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Usually good stories are worth the wait. 3nodding
Chapter Seven: Before the Hunt

The mysterious man had given him directions to a particular building where he should begin his search within the next two days.

Aion took that to mean he had been given some time to set his affairs in order and make appropriate farewells. Following this train of thought, he guessed that there was a good chance that he would not be returning from this mission.

Nevertheless, he was feeling invigorated from his conversation with Isabelle the night before. It was only until he had opened up to her that he had realised how much of a burden his jumbled emotions had been. Knowing that she had always considered him a friend had been an unbelievable gift and he suspected that she didn’t even know how much it meant to him. All along he had thought he was alone but he had been wrong. She had been there. His first friend.

As night had fallen, Dortan had taken her daughter home, leaving Aion to try and think about his mission whilst fending off persistent thoughts of Isabelle and the things they had talked about.

“I’ve always thought of you as my friend.”

He smiled. Even now, those words filled him with warmth.

However, he had a task at hand and he was determined not to let his encounter with Isabelle create a weakness in his character. She was important to him, but she was not the purpose of his existence. He had but one purpose; he would find who had killed his parents and then he would destroy them.

To do that, he needed access to the information and power that the Exorcists possessed. This opportunity, in light of his failure during the examination, was almost a miracle.

Rounding a corner he found himself once more in the deserted alleyways of the lower district. It was dark, as the tall buildings blocked out the sun, and the sound of his feet echoed oddly. Praying that he didn’t run into smugglers or thieves, he spied the building that he was looking for. It was, from all appearances, an abandoned warehouse.

He circled around to find an entrance. A sliver of light danced across the footpath, flickering like candlelight. He craned his neck around a wall to find the source and saw a small part of the main road. The sunlight was flickering because a multitude of people were walking past, blocking out the light for a brief moment until they were gone.

All of a sudden, he knew where he was. It was the building he had climbed during the Exorcist exam to escape from Groot. And atop the building had been the nerve-racking encounter with a Tsukage witch.

Aion felt apprehension dawn inside him. Why this building? Coincidence?

Finding the entrance, he kicked his way through the remnants of an old wooden door that had, at one point in time, slid sideways to cover the large loading bay. Damp and time had rotted the wood to the point where the few jagged boards still in place gave way as Aion shouldered through the cracks.

He was greeted by pitch black darkness and almost instantly later, he was assaulted by the most horribly pungent smell of putrid fish. The smell was so strong he came on guard for a split second, thinking himself ambushed in the darkness.

As his eyes adjusted, he wrapped his mouth with his arm to fend off as much of the stench as possible. Several beams of light filtered in through the cracks in the door as well as from the ceiling above. Though none of them were strong enough to pierce the impenetrable blackness, a slight glint caught Aion’s eye.

Hurrying over to the source, he found a small dagger embedded in a nameless old crate with a small piece of folded parchment impaled beneath it. It was positioned so that the small handle was just in within one of the weak beams of light coming down from the ceiling. The fact that it had been capable of reflecting light in the given circumstances meant the quality of the metal was far beyond anything Aion had seen in the lower district.

Feeling certain that the dagger had been left there by design, as a way to test his skills of observation, Aion gripped the handle and pulled. The dagger jerked free with a crunching sound, taking a great deal of wood with it. The sound echoed unnaturally and felt far too loud for Aion’s liking. Feeling a chill run down his spine, he grabbed the parchment and turned for the exit.
A scampering sound fluttered across the roof.

He froze, straining to hear if there was any further movement. After counting out a full minute, he continued towards the exit, all senses on edge. He noticed the distant sound of dripping water and a soft, melodic scratching sound.

As he picked up the pace, his foot caught on something and he lurched forward, arms flailing for support. His hand caught on something and he grabbed instinctively.

Crash. A stack of crates toppled around him, amplified by the eerie blackness and silence to terrifying levels. He thrashed and got free, feeling as if the darkness was growing behind him, trying to consume him and swallow him for eternity.

Sprinting now, he lunged at the door shoulder first and charged through in a blast of splinters and dust. Swinging around, he crouched in preparation for whatever nameless horror was about to materialise out of the darkness.

After what felt like an hour, he noticed that his fingers were numb. Looking down, he saw his fingers clamped tightly around the dagger. They were going pale as he gradually lost circulation.
Realising now that nothing was forthcoming, he looked around with a great deal of embarrassment.

“I hate the dark,” he muttered.

* * *

Tenfis watched with a huge grin on his face, big even by his standards.

