~ Rate my art drawing ~

[mariashi]

This is drawn with pencil and is scanned. This is a drawing of my avatar.

what do you think of my art?
How much do you think it could be worth?
How can I improve?
rate 1 - 10.

~even if you say that it is horrible, don't worry it won't offend me, because this way I can improve my drawing, but don't forget to explain why~

My drawing:

Lunar Princess Deviantart

[emerald_city_27]

I like it but the size of the head bugs me

[mariashi]

emerald_city_27

I like it but the size of the head bugs me

yeah... i agree with you... i think it's too small... I need to improve those parts

[RoiyaChan]

its pretty good, you just need to round her out a little so she doesnt look so stiff in her pose and her clothes might need some more shadowing so it looks more 3d.

[mariashi]

RoiyaChan

its pretty good, you just need to round her out a little so she doesnt look so stiff in her pose and her clothes might need some more shadowing so it looks more 3d.

i haven't shaded anything, cuz i am going to color and outline it on my computer heart

[Rammii]

very cute~ :3
the way the arms and shoulders connect looks a bit weird. maybe bring down the bust a bit? the torso seems to be too long and the elbow of the left arm is too short. The clothing needs some folds.
I would say practice anatomy and draw the person naked first then add on the clothing.
other than that, it's adorable~ >u<

[mariashi]

Rammii

very cute~ :3
the way the arms and shoulders connect looks a bit weird. maybe bring down the bust a bit? the torso seems to be too long and the elbow of the left arm is too short. The clothing needs some folds.
I would say practice anatomy and draw the person naked first then add on the clothing.
other than that, it's adorable~ >u<

thank you very much for the compliment!!! >///< i am going to follow your advice.... but, do i draw okay for a 14 years old? i love drawing very much, so I love to practice drawing as much as possible! heart heart I hope I can draw like a professional person in the future!!!

[Rammii]

mariashi

Rammii

very cute~ :3
the way the arms and shoulders connect looks a bit weird. maybe bring down the bust a bit? the torso seems to be too long and the elbow of the left arm is too short. The clothing needs some folds.
I would say practice anatomy and draw the person naked first then add on the clothing.
other than that, it's adorable~ >u<

thank you very much for the compliment!!! >///< i am going to follow your advice.... but, do i draw okay for a 14 years old? i love drawing very much, so I love to practice drawing as much as possible! heart heart I hope I can draw like a professional person in the future!!!

you're 14 too? *A* yay~!
you have a lot of time to improve, i'm sure you'll do great :3 just keep in mind that if you want to be pro, i think you should do life drawing. Also, take criticism. This will definitely help you improve loads.

[mariashi]

Rammii

mariashi

Rammii

very cute~ :3
the way the arms and shoulders connect looks a bit weird. maybe bring down the bust a bit? the torso seems to be too long and the elbow of the left arm is too short. The clothing needs some folds.
I would say practice anatomy and draw the person naked first then add on the clothing.
other than that, it's adorable~ >u<

thank you very much for the compliment!!! >///< i am going to follow your advice.... but, do i draw okay for a 14 years old? i love drawing very much, so I love to practice drawing as much as possible! heart heart I hope I can draw like a professional person in the future!!!

you're 14 too? *A* yay~!
you have a lot of time to improve, i'm sure you'll do great :3 just keep in mind that if you want to be pro, i think you should do life drawing. Also, take criticism. This will definitely help you improve loads.

Thank you for your advice ^ u ^!!!! heart heart

[xXx Guenhwyvar xXx]

mariashi

One thing: You want to be professional in the future? STOP DRAWING MANGA/ANIME!!!

You can start again when you know basics ( ANATOMY!!!, perspective, shading, composition...) Start with the real ppl and try to understand the shape and proportions of human creature.

Good luck. If you'd like some advice on what is wrong in your REALISYIC drawing I'll be happy to help (just pm me with the art ). I'm not a professional but I know something about that ( I'm an architecture student If you're curious )

[Kikokomai-chan]

I thought it was very cute, I really did like the expression and the hair.

But as always, manga isn't really taken seriously... Though it certainly should be. I would like to see this piece colored, just because it can really bring a piece to life. Just one word of advice, pay attention to anatomy. Even in manga, when drawing you should always pay attention to that, but it is a hard thing to get used to. So I would say use poses and reference things to help you better. Even if you cannot by anatomy books, you can always use other things like pictures from a photo album or even fashion magazines(that's what I used... Lolz)
But I did think it was very cute and you should definitely keep practicing.

[mariashi]

Kikokomai-chan

I thought it was very cute, I really did like the expression and the hair.

But as always, manga isn't really taken seriously... Though it certainly should be. I would like to see this piece colored, just because it can really bring a piece to life. Just one word of advice, pay attention to anatomy. Even in manga, when drawing you should always pay attention to that, but it is a hard thing to get used to. So I would say use poses and reference things to help you better. Even if you cannot by anatomy books, you can always use other things like pictures from a photo album or even fashion magazines(that's what I used... Lolz)
But I did think it was very cute and you should definitely keep practicing.

Thank you soo much for the tip!! heart

[mariashi]

xXx Guenhwyvar xXx

mariashi

One thing: You want to be professional in the future? STOP DRAWING MANGA/ANIME!!!

You can start again when you know basics ( ANATOMY!!!, perspective, shading, composition...) Start with the real ppl and try to understand the shape and proportions of human creature.

Good luck. If you'd like some advice on what is wrong in your REALISYIC drawing I'll be happy to help (just pm me with the art ). I'm not a professional but I know something about that ( I'm an architecture student If you're curious )

now that I think about, i think I should practice drawing real things, because it can improve my drawing skills

[KatjatheGrand]

Really cute, but work on your proportions a little more, maybe add some colour, texture, and shading to add interest. smile