling me somthing every night and DAY/
HE's been telling me to do somthing, help the world and keep it from a DISSARAY/
So I just gotta make it, out in the open but not as missionary but as NOTORIOUS J/
I'd rather be my own man doing what I want to do, but things come first even when thigs look GREY/
Even as I write rhymes like THIS, I still gotta help everyone have some sort of BLISS/
Even as I REMINISCE, I take a look at my life and see if it was worth taking a DISS/
I'll spill my own blood for my family but would I do it for someone I know as good as the ABYSS?/
Heh I hope I'l ever have to KNOW, but is giving up my life somthing I should THROW?/
I remember one of the dreams I was on a PLEATU, seein heaven above and hell BELOW/
This only happened 3 AGO, but it'll always be with me like a Chef has DOUGH/
I won't have all the answer to the world , but I all I KNOW for sure is that I finshed this:
NTELLECTUAL, CRITICAL, THOUGHTFUL, DREAMFUL, CONTROVERSIAL, FLOW/


I wasn't sure about this style so I want feedback on what you tought.
EDIT biggrin S how do you rap like this? Its too much of a pain to capitlize the letters gonk

Can people tell me what I need to work on? confused

[SP1K3thalyrical]

Gaia part 1
Posting, and checkin out the forum.
Tryin to help gaia, but the people, they ignore 'em,
Gaia just refused the wig feature,
"Realistic?" We don't care!This is our leisure!
I would donate for the wig petition, just to get it,
But probly won't happen, so i guess i'll spit it,
Go to gamblino island, gett updated on the plot,
but while your doin that, my spittin won't stop,
About the admins, I hope they're sober,
Now, guess what, part 1 is over!

I'll do another one when i feel like it.

[EstelT]

spike can you still change back to your old hair style?

[SP1K3thalyrical]

EstelT

spike can you still change back to your old hair style?

I would need to save a bit.I'm probbably gonna stick with this till i want to wear a hat.
Then i'll get sleek.

[EstelT]

SpikeDawg9

EstelT

spike can you still change back to your old hair style?

I would need to save a bit.I'm probbably gonna stick with this till i want to wear a hat.
Then i'll get sleek.

so you basically have to buy the sleek again.

[chookychan]

[******** the police pullin a n***a over when he dint do s**t/
it makes life a b***h/
make a n***a pull a gun out of his hip/
and shoot a clip/
into a cop and dip/
but for that s**t/
(heres were I go fast)
you' ll get sentenced to a quartar centery/
in maximum security/
then life gets so blurry/
and you'll neva escape the fury/
that fate gave ya, and the lure/
into the torchor/
you'll neva move forard/
(normal speed)
just tword/
hell, like a spell/
bieing in hood
it anit good/
bining a gangsta ain't that cool/
stick to school/
neva to drugs or violace/
Just like I did/
get out that s**t/



please rate it, Thanks.

any one tell me something

[C00l Aid]

Only One On The Streets Who Can 'Turn On A Mac' And Leave Ya 'Shut Down'
A Dud Now...Wouldn't 'Be On My Tracks' If Ya Brought A Bunch A 'Bloodhounds'!!
Ta Scare Swine It's 'Simple Division' Cuz I 'Cut Em Down In Their Prime'
I Get 'Frequent Flyer Miles' Cuz All My Tracks Get So Much 'Airtime'!!
I Stay 'Keepin My Sweater Down' Cuz I Got The 'Hood On Ma Back'
C00l Aid's 'Its Own Nation' So Its Only Certain I'ma Be 'Put On The Map'!!
Check This Material Cuz My Punchlines Get 'Passed Around' Like A 'Texas Venereal'
No 'Lucky Charms' At 'Crunchtime' I 'Serve Up More Trix' Then 'Breakfast Wit Cereal'!!
You Naysayer...I'ma Great Slayer Straight Sprayer Fates Payer
Wait, They're...Havin 'More Hawks On They Helmets' Then 'Florida State Players'!!

[Constance14]

I'm turnin' da "burbs" into the hoods of my youth// Cops still tryin' to figure out who puttin' graffiti on houses pledgin', "This is my F*ckin' Truth"// As I smoke down da street, tryin' to form an old alliance// Where da big bang theory is a bullet in the brain not a theory to science// I'ma get my name known, as fools try to slip up on our small territory in da neighbahood park// They scramblin' when we pop .22, lightweight, on my waist, I got trix scared of the dark// Run with a crew formed from my family of the Piedmont Court// When we see the "P.D." comin' we like underage mothers wit babies, all we do is scream "ABORT ABORT!"// I don't like da burbs, so I'm gettin' sent to my fatha// They tryin' to put me back in therapy, I scream, "Why botha!"// They say why you hustlin'? I thought you was gone stop smokin' and drinkin'?"// I answer, without a lil' somethin' somethin' I got problems thinkin'// I know I ain't gotta do it no' mo'. I mean I can do somethin' great// But in all, I 'm scared, this mostly what I grew up wit, but it ain't too late// Go to church, listen to a preacher maybe that's what I should do// But then again, i sit in the front pew, lookin' towards heaven and sayin', "I can't hear you!"

[Constance14]

Dragon Stylez

ummm... one problem here...how can you battle if there is no voice? i mean is that some people to need to here the flow- (like me)

D*mn, you gotta point, kid. Anyways, why you put me in yo thang anyways? Whateva, bump it then I'm just gone type some sh*t, ya feel me.