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Codine my friend his Fursonas a Hyena. 

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Okay, animal anatomy, even humanoid animal anatomy, is different form human anatomy. How you have the chest sticking out in that one point makes it look like they either have breasts, or a large tumor in their chest. There really isn't anything else I can see in this one to critique.

But please, you have like two other topics on here already, try to limit yourself to just one every day or two days and put different pieces in one topic. Just because it's not fair to others who want critique on their work and their topic gets bumped of the page because so and so have like five up within a few moments of each other.


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Oh god. Not this again. Look, we understand you want to show your new art here, but aren't you even going to take into consideration what we told you in your thread "Yuri Girl"?

Anyway. Again anatomy really needs work.
Neck seems nonexistant.
Face proportions arent working.
The hat is sitting on its own plane of reality.
Chest is puffing out way too far. It also has many other errors.
Shoulders way too high and sharp.
Forearms are disproportioned. Arms in general are disproportioned.
Both legs to appear to exist on an alternate plane of reality as well.
Foot isnt hanging at all when it should be.
No depth in the backround.
Many more.

Learn anatomy. I'll tell you again and again.

Learn it.

"w3ll 1 never asked for you opinion!!! sad "
You did by posting on this board.
Oh Siler go draw something ...
Art is not unique if it is Flawless even Picasso had his day.Flaws are what make art and people Unique and different.
Reanata
Oh Siler go draw something ...


What does that mean.
Are you even going to respond to the criticism you are getting?
Stop whining when your art is critiqued. This isnt pat your a** heaven.

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