He choked down a laugh as his little prank came into fruition. It always amused him how fragile the human mind was. It took so little to make it snap and it was its own worst enemy. Truly, humans were self-destructive.

“Well, I’ve had my little fun,” he whispered to no one in particular. “Better get back to Lucent or he’ll get mad at me.”

Standing from where he had been crouching atop the old beams of the warehouse, he navigated through the blackness with ease. His disciplined mind was absent of both vertigo and the horrible illusions of dread that darkness tended to bring.

He saw potential in the boy but that was purely relative to his age. It would be long before the child became useful. Especially if he was still afraid of the dark.

Having taken a personal interest in the boy, Tenfis had dug up some old records. It turned out that all the missions he had taken were money-jobs, as the Exorcists referred to them. Whether this was by design or some crazy luck, the boy’s impressive record was not as vaunted as it seemed. Most of his targets hadn’t even been capable of fighting back.

No, if he was honest with himself, Tenfis had only two reasons why he was interested in the boy. Firstly because of his age. There were few Witch Hunters – as they called themselves – below the age of eighteen, simply because until then, they were not capable of stomaching the idea of living day-to-day with blood on their hands.

But most of all, Tenfis liked what he saw in the boy; he was a younger version of himself. He hid his true feelings behind a mask that nobody could see through.

* * *

Lucent glanced at the setting sun to judge the time before searching the road with his eyes once again.

Tenfis was late.

It wasn’t that he was worried about the man – he doubted there was anyone in the city that could fight the Exorcist – but rather he was annoyed that he had let the man talk him into this crazy scheme.

The detection of magic at Sigal had been more serious that it had first seemed. Over half of the entire Exorcist organisation had been deployed around Lumir to recruit new blood. Another quarter, at least, were absent on missions. That left the headquarters with only a quarter of its manpower. It had never crossed his mind that the Tsukage would be bold enough to attack the guild but if they were, now was the perfect time.

“Five more minutes then we march again,” he called out, not needing to raise his voice much for it to carry. “Then Tenfis can damn well run to catch up to us,” he added softly.

The giant named Groot sat quietly next to the one called Lux. The two had spoken little since the beginning of the journey and had fallen completely silent when it was clear none of their questions would be answered until they reached headquarters. He had given them no time to collect any personal belongings; they had followed the convoy from the moment the examination had ended.

Lucent was impatient to return. Tsukage sightings were rare and always deemed of critical concern. He knew five minutes would make little difference in the scheme of things, but he still felt like it was a waste to sit here and do nothing.

Tenfis, as resourceful and cunning as always, had unearthed a great asset. They would use the boy to discover the location of the Tsukage that had been in Sigal. This gave Lucent a few days head start on tracking them, as he had to return to the guild halls first. While it was within his power to order some of the Exorcists in the convoy to go ahead and begin tracking their enemies, there was no other officer ranked highly enough to lead them, with the exception of Tenfis and Lucent needed him by his side in case a fight was waiting for them at headquarters. Nevertheless, it was still an option he considered.

The boy, however, displayed exceptional skills during the tracking phase of the examination. Apparently, he had not only escaped from Groot, but had disappeared from the sights of the various examinees overseeing the test. He showed promise in the reconnaissance aspect of the job, at least, and for that reason Lucent had decided to send Tenfis back with more specific instructions, as well as some essential background data that the boy might need.

A flicker of movement on the horizon caught his attention. He could see a figure striding towards them, cresting a hill and outlined against the sleeping sun. However, five minutes was up.

“We march until darkness comes, and then a few hours after.”

Still, he was annoyed.

* * *

He would need provisions for at least a week of travel to supplement whatever he managed to catch on the trail.

Aion vaguely remembered his father showing him how to nock an arrow and draw a bowstring, but it had been more for the boy’s entertainment than any real educational benefit as he had been too young then. He still could not use the bow, though there were many times when he wished he could. It was all very well that he could swing a sword – he had spent months spying on the soldiers in the barracks and copying their stances – but his education in its use had its gaps. As a result, he had developed a very unique style that was well suited to the way he hunted his targets but lacking when it came to direct confrontations, as Groot had proven. At time such as these, Aion wished he could just stalk his target and drop him from a safe distance.

