NEW SONG "TATTOOS" by TYRIEK [Prod. by ROYAL PELT]

[Zev Love X]

Just finish a new song tell me what you guys think, I'm experimenting a little.

Lyrics by Tyriek a.k.a Zev Love X on Gaia
Buttery Beat by Royal Pelt a.k.a Tripcode on Gaia (http://www.soundcloud.com/quasr)

Her heart throbbed for the Proverbs that were tatted
The dangling thought of marriage was her proverbial carrot
But when she said, "I love you", all she really ever heard was an echo
Couldn't let go of the proverbial parrot
Her soul sung for the Psalms that were etched in
Palm reading for answers that were better left as questions
A startled expression
To find his and her love line was declined from ever having connections
Selections of manifestos
Carved on the flesh of a n***a sexing the next hoe
Marks that suggest
That his scribbled scripts had the bitches scribbling digits
And painted the vivid picture of them giving him kisses
Now she's getting suspicious, yup, the writings on the wall
It's all so superstitious, now they're fighting over calls
And she's falling from cloud nine from a single text message
Saying she feels blessed by the way his texts caresses
All she have left is tattoos

Tattoos, tattoos...scars from bad dudes
Tattoos, tattoos...scars from bad dudes

[Im So Diabolic]

Yoo s**t's Banging . Imma Be Singing This s**t At School ;D

[Zev Love X]

Im So Diabolic

Yoo s**t's Banging . Imma Be Singing This s**t At School ;D

Thanks, it's not really mainstream and it's on a slower pace than what most people like, but to me it's one of those songs I can listen to while walking around campus taking my time to the next class.

[tripcode]

I like this a lot man, definitely has some def jam spoken word attributes and I like that a lot man. The lyrics were good, for sure. I like the message you implied.

[Zev Love X]

tripcode

I like this a lot man, definitely has some def jam spoken word attributes and I like that a lot man. The lyrics were good, for sure. I like the message you implied.

Yea I know what you mean by the poetry slam vibe, I was kind of going for that cause first and foremost I'm a poet turned rapper. Is there anything you thought I should've changed or done, I'm all for constructive criticism.

[tripcode]

I think it might have been better if you'd started the verse later and ended over the part where the vocals come in along with the "BONJOURNO PRINCIPESSA!" sample

But it sounds good as it is, must think it would have been cool to have the last part match up over the kicks and the vocal harmonies.

[Zev Love X]

tripcode

I think it might have been better if you'd started the verse later and ended over the part where the vocals come in along with the "BONJOURNO PRINCIPESSA!" sample

But it sounds good as it is, must think it would have been cool to have the last part match up over the kicks and the vocal harmonies.

Yea, I see, ending it where the sampled vocals started would've gave it that punch. I tried writing lines that would go over the vocal harmonies but the sound became way too clutter when I tried to rap over it. But now I'm think I could've done either actual spoken words or a repetitive phrase like I started at the end.

[tripcode]

You might be right though, I could imagine having three male voices in one area in a mix making it sounds pretty bad considering they're all taking up a lot of the same frequencies.

[Zev Love X]

Well hopefully people will enjoy it....if not at least appreciate it for some of its qualities, at the very most the amazing production.

[tripcode]

Haha the production is far from amazing but thanks man, you done good. Keep up the good work, you're good with words and your frodo line still makes me chuckle haha.

[Nakeyya]

perfect heart
i love it.
honestly i do.

[Eken]

Yo man, underground like bam, but I like it. Hits home like fam!
I'm gonna keep an eye on you.

[Zev Love X]

Eken

Yo man, underground like bam, but I like it. Hits home like fam!
I'm gonna keep an eye on you.

Thanks a lot man, I'll try to make my music better and better

[Zev Love X]

Nakeyya

perfect heart
i love it.
honestly i do.

It's not perfect, but I do have perfection as a muse smile

[Im So Diabolic]

Zev Love X

Im So Diabolic

Yoo s**t's Banging . Imma Be Singing This s**t At School ;D

Thanks, it's not really mainstream and it's on a slower pace than what most people like, but to me it's one of those songs I can listen to while walking around campus taking my time to the next class.

Yeaa , My Mom Likes It ;P