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*geeks*
I added a detail shot of the chicky poo
That is really nice art, also a very good snake.
that picture is off the chain.
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that picture is off the chain.

? Thank you ^_^
Beautiful. Amazing! o.o

...If I wasn't broke, I'd ask for a commission, myself. xD
wow, this is fantastic, the action and movement, the expressive fear, amount of detail and technique you put into this is way better than alot of things I've seen here.
True your work isn't the generic anime, but at least you know you're better. biggrin hahaha

The fear in the eyes is just incredible. I've never been able to capture any dramatic expressions before *jealous* haha.

You even drew heiroglyphs on the wall--tooooooo cool
oh by the way, sometimes the lack of posts could be the time of day and # of people skulking about
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wow, this is fantastic, the action and movement, the expressive fear, amount of detail and technique you put into this is way better than alot of things I've seen here.
True your work isn't the generic anime, but at least you know you're better. biggrin hahaha

The fear in the eyes is just incredible. I've never been able to capture any dramatic expressions before *jealous* haha.

You even drew heiroglyphs on the wall--tooooooo cool

lol!

I tend to go over board with a lot of stuff. *sweats*

I'm really glad that you like it. ^^
That is amazing!!! Her expression captures the fear that she's feeling about the snake. I love what you did. And the background is perfect as it is! heart
I really love the final outcome to this but I'm not quite sure if the kind of perspective you were going for worked out so well. Because there seems to be so many points of perspective, it makes everything seem a bit too detached and less cohesive. At first, I thought you were trying to make it look like it's an over the shoulder shot from behind the snake, but looking at the background, it makes it seem more like it'd be angled downward with the kind of slant you gave the floor and the way you have the pillars pointed. I think that if you had put even more force to the perspective, really putting a bit more of a drastic angle for the pillars and shifted the floor's angle to be coming from the opposite direction, it would have been absolutely perfect.
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Outrun The Halfling
I really love the final outcome to this but I'm not quite sure if the kind of perspective you were going for worked out so well. Because there seems to be so many points of perspective, it makes everything seem a bit too detached and less cohesive. At first, I thought you were trying to make it look like it's an over the shoulder shot from behind the snake, but looking at the background, it makes it seem more like it'd be angled downward with the kind of slant you gave the floor and the way you have the pillars pointed. I think that if you had put even more force to the perspective, really putting a bit more of a drastic angle for the pillars and shifted the floor's angle to be coming from the opposite direction, it would have been absolutely perfect.

Hmm.. probably..
Perspective has never been something that came easily for me. I always get freaked out by it. sweatdrop So I have a bad habit of downplaying it when I want to exagerrate it which makes it got pretty retarded.

I really appreciate the critique and I agree about the perspective, it's something that I wasn't too pleased with myself.

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