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Thunder Foot
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wow, i was actually invited to join a thread...thanks Thunder Foot for your words. I'll try to be around as much as i can considering i'm mostly busy at work and with serious personal problems.


No problem. It would be nice to hear some of your stuff. I just wish more people would frequent the thread, to keep the cypher flowing.


Well i'll come with something i can get started here. lately it's been nothing but disses considering those are so easy.

Going to be busy as well most of the week but something will come about.
But when I die I won't be ready to give it up,
world's big, I'm small, but I'll keep steppin up,
to the plate, the date my grandfather died, I know I cried,
cuz I was hopeless, had lost my focus,
but wouldn't dare breakdown for clowns in the background,
looking for my frowns, I held crowns up high*
my face knew only smiles, as I watched the night sky,
Wish I knew what the future held but not really
hurtful feelings I'm sealing away for later days...

I know it sucks, but I was asked to join in on this... so yeah

* My name means crown, so I held myself up
The quotes of my favourite emcee's litter my wall...
When i focus my thoughts, They tend to fall...
Mental powers are so much better than flowwing out words...
Like a double edged sword, I control herds...
But am i being controled by the sheep I beat...
Or do I bring them pain, like confinment in heat...

((I like when we stray from battle raps...more mentaly chalanging...tho mine was ghay...))
((Please dont post unless your posting a verse!!!!!!))
With too much heat, I say it'll burn the confinment/
Rotating around the sun until the planets are in alignment/
I'm on assignment, from the Gods of the underground/
To astound the masses with my positive sound/
Just look around, everyone seems to be elevated/
Not lyrically stagnant like blood that is coagulated/
I stay sedated... from the bad influence of hip-hop/
with rhythmic anesthesiology from underground to the top/


((Lucid Adept, I like it when people stray from battle raps as well. But there just isn't enough people posting in here on the frequent to keep it on the first page. Thats why I decided to throw a few "positive" battle raps, to hopefully inspire people to post.))
yo,i rock the mike as simple as ABC'S I SKIP OVER THE D's and rock the micraphone**** with EASE/ is there a MC that can beat me? pfffft pleeeease sweatdrop that was gay huh
I burn you slowly like u sifted in my soapstone pipe,
Little tyke, I only give two cents to things I like...
So selfish the modern man figures i worship Lucifer...
Satanists do all for themselves, So why u still Bruise-n-her?...
why u still Cruisin fur?, Like alcohol, Permandent Slur...
Adapted Dislexia, Made ya brain cells whur...
Like an atom, but im killing your outer Shell...
6- charge, Cuz i simply dont Take and Tell...

(( I seriously think i work better when im high...sure i have to concentrate more, but my wordplay seems more...apparent..Ive seriously lost practice since my www.rapbattle.com days...and its showing :S))
Fathom, random chasm... I'm ill like the atom/
Ant when I rant-on... about my superpowers/
As I verbalize, I sprout flowers through lyrical showers/
Plant seeds of knowledge, and grant life to the word/
Disturb... international hate and preserve/
Essence of being through the minds eye all-seeing/
Believing, your subconciousness you are perceiving/

((Lucid, you think that is bad... I've only been keystlyin for a month or so. I'm still getting used to this online format of rapping. It's still akward to me.))
Matter fact the future fracture /
I dumb found pessimists like Hello Kitty lunch boxes /
and assorted mouse pads, your status has been had /
I'll drag your memory across five football fields, /
magma enhanced /
A little off key /
without much questionable ability /
I wouldn't doubt this... /
when everything appears to be scripted anyway /
and tight knit, but kinda comfortable, /
rhinestone durable /
Maybe too snug of a fit in general /
to whomever this may concern, I'm anti-incredible /
Vaguely interested in sushi, bandwidth, and Konami codes /
The Hook is what captures, the minds attension...
Clasped hands like Progression and raising tention...
When will you wana'bes live life's Chosen Lesson...
How you keep Fresh 'n Clean, when you be messin...
Stop Testin my anger, I can hit you with those Beams...
Just 'cuz im a girl, dont me im nothing more than you see...

((Wow, Only for a month ey...Well i can tell your not just an internet emcee...I am, 100%. I come in and out of skill...takes awhile.
Sight right, 50/35, or 35/50 /
It doesn't matter what gender you are, /
respect is automatically /
mutual with me /
I'm pretty ambiguous with these scatter brained lyrics /
So when your opinion comes to terms, /
please, get used to it /
My whole life seems synonymous with a random select box /
showcased on a Street Fighter cabinet /
Or the recoil of a well placed Crack Shoot from Mr. Bogard /
Terry, if you'd like to be formal in all regards /
...Footprints...Stepping down your spine...
Maybe fine...But i crush u in math, 5 times...
You, are the symbol of Mentaly chalanged, Like a Star...
Dont look into them, Blinded from where you are...
I leave long scars, And ipidermics like sars...
When i write, Im so high, my dome brushes Mars...
'Luci'z skills so hot, in jail there's no bars'...

((Weeeeeee.... I am a rocket man...well...woman....!))
Lucid_Adept
I leave long scars, And ipidermics like sars...
When i write, Im so high, my dome brushes Mars...
'Luci'z skills so hot, in jail there's no bars'...

((Weeeeeee.... I am a rocket man...well...woman....!))


Haha. I tell you're having fun with this.

Anyway, I'm gone. Peace. Nice dropping with you.
Everyone already left for the night? I log out to check my email, and look at what happens! I suppose I shall throw one more verse for the sake my thread.

Hey, thanks for the compliments Lucid Adept!!! I really appreciate them, especially considering that I am so new to the keystyling!! I figure if I'm going to be true to myself and try to be a lyricist, I should learn lyricism is all its manifestations... Freestyles, Battles, keystyles, spoken word, poetry you name it. I figure it will only help me to get better.
Lucid_Adept
...Footprints...Stepping down your spine...
Maybe fine...But i crush u in math, 5 times...
You, are the symbol of Mentaly chalanged, Like a Star...
Dont look into them, Blinded from where you are...
I leave long scars, And ipidermics like sars...
When i write, Im so high, my dome brushes Mars...
'Luci'z skills so hot, in jail there's no bars'...

((Weeeeeee.... I am a rocket man...well...woman....!))


Yo,
Luci with skills hot, she's raises the global tempeture/
Code Red... thermal bomb, secure the perameter/
When she blows up, melts the polar ice caps/
like Kevin Costner, she's Waterworld with her raps/
Now watch your lungs collapse from the liquid intake/
A mistake for you to try and step to her plate/
She creates... flows and she's Adept at it/
The definition of a true underground addict/

((A little flow, returning the props that were originally given to me. Thanks again!))
When songs light up and cry into my ears/
I hear what no others can and panic turns to tears/
Messages deep and dark, sparks the burnin' fear/
I Try to change the station, but damn the curse is clear/
The worst'll peer right into the pits of my ragged soul/
While I imagin gold surrounding a massive stove/
Melting away my dreams, my bubble's been blasted cold/
All while a tune skoots its way into my relaxin' lobe/
Still plans unfold within each word of the line and bars/
Domination and world conquests digestin' the mind with scars/
Capitals no longer exist in this earthly place of timeless farce/
instead we see our masters controlling from the skies and stars/
Every single bit of detail within' those catchy attractive rhymes/
will remain unknown to the masses and adds to the rapid lies/
And I'll be silenced and can't divulge the secret of this rap disguise/
Or else I'll fall down into the dungeon of evil and captive eyes/


contribution....there you go.

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