What do you think?

[Hazard Baby]

I like your style a lot. Great shading work, try blending more colors for some cool effects. I would definitely love to read a graphic novel in your style.

[LittleSister942]

the one with the lines is pretty, makes the colors more saturated and makes the colors brighter, and makes it unique... but my money is on without... it makes it seem 3d ｡◕‿‿◕｡

[xxcreativedreamerxx]

Vancule

D'aaaaawww ^/////^

[xxcreativedreamerxx]

And thanks to everyone else who commented :3