He opened the small sack he stored his coins in. The grey fabric was beginning to fray from the constant adhesion to the rough metal. He beheld the dismal condition of his savings. The unanticipated dip into the Divide he had been forced to make during the Exorcist exam had left his cloak with a strange smell. The water was not incredibly dirty, as it was naturally flowing, but it still picked up some contamination from the upper district. Not a few kids had used the convenient flowing water as a toilet when there was nowhere else nearby to relieve their bowels.
The cloak itself, however, had been thick and had trapped a lot of moisture inside it. The garment had kept Aion warm for the better part of two years and had soaked in its share of dust, sweat and blood. The damp only served to bring those two years’ worth of filth to the surface.

Aion had finally decided to replace the cloak, aided by his discomfort at the idea of wearing it for the next week. He had haggled himself a similar one, ankle length with a large hood that bundled up around his shoulders when left down. The cloak was made for people quite a bit wider than Aion so it completely encircled him when he let his arms stay at his side. As opposed to the black-grey of his old cloak, he had opted for a neutral brown.

The choice was not based on vanity alone; he expected the following days to take him near the arid lands to the south where it was obscenely hot during the day and deathly cold at night. The cloak would help him blend into the landscape, as well as keep him alive at night. It would most likely cook him during the day though, but at least his skin would be safe from the sun’s ravages.

Finally deciding, he exited his room and descended the rickety staircase nimbly. Dortan looked up at his approach from where he was standing behind the counter.

“Morning, lad. You’re up later than usual. Couldn’t sleep or something?”

Aion nodded noncommittally. The truth was, he had spent the entire night reading over the instructions he had retrieved from the warehouse. The candle in his room had been reduced to nothing but a white blob on his table.

“I need you to get some things for me.”

Dortan grunted and his manner changed, less concerned and more professional. “What do you need?”

“A coil of rope, a snare, two shivs and as much rations as I can afford.”

The large man raised a questioning eyebrow. “Going somewhere?”

“Yeah, I’ll be gone for at least a week.” As soon as he spoke, Aion regretted it. He sensed, more than saw, Dortan tense and felt suspicion tingle on the air.

“You haven’t taken a job from the Board, Aion,” said Dortan in an accusatory tone. “Where do you plan on going for a week?”

“Just ... thought I’d go brush up on my survival skills and do some hunting.”

Dortan grunted again and Aion could tell he wasn’t convinced. “How much money you got?”

Aion passed over his sack and Dortan peered inside, jingling the bag to stir up the contents at the bottom. He shook his head, seeing nothing but bronze with a few bits of silver here and there.

“Can you do it?” Aion asked nervously. He didn’t have a hope of accomplishing his mission without the proper supplies. If it came to it, he would steal; it was something that he harboured distaste towards but not enough so that he would not resort to it if required.

“I can, but you I hope your hunting is good because I won’t be able to get you much food.”

“Thank you.”

As he turned to leave, intent on rereading the note in his room again, Dortan grabbed his wrist. The large man’s hands were heavy and rough.

“Don’t do anything stupid, Aion. My daughter was very happy to see you and kept nagging me about when she could come over here again. Don’t you dare let her down by going and getting yourself killed.”

Aion nodded but said nothing. Finally, Dortan released him.

Trying not to walk too fast, he climbed the stairs back to his room. For a second, he had looked into Dortan’s eyes. They were hard and focused, the usual merry glint absent. He felt that stare pierce him, as if Dortan was reading his mind.

Putting the thought aside, he returned his attention to the matter at hand. After leaving the warehouse the day before, he had spent the few remaining hours before sundown asking around town. As he had expected, no one had seen anyone resembling the Tsukage girl. However, he knew the Exorcists had left through the north gate and if he was a Tsukage, he would be hurrying away in the opposite direction. It just so happened that the last time he saw the Tsukage witch, she was heading to the south gate, so the two bits of evidence coincided nicely. He was fairly certain his deduction was correct.

Not knowing how to use a bow, he would rely on foraging and trapping small animals. The rations Dortan would acquire served as backup in case he could find nothing. The rope was essential for both laying traps and scaling some parts of the rugged land he planned to venture into. He needed the shivs to gut the animals he caught; it would be a messy job trying to do it with a sword and daggers were too expensive.

All that was left was finding the trail.

It had been days already, and Aion was certain he wouldn’t be able to find the girl. However, all he needed was some sort of lead. Anything at all to hint at the location of the Tsukage and the stranger had promised him a position as an Exorcist. The arid landscape would provide good vision, with practically no trees to obscure his line of sight. If he could find even an abandoned campfire, he would be satisfied.

