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Hello! I drew these a few days ago and i was wondering if you could critique and comment on them for me. Here they are. No mean comments please.
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Hands are WAAAAYY too big. Other than that they are okay.
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They has no noses. |
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those r realy good u could make ur own manga if u wanted to biggrin
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shadow gallade 7676 those r realy good u could make ur own manga if u wanted to biggrin It's alright, but the anatomy is off. The hands need work, and the perspective on the first one is a bit odd. Other than that, you've got the mechanics down. Keep up the good work. |
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*sigh* So much anime.
Okay, hands, very much OFF. Gah, I am sick of Anime. |
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Stop drawing anime, start doing observation of the human body and draw from observation, and read some of Loomis' stuff. Stop making such hard lines and don't worry about everything being neat. Try out a different shading technique, too.
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kibafan11 DONT LISTEN 2 THESE MORONS!!!!!! its really good all u need is a small little nose and u'll be fine! u really could make a manga! and dont listen 2 the ahole who responded be4 me,hejust jealous cuz he has NO talent! I never insulted her, just gave her some advice. What's your deal? She asked for critique, stop whiteknighting the place up. |
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My geez, guys =__= It says 'anime' right on the title, if you don't want to look at it, then don't click the thread!
Anyways, you're getting the hang of it, and yes, anatomy needs a little work. Keep up the good work, you're doing great =] |
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 rice says pretty decent pics, i see you have a basic understanding of foreshortening as well thats a plus. i'm gonna let the hand and the linky arms go this time since it can be used as a artstyle of a person, but you need to learn to proportion your body out more. a small squished up face is awkward looking on a long skinny body like that...... also please lay off the big eyes..... that is such a amateur way of doing anime style drawings. also you need to study how a women's breast should look in various positions plus they're not coned shaped, less lines in the hair wound be nice as well because theres way too many strands and just makes it horrible to look at. also look at your head anatomy closer in the second pic the top head is pushed down on it. also go easier on the lines.... lighter faster strokes will give you a better line. |
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kool drawin
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Wow so many different posts. Thanks guys you gave me some good advice and thanks for the comments too ^-^
!2ice, thanks for critiquing my work. It seems you know a lot about this stuff. When i read your post it was very good advice. Thanks to all! |
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Kiysla My geez, guys =__= It says 'anime' right on the title, if you don't want to look at it, then don't click the thread! Anyways, you're getting the hang of it, and yes, anatomy needs a little work. Keep up the good work, you're doing great =] I didn't mean it that way, I meant that it's important to learn to actually draw before you go on such a liner path. Only drawing anime causes a lot of bad habits for artists, believe me. |
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