[Mild Warning for the Ideoligically Sensitve] Caged Monster~

[NecoconecoKun]

One of my favorites idea wise... :< Unfortunately, my scanner is terrible. Left scanner marks and I had to cut it in two and fue. Then I had to toy with the contrast to take out the blurs, and ended up fading off alot of the color.

Original done with COPICs. Please comment?

http://necoconecokun.deviantart.com

[NecoconecoKun]

Bump!

[Melasaurus]

i think its an interesting concept
what inspired you to do this?

its really good :3

[x- princess hadouken -x]

I like it. Reminds me of a manga artist.. I'll find her name for you later. There's just something about the simplicity that I love. It makes me calm, even though the subject matter shouldn't. Overall, clean and appealing aesthetics.

Is it a comic? Or a one off piece?

[NecoconecoKun]

Melasaurus

i think its an interesting concept
what inspired you to do this?

its really good :3

A song called Cage by Dir en Grey.

Thanks~ -hugs-

[NecoconecoKun]

x- princess hadouken -x

I like it. Reminds me of a manga artist.. I'll find her name for you later. There's just something about the simplicity that I love. It makes me calm, even though the subject matter shouldn't. Overall, clean and appealing aesthetics.

Is it a comic? Or a one off piece?

Thank you!!

>//< So embarrassing.. It's actually part of a manga I had gone through in my head. D: I've never written it down before, though.

[NecoconecoKun]

Bump~

[Miss Diction]

NecoconecoKun

A song called Cage by Dir en Grey.

Kickin' it old school.

[Quintessence Of Dust]

the concept is looking good.

However I get the feeling that your panel layout was totally haphazard and unplanned. The viewer's eyes wander and go back and forth all over the page.

In order to make a good comic you have to consider panel size and shape. Certain kinds are used to indicate fast motion, introduce a scene, etc, etc. This is a good place to start with trying to fix that. From there look up famous comic artists and see how they use the panels to illustrate their story. Look up "comic layout and planning". You've got a good start but you still need improvement.

Good luck biggrin

[strawberry monochrome]

I like the idea!

The only thing that bothers me are the feet, but they are a menace to draw o////<

[NecoconecoKun]

Miss Diction

NecoconecoKun

A song called Cage by Dir en Grey.

Kickin' it old school.

All the way! ninja

[Elissiam]

I know that even graphic novels have a specific layout so you know which panel or speech bubble to read next. There are tons of comic books that could help you and there's stuff all over the internet that will do the same.

[NecoconecoKun]

Quintessence Of Dust

the concept is looking good.

However I get the feeling that your panel layout was totally haphazard and unplanned. The viewer's eyes wander and go back and forth all over the page.

In order to make a good comic you have to consider panel size and shape. Certain kinds are used to indicate fast motion, introduce a scene, etc, etc. This is a good place to start with trying to fix that. From there look up famous comic artists and see how they use the panels to illustrate their story. Look up "comic layout and planning". You've got a good start but you still need improvement.

Good luck biggrin

Oh yes. I completely agree! D: I didn't mean to make it into a comic panel though, just a picture. But i get what you mean.. Maybe i should've centered something and let it drift out?

Thanks! I'll check out the tutorial~

[NecoconecoKun]

Elissiam

I know that even graphic novels have a specific layout so you know which panel or speech bubble to read next. There are tons of comic books that could help you and there's stuff all over the internet that will do the same.

Eee! Again, this isn't meant to be a comic of any sorts. Just a picture. But yeah, thanks anyway! xD I'll try making it more organized someday.. Maybe even speech bubbles?!