Sitting on his bed near the window, he unfolded the parchment and held it up to the light streaming in through the glass pane. The stranger had initially told him that he would make Aion an Exorcist if he found any clues as to the whereabouts of any Tsukage that had recently been in the area. He had given directions to the warehouse and told Aion that further clues could be found there, and that he was to investigate it within two days. The parchment left for him contained further details, but it was cryptic and he could not understand every word. Frowning, he read it again:

We have evidence to believe that at least one Tsukage witch had been in the city within the past week. Your task is to find any lead or clue to their whereabouts. A unit will be dispatched to Sigal to follow up on this case and will arrive in roughly two weeks. You are to report your findings to them. We leave with you the following report in the hopes that you may find it useful in your hunt.

Sigal, Lumir – 2 months and 13 days past spring.

Classification: Critical; Tsukage sighting.

Details: Tsukage scrying setup discovered at lower district in a warehouse to the south-west after burst of magic detected. Special unit performed preliminary sweep of the warehouse and found a dual river formation common in long distance scrying spells. It is believed that the target of the scrying was Exorcist headquarters. A wind mark was found on the rooftop and is believed to be the source of the disturbance alerting the special unit. Reason for its use is unknown but at least one of the targets is considered a Level Nine Enigma threat. A fragment of burned clothing identified culprits as Tsukage.

Consequent action: Dispatch commanded to return to headquarters with candidates at haste. Once there, a small three-man unit will be sent to investigate, lead by Tenfis of the Sixth Circle. External tracker contracted to begin search before arrival of Tenfis’s unit.


Aion frowned. It was too obscure. Hunting a cold trail was next to impossible. The only consolation was that his task was to find ‘any’ lead. At least he didn’t have to physically capture a Tsukage witch, a task that was probably far beyond him judging by his encounter during the Exorcist exam. And besides, the note said she was a Level Nine threat. He had never even seen anyone higher than a Three.

There were some parts of the note he didn’t understand. The ‘dual river formation’, ‘scrying’ and ‘wind mark’ were all alien terms to him. He guessed that they were technical terms and put them aside. The only hint he had was the strange symbol he had seen on the rooftop and concluded it was the ‘wind mark’ referred to in the note. As it got him no closer to finding the Tsukage, he paid it no heed.

He had a brief plan. He would follow the road south of Sigal and scout in a large zigzag for any signs of a recent traveller. The road was a busy trade route; if the witch had passed by an approaching merchant should have at least seen her. If she had avoided the road, he would find some trace of her to hint at the direction she was travelling in. Hopefully that would be enough for the Exorcists’ approval.

Still, it was a large amount of distance to cover and a very mundane approach. He was not looking forward to it.
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Chapter Eight: Badlands

Dried sweat caked his face in a fine layer of salty powder.

The scorching sun beat down on him relentlessly. There were no clouds to offer shade and what little wind blew across the land only served to send a wave of heat to wash over him.

He gazed around. As predicted, there were few trees to obscure his vision, but shimmering heat waves danced across the horizon, blurring details so that he had to investigate every single thing that caught his eye. So far, he had found nothing.

The last signs of animal life had been over two days ago. He was cutting dangerously into his rations and water supply, and would be forced to head back soon.

Glancing upwards to see the position of the sun, he estimated at least three hours until sunset, at which point the stifling heat would change to a chilling cold with surprising speed. He had to find shelter soon.

After the first night, he had found that digging into an existing depression shielded him from the worst of the cold. The parched, cracked land retained some of the heat it absorbed during the day, and when that was gone at least it would protect him from the screeching winds that picked up when the sun fell.

He ran through the events of the last few days in his head again and concluded that he was in a pretty hopeless situation. But more than the unmerciful elements, the nagging hunger and thirst, the haunting ache of fatigue or even the sheer depressing sight of a land that was so drained of life that even the earth looked old and withered, more than all of these, it was the feeling of failure that hurt him the most. Some time ago, a part of his mind had admitted defeat.

He had fought off this feeling, knowing it to be the harbinger of failure, but it had sown itself in his mind and grew daily as more searching yielded nothing. The task was simply hopeless; one person could never achieve it.

Deciding that he’d had enough for the day, he cast around for a serviceable shelter for the night. The land was uneven, rising and falling gently in small hills and outcroppings of rock. Either of these would be a better place to sleep than out in the open.

A particularly tall hill stood to his left so he stumbled towards it hoping vainly for some respite. It was unlikely, though, for the night winds were fickle and he would have to wake up and readjust himself every few hours to avoid sand blowing into his face as he slept.

