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Rune Venus
Yo, what's new on mainstream?/ Whose bragging about having pockets full of cream?/ Are they weaklings as weak as aerosol by Rustoleum?/ Some of these guys deserve to choke on acid and nickle cadium/ but enough about these cats concerned with record sells/ let's talk about my skills that'll make your skin pale/ my paint skills leak on concrete walls at the third rail/ i'm running around with warrants tagging up MTA property trying to avoid getting locked up in L.A. County jail/ everytime users on Gaia tries to compete with me in a battle, they fail/ is it because they're lyricism is soft or stale?/ check my voice, it's giving the whole world an 8.0 Earthquake on the rictor scale/ i'm more iller then foot locker shoe sells/ ill like graphic animation on that cartoon Duck Tales/ so put you're weak style to a hault/ and when you realize that you're worthless, don't come to me implying that it was my fault/ Cus i told you before, you can't mess with the Venus/

Note: Sorry but i had to type this somewhere and it doesn't necessarly aim at anyone in this thread. sweatdrop


Good rhyme, its true, all "Mainstream" rappers rap about the same thing.
I didn't mean to disrespect the Mainstream since it is against the rules in this cypher thread (?) but i'm sure Thunder Foot will excuse me for that. Besides i'm thinking of typing a part 2. neutral
i just stepped on da court man what an applause
43 pointz a game like itz breaking lawz
itz like an alley-oop datz team work a combination
court vison so it aint a back court violation
i block shotz like shaq then rebound now i got da ball back
smack da ball away like im down to attack
from da cleveland clavaliers to da new york knicks
itz da fantasy draft now take your picks
im da NBA baller of da week
cus i shoot da ball wif a unique technique
i got da greatest play in da game never get three in da key
shooting a 3 pointer its in guarantee
never see me sitting on da sideline
oh fo' shaw dat MVP award is mine
like michael jordan i play da shoot guard
im at home on da court datz my yard
10 seconds in da game i get a lay-up
so u know the points move up holding up dat NBA championship cup
always show up to training at da game im doing my job just entertaining
836 points for my career right hurr rookie of da year
looks out to da fans i see nuthin but cheers
numba 1 playa in da game so good str8 fo' da hall of fame
shooting 100 percent on aim holding up thowback jersey'z in a frame
((Way to tired to post...sorry...Lets just bump things up!!))
Ima playa ima playa, ima playa im a playa ima playa ima playa.....wahahahaima playa.
(I'm writing from work, so I can't really post up a rhyme. Computer hasn't been working at home, so sorry for not posting anything recently. I should be up in a few days.)
God, I'm running out of lyrics....

I'm runnin' out of lyrics up in here in my mind
I battle cats every day, and every lyric gotta shine!
This is cut-rate, my verbal wel's dwindeling like the amazon forest
Soon I'll be gettin' repetitions, like my raps gettin' got a chores
An' who here heard of this: A female white kid rapping?
I've been spitting for less a week now, shot enough to do recaping:
Ghost thinks I won a battle with him, I see it the other way 'round
Made mambricks my enemy, still got lyrics profound
Then I tried my hand at s'more battles, startin' my lyric drout now
Found out I gotta on my writeing skills, but I'm up on stage ta take a bow.
*Looks*
....
-NOT- my best work.
Thought I would drop some rhymes because im dying of bordom/
Got nothing better to do then visit this forum/
I told myself tht i would stop coming here/
But I looked at my favorites/
And saw this thread/
So I decided to write something/
To calm my head/
I dont give a damn if you like it or not/
The thing is im writing this for myself/
******** what you got/
This Forum is boring me/
I want to battle somebody so i can give them a visit from the toothfairy/
So im off to visit another thread/
So long ya/
If i dont come back/
Im dead...


LOL biggrin
...emptying my mind...
..with eyes wide shut/
the futuristic intergalactic spiritual rhyme monk/
suffering a rhyme addicton...
attaching each alphabet wih fine percision/ to find perfection/
for each letter that I choose to use/
I take a piece of my soul with the rhyme and fuse the two/
out of this world complicated 4D rubic's cube/
sparking hint of interest with confusion too.../
science and mathematics with the forces of nature/
the heat leaving other flows scorching to vapor/
torturing the haters/ by forcefeeding my flow/
healthy nutrients gained just for seeing my flow...
By the way, im None 5's brother.
sorry i aint freestylin, i am under too much .... stuff? to be thinkin of rhyms that aint hatred and such, sorry thunderfott for spammin in a tight place like this though, peace out 503!
( Zan Ichimonji, explicit props. That was a really good flow. I really like your style. Good work, keep it coming!)

(And thanks to everyone posting! Its great to get a mix of different styles. Let's keep the positive vibe flowing!)
Yo,
Boss lurking over my shoulder, makes me jerk/
and jitter, but I'll still flow while I'm at work/
with superb imperial flows, like King Richard/
with Robin Hood stealing my loot to make the poor richer/
but thats ok, because I put all wickedness to the test/
like Dorothy's house killing the Wicked Witch of the West/
In the land of Oz, I follow the yellow brick/
then return to reality, from my dream to predict/
explicit lyrics, conducted within my thread/
even in my absence, the positivity is lead/
forward... with every bar typed in text/
what's next, the number of raps in here double/
I better stop before my boss gives me trouble/

(A little freestyle from work, since my computer at home isn't working. Keep them coming everyone!)
I heal knife cuts
I save people from dying by sliced up guts
I warn guys before they get kicked in the nuts
I make teenage girls think twice before they say: "Life Sucks"
I stop nuclear warfare
I make sure all nations have the same fire-power so war'll be fair
I show youngsters the world in it's most beatiful light
I give the whole world peace in the mind and erase the meaning of fights
I make everyone understand the meaning of wrong and right
I come up with the cure from cancer and save a dying child
I make all animals tame and remove them from the wild

I'm just feeling happy razz

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