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This is some line art I did on photoshop.
I just finished it last night and I'm very happy about it. ^_^


Heres another one I did a few days before ^_^
It's my brother's OC he asked me to draw.


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The right hand on the 2nd drawing is supposed to be like that, does it look weird to you?
     
I like the pics, the line art is really nice and clean. The hand wouldn't look so weird if the rest of the arm didn't. It sort of looks like he has a noodle arm. Add the elbow joint and just a rule of thumb if you mension that it might look weird it's probably because you know it's not correct and you should try to fix it.

I really like the first pic, very cute!
 
     
 
I think they are done well, but when looking at clothing there is more curves and angles. I think it's great though.
     






How do you make such clean lineart? </3
It's gorgeous.
 
     
 
thanks guys
     
Very cute. I love both of them! Like someone else said, the left hand on the second one looks a little odd... but its not too bad. Good job!
 
     
Dreamliss
 
They're very cute and you have nice clean lines, but it looks like they have big foreheads and very skinny necks, also, you need to add curves to the body, people are curvy. That is what I have to say if you want to make it look more realistic, but if it's just your style, that's fine.
     
Kisikata Azusa






How do you make such clean lineart? </3
It's gorgeous.


you can make such lineart with the pen tool on photoshop or other programs
you can also draw a lineart like this with your hand if you have a tablet ^^
 
     
 
the texture looks soft :'D
     

Not bad.
 
     
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I fail at using the pen tool.
     
KaceHanaki
Kisikata Azusa






How do you make such clean lineart? </3
It's gorgeous.


you can make such lineart with the pen tool on photoshop or other programs
you can also draw a lineart like this with your hand if you have a tablet ^^


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I'll try it, thank you.
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The right arm off the second one looks off, the whole shape is off neutral
     
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