they try to slap me down cuz they say I'm "too concieted"
yesterday I found out that all my poems were deleted
cuz I spoke my mind & my outlook on life, they got heated
then they want me to say "I'm sorry dawg I didn't mean it"
forget that! them punks make me want to go on a rage!
and grab my 12 guage and make a mess out they're brains!
then they wonder why the world's filled with killers
and people out to deal with them goddamn poem stealers
but it was just a novice poem, so I guess I'ma chill
cuz I can make a better one any time I feel...
BLADE THE DAY WALKER
sorry i aint freestylin, i am under too much .... stuff? to be thinkin of rhyms that aint hatred and such, sorry thunderfott for spammin in a tight place like this though, peace out 503!
man I feel ya, writing a "positive" rhyme ain't all that easy, but hey, you gotta love a challenge...