Not only had the heat sucked out all energy and motivation from him, he felt as though it had taken some of his consciousness too. His mind was unusually blank, his thoughts simple and base. He could not form clever plans or make the best of his situation because his brain seemed to have simply shut down. Without even noticing it, he had crested the rise.

It took a long moment for him to realise what he was seeing.

A few black, withered trees littered the landscape, but as they got closer to the hill he was standing atop, they seemed stronger and more alive. It was something that had escaped his notice but he now knew the cause. There was a small spring of water bubbling out of the ground with an obviously man made ring of stones around it to keep it contained in a small pool.

It was a mark of how desperate his water situation was getting that he noticed this pool before he saw the three white tents pitched around it. They were pale ochre like the dusty ground around them and large enough for him to stand in.

His moment of dumbfounded recognition passed and he quickly dropped to the floor, looking around for any signs of life.

It was probably not the witch he was after, for there were three tents, but it was probable that she had rendezvoused with allies along the way. Other possibilities entered his mind, each more unpleasant than the last.

He observed for another two minutes, counting out the seconds slowly in his mind. When nothing moved, he stood slowly, reaching for his sword.

Suddenly, he could see the dark blue sky and before he could wonder why, his head slammed into the dusty ground. As his vision blurred, he saw faces wrapped in cloths showing nothing but the eyes, deep red and unfriendly.

* * *


The door to the Hunting Hall was always open but the authority and self-assured power with which he carried himself elicited the same reaction as if he had kicked the door down.

The gentle c***k of glass and cutlery petered off into an uncomfortable silence as the usual rowdy atmosphere sobered in an instant. Every head in the Hall was turned towards to newcomer, standing tall in his black cloak with the hood thrown back.

Ignoring the obvious disruption that his presence had caused, Tenfis waved to the two men flanking him one step behind. One was a giant who practically had to squat to enter and the other was a familiar face that was unusually silent.

A draft teased the candles and torches, casting light and shadow in a fluttering dance that seemed to bring out the red tint of Tenfis’s mane of light brown hair. His usual wide grin and the expression of one on the verge of laughter was replaced by a small smile of bemusement. He found it amusing that, invariably, every Hunter ended up idolising the Exorcists as if they were gods.

Walking unhurriedly to the counter, he could feel every eye in the room trained on him. With an expression that was bordering on smug, he sat himself directly in front of Dortan and propped his chin up with his hand while his elbow rested on the back of his other palm.

He returned Dortan’s stare for slightly longer than necessary.

“Where is the boy?”

On closer examination, Dortan was a lot tenser than the others in his establishment. He reminded Tenfis of a taut bowstring, ready to snap into action at any moment, whereas the other Hunters sat speechless like dazed deer.

“Dunno what you’re talkin’ ‘bout,” grunted Dortan, waiting slightly longer than he should have to reply.

Suddenly, Tenfis threw his head back and laughed uproariously. It was as though all the built of tension of the room had exploded out of him and the sound was deafening as it pierced the silence. Hunters began to mutter, but spoke in hushed tones, as if afraid to draw attention to themselves.

“The boy, Dortan,” Tenfis repeated when he finally stopped laughing. “What other boy could I be talking about.”

Unable to avoid it any longer, Dortan opted for a nonchalant shrug. “Dunno. Went out almost a week ago.”

Tenfis chuckled to himself, having not fully mastered his mirth yet. Beside him, his companions shuffled their feet uncomfortably. The smaller of the two was looking around nervously as much of the attention directed to Tenfis had shifted to him.

“Dunno what’s so funny either, boy.”

This comment threatened to send Tenfis into another fit of laughter. He took a deep breath to control himself and laid his palms down on the counter to allow him to lean forward conspiratorially.

“It’s funny because you’re in such a unique position, Dortan. It’s like you’ve walked into a battlefield and are held down by the crossfire. You belong to neither side but you are at the mercy of both. That’s what I find so funny, Dortan.”

There was a moment of silence until Dortan grunted noncommittally and shrugged. Picking up an empty glass, he began to clean it with a rag as if Tenfis was not there.

He sighed and all the humour vanished instantly from his face, to be replaced by cold, calculating seriousness.

“The boy, Dortan. Don’t make me ask again.”

“Asked for rope, a snare and some rations,” said Dortan without looking up. “Didn’t tell me where he was going but figured he went south.”

Tenfis smiled again.

“Thank you.”

* * *


He awoke in a daze.

When he tried to groan, he found the sound got caught in his throat in an odd sensation. Reaching up to massage his throat, he found himself unable to move his arms.

