Oh god. Not this again. Look, we understand you want to show your new art here, but aren't you even going to take into consideration what we told you in your thread "Yuri Girl"?
Anyway. Again anatomy really needs work.
Neck seems nonexistant.
Face proportions arent working.
The hat is sitting on its own plane of reality.
Chest is puffing out way too far. It also has many other errors.
Shoulders way too high and sharp.
Forearms are disproportioned. Arms in general are disproportioned.
Both legs to appear to exist on an alternate plane of reality as well.
Foot isnt hanging at all when it should be.
No depth in the backround.
Many more.
Learn anatomy. I'll tell you again and again.

Learn it.
"w3ll 1 never asked for you opinion!!!
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You did by posting on this board.