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Oh wow :O
That sure looks amazing dear
I'm jealous xD! emotion_bigheart
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Dieucra_Der
Oh wow :O
That sure looks amazing dear
I'm jealous xD! emotion_bigheart


Thank you!
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I really like it, overall. Nice action pose, angle, and use of color. The only thing odd to me is the sword - I can tell it's curved, but at first glance it looked wobbly and bent to me. Not sure why - maybe because the start of the curve is all I can see before it's obscured?
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Lady Lagomorph
I really like it, overall. Nice action pose, angle, and use of color. The only thing odd to me is the sword - I can tell it's curved, but at first glance it looked wobbly and bent to me. Not sure why - maybe because the start of the curve is all I can see before it's obscured?


Hmm yeah, I had a little trouble with the sword. Thanks!
None of her limbs are actually connected to her body.

Build her from cylinders and you'll have a much easier time with foreshortening, because you can't foreshorten something that isn't drawn as a 3D object.

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really awesome and sweet avatar
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Errol McGillivray
None of her limbs are actually connected to her body.

Build her from cylinders and you'll have a much easier time with foreshortening, because you can't foreshorten something that isn't drawn as a 3D object.

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I actually DID do that...I guess it's the way I colored it sweatdrop

But I saved this photo you showed me to help make the next one look a little better.

bassoonmaster
really awesome and sweet avatar


Thanks!
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Errol McGillivray
None of her limbs are actually connected to her body.

Build her from cylinders and you'll have a much easier time with foreshortening, because you can't foreshorten something that isn't drawn as a 3D object.

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I actually DID do that...I guess it's the way I colored it sweatdrop

But I saved this photo you showed me to help make the next one look a little better.

bassoonmaster
really awesome and sweet avatar


Thanks!
Do a really quick sketch showing how you did it. Maybe there's something about how you did it that's messing you up a bit.
The arms and legs look a bit off, specifically the one in the back.
Great coloring and pose though, overall great work!
:3
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Errol McGillivray
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Errol McGillivray
None of her limbs are actually connected to her body.

Build her from cylinders and you'll have a much easier time with foreshortening, because you can't foreshorten something that isn't drawn as a 3D object.

User Image


I actually DID do that...I guess it's the way I colored it sweatdrop

But I saved this photo you showed me to help make the next one look a little better.

bassoonmaster
really awesome and sweet avatar


Thanks!
Do a really quick sketch showing how you did it. Maybe there's something about how you did it that's messing you up a bit.


I'll have to try that later. Probably what happened was that my original sketch was on a smaller piece of paper that I transferred with fewer and lighter lines on a bigger paper (to avoid a messy drawing) and maybe during the transfer I messed up sad

Hmmm I need to find a better way to do that...
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S a p h 3 r o n
The arms and legs look a bit off, specifically the one in the back.
Great coloring and pose though, overall great work!
:3


Thank you!

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