What chuu think of this <3

[nightthistle]

i drew it at school.

[Eveille]

idk who the ******** voted down, but that is pretty damned good, especially considering the average quality of anime posts in this forum.

Could use some detail work on the clothes I guess?

[Sapphire-Youn]

Even if you're at school you should have some blank white paper to draw on if you plan on displaying your work afterwords. The lines themselves can be distracting and basically ruin a piece. That and over all it doesn't show very good presentation.

You should really practice with anatomy, learning the joints and structure under the skin. As of the moment she has no indication of an elbow or where her arm should bend. It'll really help the overall look of your drawings too to work on body structure, it changes the whole dynamic of a piece and can give it depth. Just keep practicing.

[xxcreativedreamerxx]

Try practicing with realism. Draw gestures of human bodies to get the hang of how they work. And it's already been stating, but NO LINED PAPER. lol

[Kasei Kitsune Kami]

very talented