So i did Avi art for myself...

[Dieucra_Der]

What do you think?
Anything that i could improve?

[KarboniteManeuver]

If you flip the image horizontally in an art program you can see that the head is tilted in line with the body when it should be straight. I understand the angle relative to the pose for the body and it works, but be careful about the head.

The only things I would put some more work into would be the hands and his expression. The fingers appear almost boneless, I'd take a picture of your hand in that pose and use that for reference. As for his face, since you did the line art for his mouth in black I'd do it for his nose as well, or make the shading for his nose darker, because right now it's barely visible. His expression is a bit muted and lackluster, which hey, could be your aim, but it makes for a very boring picture.

Hopefully that helps,

[Dieucra_Der]

KarboniteManeuver

If you flip the image horizontally in an art program you can see that the head is tilted in line with the body when it should be straight. I understand the angle relative to the pose for the body and it works, but be careful about the head.

The only things I would put some more work into would be the hands and his expression. The fingers appear almost boneless, I'd take a picture of your hand in that pose and use that for reference. As for his face, since you did the line art for his mouth in black I'd do it for his nose as well, or make the shading for his nose darker, because right now it's barely visible. His expression is a bit muted and lackluster, which hey, could be your aim, but it makes for a very boring picture.

Hopefully that helps,

Oh...i just did that and its true xD
I cannot draw straight TT____TT

Well...i was going to let the black line art for nose.....
but it looked terrible....so i just shaded, and i yeah, maybe a bit more darker
I really dont make much art pics xD

But thnx for comments heart

[KarboniteManeuver]

Of course, good luck :3

[Kasei Kitsune Kami]

Ha really good

[Dieucra_Der]

Kill me with your comments emotion_8c

[XFS]

Wow... niceee ! smile
you should start a shopp <3 heart

[Soda Pop Knight]

Looks really good, The nose needs to be in black imo. Also nothign that can be changed now but his pose looks a little awkward.

[LollieLotz]

Probably just need the nose in a light shade of black, and the head is slightly tilted.
A good exercise is to draw 2 dots, not to close together., Then, draw a STRAIGHT line from point A to Point B. Then continue drawing more dots and lines! That way is simple and easy to get drawing straight!

[Kita Crimzon]

Wow nice job. ^.^ Maybe you should practice with adding more details, to like the face...it just seems a bit...usual, you get what i am saying?