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What do you think? Please tell me! ^^ I was thinking of selling bookmarks, postcards and little calendars with this and maybe prints! Please Please comment! It will be highly apreciated

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[LoveIsWar97]

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What do you think? Please tell me! ^^ I was thinking of selling bookmarks, postcards and little calendars with this and maybe prints! Please Please comment! It will be highly apreciated

I think it's beautiful! heart The only thing that's bothering me is the girl with blonde hair's nose to forehead area... it's sticking out a bit too much... not saying I could do any better though. D8 I think you should take a shot at selling them. biggrin Tell me how it works out if you do. whee I hope I helped! 4laugh

[Raevyne]

The coloring is pretty good, but the anatomy needs some work, especially the girl in profile. Their feet/legs are actually really well drawn, but the torsos and faces are rather stiff and weirdly proportioned. I'd suggest looking at some reference pictures smile It always helps me, even if I'm not drawing something "realistic". I think you've got a good start!

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The coloring is pretty good, but the anatomy needs some work, especially the girl in profile. Their feet/legs are actually really well drawn, but the torsos and faces are rather stiff and weirdly proportioned. I'd suggest looking at some reference pictures smile It always helps me, even if I'm not drawing something "realistic". I think you've got a good start!

yeah XD i guess it's true what they say smile ) when all you've drawn is manga you can't expect to shoot it high on something more realistic. I'll try though and thank you very very much for the advice whee

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What do you think? Please tell me! ^^ I was thinking of selling bookmarks, postcards and little calendars with this and maybe prints! Please Please comment! It will be highly apreciated

I think it's beautiful! heart The only thing that's bothering me is the girl with blonde hair's nose to forehead area... it's sticking out a bit too much... not saying I could do any better though. D8 I think you should take a shot at selling them. biggrin Tell me how it works out if you do. whee I hope I helped! 4laugh

Thank you very much ^^ i guess i noticed that part too xp but don't know why i didn't modify... well anyway... smile ) XDD thanks for the advices, I might try my hand with them at some conventions and we'll see what happens

[LoveIsWar97]

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What do you think? Please tell me! ^^ I was thinking of selling bookmarks, postcards and little calendars with this and maybe prints! Please Please comment! It will be highly apreciated

I think it's beautiful! heart The only thing that's bothering me is the girl with blonde hair's nose to forehead area... it's sticking out a bit too much... not saying I could do any better though. D8 I think you should take a shot at selling them. biggrin Tell me how it works out if you do. whee I hope I helped! 4laugh

Thank you very much ^^ i guess i noticed that part too xp but don't know why i didn't modify... well anyway... smile ) XDD thanks for the advices, I might try my hand with them at some conventions and we'll see what happens

You're welcome. whee How long did it take you to draw it? :O

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What do you think? Please tell me! ^^ I was thinking of selling bookmarks, postcards and little calendars with this and maybe prints! Please Please comment! It will be highly apreciated

I think it's beautiful! heart The only thing that's bothering me is the girl with blonde hair's nose to forehead area... it's sticking out a bit too much... not saying I could do any better though. D8 I think you should take a shot at selling them. biggrin Tell me how it works out if you do. whee I hope I helped! 4laugh

Thank you very much ^^ i guess i noticed that part too xp but don't know why i didn't modify... well anyway... smile ) XDD thanks for the advices, I might try my hand with them at some conventions and we'll see what happens

You're welcome. whee How long did it take you to draw it? :O

ummmm... ehhh i think 7, 8 hours maybe... probably even more... i work slow cause i had just got the tablet and it would take some time until i get fully accustomed to it i guess

[LoveIsWar97]

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What do you think? Please tell me! ^^ I was thinking of selling bookmarks, postcards and little calendars with this and maybe prints! Please Please comment! It will be highly apreciated

I think it's beautiful! heart The only thing that's bothering me is the girl with blonde hair's nose to forehead area... it's sticking out a bit too much... not saying I could do any better though. D8 I think you should take a shot at selling them. biggrin Tell me how it works out if you do. whee I hope I helped! 4laugh

Thank you very much ^^ i guess i noticed that part too xp but don't know why i didn't modify... well anyway... smile ) XDD thanks for the advices, I might try my hand with them at some conventions and we'll see what happens

You're welcome. whee How long did it take you to draw it? :O

ummmm... ehhh i think 7, 8 hours maybe... probably even more... i work slow cause i had just got the tablet and it would take some time until i get fully accustomed to it i guess

Ahh- I see. o3o; Drawing tablets are really confusing for me... :< I'm still learning how to use it. :>

[Playboy Karasu Uchiha]

Wow that is really amazing, much better that anything I can do. ^^

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What do you think? Please tell me! ^^ I was thinking of selling bookmarks, postcards and little calendars with this and maybe prints! Please Please comment! It will be highly apreciated

I think it's beautiful! heart The only thing that's bothering me is the girl with blonde hair's nose to forehead area... it's sticking out a bit too much... not saying I could do any better though. D8 I think you should take a shot at selling them. biggrin Tell me how it works out if you do. whee I hope I helped! 4laugh

Thank you very much ^^ i guess i noticed that part too xp but don't know why i didn't modify... well anyway... smile ) XDD thanks for the advices, I might try my hand with them at some conventions and we'll see what happens

You're welcome. whee How long did it take you to draw it? :O

ummmm... ehhh i think 7, 8 hours maybe... probably even more... i work slow cause i had just got the tablet and it would take some time until i get fully accustomed to it i guess

Ahh- I see. o3o; Drawing tablets are really confusing for me... :< I'm still learning how to use it. :>

they are right?? stressed what tablet do you have?

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Playboy Karasu Uchiha

Wow that is really amazing, much better that anything I can do. ^^

thank you so~~ much! whee

[Playboy Karasu Uchiha]

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Wow that is really amazing, much better that anything I can do. ^^

thank you so~~ much! whee

You're welcome. If you keep practicing, I am sure those pictures would sell. ^^

[LoveIsWar97]

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Thank you very much ^^ i guess i noticed that part too xp but don't know why i didn't modify... well anyway... smile ) XDD thanks for the advices, I might try my hand with them at some conventions and we'll see what happens

You're welcome. whee How long did it take you to draw it? :O

ummmm... ehhh i think 7, 8 hours maybe... probably even more... i work slow cause i had just got the tablet and it would take some time until i get fully accustomed to it i guess

Ahh- I see. o3o; Drawing tablets are really confusing for me... :< I'm still learning how to use it. :>

they are right?? stressed what tablet do you have?

"VisTablet". ;o; You?