LadyDemorra
Its not that harsh
razz
Although would you mind elaborating on the anatomy part, for example, for the sketch did you mean the chibi or the fullbody one? Thank you for your suggestions
whee
ah thank you, i was worried~
Here we go!
this one
These eyes are too close to each other, it makes the face seem...off? also, try to center the lips (you should be able to draw a line though the center of the nose and the cupid bow/center of lips and chin).
this one
the right eye should be moved away from the left eye a little more. once again, the closeness of the eyes is the issue. considering your angle, the right eye should be placed a little HIGHER than the left to account for perception (that is, an object appears smaller the further away it is!)
Similarily, the left shoulder should be higher and a little more... back? to account for the angle.
this one
Same thing with the eyes and the shoulders. Take into account the angle
The hand holding the tail, it's angle is much too sharp. it looks like 90 degrees! try a softer curve~
this one
again, eyes and shoulders~
Your cloak is also remarkable straight! It doesn't fit with the pose/angle. Try a slight curve/angle to the cloak
this one
Your eye is WAY too close to the nose,move it towards the ear~ Her neck is a tad long too.
also your torse is not angled right. judging by her face, the right side should be HIGHER (slightly) than the left
Just to be clear, when i say left/right side i mean based on the person is facing!
this is the sketch i was talking about
the proportions, angles are perf.