comment? Pen drawing

Comment?

yes	51.9%	[ 14 ]
to lazy...	48.1%	[ 13 ]
Total Votes:			[ 27 ]

[kaxii]

I really like the picture I think you just need to work on proportions a bit, but I don't think you'll have a hard time getting the hang of it. I noticed that her boob kind of fits weirdly around her tie, the tie doesn't weigh a lot and wouldn't be behind the boob unless she were turned a lot more.
I really like the picture, though. Very Cool biggrin

[Noa Anon]

thanks for the critique

[mooflan]

i love you x infinity.
people who draw with a ball point pen are amazing.
id pay a hella lot more than five thousand gold for that.
seems like hard work, plus it is super fantabulous.
n__n
i sound stupid saying that. but i mean it. i love love love it!
:3 In my eyes, the picture is perfecttt. !!

[monika20]

Not bad, the bandages look really sweet. I really like that symbol in the background, did you come up with it yourself?

[Noa Anon]

mooflan: thank you very much. It is very hard to draw when your pen fades in and out of ink.
HellMomMj: Yes, I was going to draw it on her arm, too, but then I put on the bandages.

[Miss Tarantula]

I think it's pretty nice!! :]
Did you color everything with just a ballpoint pen?

[cupcake_massacre]

its good

[Noa Anon]

MisTaratla: yes, its all in ballpoint.
CupcakeMassacre: thanks

[Miss Tarantula]

ZOMG! My arm would have died from the shading. eek Well I would have given up... You're amazing!!

[Noa Anon]

Miss Tarantula

ZOMG! My arm would have died from the shading. eek Well I would have given up... You're amazing!!

Lol thanks. I was really sleepy at the time, so I "focused" better then usual by not really noticing what I was doing. Or something like that. Thats why the background's not shaded, too.

[Miss Tarantula]

spasticpoison

Miss Tarantula

ZOMG! My arm would have died from the shading. eek Well I would have given up... You're amazing!!

Lol thanks. I was really sleepy at the time, so I "focused" better then usual by not really noticing what I was doing. Or something like that. Thats why the background's not shaded, too.

If I was sleepy I would have quit... LOL. How long did this take you?

[Noa Anon]

'd say half an hour to an hour... but I was also doing homework while shading, so I have no real idea. sorry

[Rulhoolie]

Aw, that's so cool! I love your technique, but I love the eye the most. Her eyelashes and the way you drew it is so pretty.

[Noa Anon]

thank you! originally, it was going to be part way open eek ... but I decided to keep it closed. whee