Persona 3: Aigis

[Blackraven93]

Just a little picture I drew of Aigis from the game Persona 3. I used a tablet and switched between Photoshop and SAI. It's my first attempt at drawing her, so I would like to hear what you guys think. Thank you ^^

[xxcreativedreamerxx]

It's adorable! Since it's kinda chibi-ish, though, you may want to either make her nose smaller, just adding a dot, or not add a nose at all. Maybe a little more value in the eyes too.

[Lady Lagomorph]

Aigis!

It's cute, but her head is ginormous. I'm guessing that's intended for, like Creativedreamer stated, a chibi look, but it seems odd to me. I think it's because her neck isn't lining up at the right part. the neck runs up right under the ears, which means the head should be a little forward, with her left (our right) side of the neck lining up under her jawline. The eyes seem too far up, too.

The torso and upper leags seem very well done.

[Blackraven93]

xxcreativedreamerxx

It's adorable! Since it's kinda chibi-ish, though, you may want to either make her nose smaller, just adding a dot, or not add a nose at all. Maybe a little more value in the eyes too.

Thank you ^^ I'm sorry about the nose, it's just find it odd adding to noses to some of my chibis unless I want them to look really baby-ish. I've also been experimenting a lot with how I color my eyes too, so it's nice to know that I can still add a bit more.

[Blackraven93]

Lady Lagomorph

Aigis!

It's cute, but her head is ginormous. I'm guessing that's intended for, like Creativedreamer stated, a chibi look, but it seems odd to me. I think it's because her neck isn't lining up at the right part. the neck runs up right under the ears, which means the head should be a little forward, with her left (our right) side of the neck lining up under her jawline. The eyes seem too far up, too.

The torso and upper leags seem very well done.

Thank you for the criticism biggrin I'm sorry about the neck and the eyes, I am, unfortunately, not as serious with anatomy with chibis as I am with regular sized characters so it's nice to know where I went wrong.

[Kasei Kitsune Kami]

amazing

[xxcreativedreamerxx]

Blackraven93

xxcreativedreamerxx

It's adorable! Since it's kinda chibi-ish, though, you may want to either make her nose smaller, just adding a dot, or not add a nose at all. Maybe a little more value in the eyes too.

Thank you ^^ I'm sorry about the nose, it's just find it odd adding to noses to some of my chibis unless I want them to look really baby-ish. I've also been experimenting a lot with how I color my eyes too, so it's nice to know that I can still add a bit more.

Anytime I have a closeup of someone in my pictures, I add a LOT of depth and detail to the eyes. It really makes them pop!

[argentum.dea]

First, I love it! Super cute. And I love Aigis.

Secondly, it kinda looks like her face and body + hair are in two different styles? I dunno, it might be just me, but everything looks so round, like it's coming out of the page but her face feels rather flat?

Otherwise beautiful work! The colours are great!

[Blackraven93]

argentum.dea

First, I love it! Super cute. And I love Aigis.

Secondly, it kinda looks like her face and body + hair are in two different styles? I dunno, it might be just me, but everything looks so round, like it's coming out of the page but her face feels rather flat?

Otherwise beautiful work! The colours are great!

I think I understand where you are getting at with the face ^^ I noticed that the shading on her skin is not as intense as the shading anywhere else. That's all my fault seeing as I am very picky how my shading looks on skin and I don't like it too intense. I'll keep in my mind to keep the shading consistent in the future.