Mistress of Rain
Eri fox
What exactly do you want from the places you're contacting?
and what is the purpose of the project?
I think that's what you're letter is missing or at least not making clear.
sweatdrop
Umm, my professor mostly wanted me to find if there is a client pool for a project like this. So even if the places don't want it for themselves they think it would be something they could do in the future or something....
Purpose would be for me to learn about an animal, and try to create an educational exhibit that a park could use.
I'll refer you to what Latrans wrote about writing out what exactly you need from the places you contact.
as for the purpose, that's great, you can actually write out quite obviously: "The purpose of this project will be to help me gain experience and educate myself about the life, diet, and habitat of the chosen animal and to create an educational exhibit that can be used by a park or zoo."
You still need to add a line about what you are requesting. I am not quite sure myself or else I would give an example
sweatdrop