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So i know i'm not the best- obviously. But i'm making an effort to get better. Right now I'm mostly exprimenting with diffrent techniques of editing. Eventually I'll get back into my more serious and natural forms of photography.


http://www.smvphotography.deviantart.com

(i made a new account. i wanted to a different name.)


Please give me a critique, I'd really appreciate it.
You really should pick a few of your best photos to show us instead of your whole DA.
It's hard to critique a whole site of yours
Stiffy777
You really should pick a few of your best photos to show us instead of your whole DA.
It's hard to critique a whole site of yours
Agreed.
I think your best photo's in there would have to be "Ghost" and "You Can't See Through Me"
Those are really powerful images, they convey a good deal of emotion with in them, which is essential in photography. I think you should venture out a little more though,be a bit more adventurous, and get some variety in the subjects you photograph.

And It's actually better to post your whole portfolio rather than you few best when looking for a critique because it allows the critic to asses your work as a whole rather than what you think are you best images. There may be an image in there that you feel self conscious about that the critic finds entrancing.
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MeowSnacks
I think your best photo's in there would have to be "Ghost" and "You Can't See Through Me"
Those are really powerful images, they convey a good deal of emotion with in them, which is essential in photography. I think you should venture out a little more though,be a bit more adventurous, and get some variety in the subjects you photograph.

And It's actually better to post your whole portfolio rather than you few best when looking for a critique because it allows the critic to asses your work as a whole rather than what you think are you best images. There may be an image in there that you feel self conscious about that the critic finds entrancing.
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Thank YOU so much! I really appreciate your opnion.
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Umm...ignore my last comment...
I think I was getting the links mixed up, because I had a lot of tabs open.

I just realized you have only 5 photos in your gallery.

Anyway...
I rather like the dirty lighting on "Doll". I think it's the make-up and colors.
I would love to see shot of the whole face as well. =)

"Ghost" and "You Can't See Through Me" have imperfections that make them very dynamic and interesting.

But "With Brand New Eyes" and "I'll Wait Forever" don't have the same charm as the other three.
xen0m0rph
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Umm...ignore my last comment...
I think I was getting the links mixed up, because I had a lot of tabs open.

I just realized you have only 5 photos in your gallery.

Anyway...
I rather like the dirty lighting on "Doll". I think it's the make-up and colors.
I would love to see shot of the whole face as well. =)

"Ghost" and "You Can't See Through Me" have imperfections that make them very dynamic and interesting.

But "With Brand New Eyes" and "I'll Wait Forever" don't have the same charm as the other three.


oh thank you.
it's funnt though i was also thinking the same exact thing in the back of my mind.
those are my favorites to.
The others don't stand out so much. :]
I'll try and put more stuff up soon. Different people and things.
Thank You!

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