A momentary panic swept over him. He felt as if he had lost control of his body.

After struggling for a moment, he rolled onto his face and realised that he must be bound. Blinking quickly to clear his vision, he found himself in a dimly lit corner of a tent.

His head ached as he tried to piece together the last thoughts that had entered his mind before he had blacked out.

Tents ... there had been three. Pitched around a pool.

With a jolt, his memories flooded back. There had been red eyes.

Besides the sinister connotations of having red eyes, it was unnatural. He had never seen nor heard of anyone in Sigal with eyes like that. There were all shades of blue, green and brown, but never red. Even his own pale blue-grey eyes were considered an abnormality.

His conclusion was that his kidnappers were either witches, the hue of their eyes a result of some unknown magic, or they were foreigners. He had heard of the many great nations beyond the borders of Lumir, but that was the limit of his worldly experience.

He rolled on his back and forced himself upright into a sitting position. His wrists were bound tightly behind his back and his elbows pressed against his body by another rope. His ankles and knees were likewise bound and a cord of rope held a gag in his mouth. As soon as he took notice of the gag, it became painfully uncomfortable. He tried to turn his mind away from it but its nagging discomfort remained.

The tent flap was down but nobody was inside. A pair of blankets were neatly rolled on one side of the tent and a comically short-legged table on the other side. Aion sat directly facing the tent flap, a slim support pole with an unlit torch rising up between him and the exit.

The fabric of the tent looked opaque so he knew it was dark outside. If it were still daylight, it was likely that some of the sun’s glow would have leaked through. This reassured Aion; he had only been unconscious for a matter of hours. On the other hand, it was also possible that he had been out for over a full day and it was his second night of capture.

His head throbbed in pain, driving any further thought out of his mind. The gag in his mouth dried up his saliva, adding to his already desperate thirst.

Unable to think clearly, he lay down again. He tried to fight the urge to sleep but quickly, the blackness took him.

He awoke again, to the uncomfortable feeling of something rough being drawn across his skin.
His eyes flew open, only to shut again instantly with a grimace.

Slowly, he cracked open his eyelids, letting his eyes adjust to the near-blinding light. Through these slits, he took a look at his situation.

His first reaction was not good.

He seemed to be moving but he could discern little else due to the large quantities of dust being blown into his face. He heard the clopping sound of horses but did not feel the expected bouncing.

Briefly after this thought, he came to a realisation that made his assessment of the situation go from not good to very bad. The rough feeling was the gritty, parched earth. He was being dragged behind horses by his feet. If it wasn’t for the gag, he was sure he’d have swallowed a liberal amount of the dust that the horses were kicking into his face.

He began to list to the side and soon found himself in the uncomfortable position where half his face and chest were dragging across the floor. Struggling to return to a sitting position, he managed to blind himself with more dust as he unconsciously opened his eyes to better balance himself. The badlands around him were still too compact to turn into a desert but they were well on their way. Instead of sand, the compact, rocky earth gathered a film of dust as the elements whittled away at the surface. Most of this was now on Aion’s face.

Suddenly, the dragging stopped and he was conscious of men dismounting. He lay still with his eyelids clamped firmly over irritating flecks of dust that felt as if they were small rocks. Regardless, he willed himself into stillness, each moment dragging on into an uncomfortable, torturous eternity where he expected, at any moment, the cruel touch of metal on his skin.

Someone shouted something that he could not comprehend. A pair of rough hands grabbed him and forced him up. Realising that playing dead wasn’t going to work, he forced his eyes open but could not stop himself from blinking at the irritating grit in his eyes.

There were six men, their bodies full wrapped in white rolls of cloth in a similar style to what Aion wore. Even their cloaks, the same rusty brown as the land around them, resembled Aion’s. The only difference was that their wrappings covered their faces too, leaving only the hair and eyes exposed. For a moment he was hopeful; perhaps they thought he was one of their people? Then he realised that would have made the whole knocking him unconscious and dragging him around rather unnecessary.

Two of the men knelt beside him, holding him in so firmly that he could barely move. Of the other four that were still seated in their saddles, one pulled his horse around and reined in as close to Aion as possible without trampling him. Aion could see this one was different from the others. While the others were wrapped entirely in white, this one had stripes of blue mixed in along his sword arm and another band of blue across his forehead. As he settled his horse, the sun glanced off a small metal badge on his cloak above his heart.

“You Lumir person?”

The accent was thick but he could understand it and nodded slowly in reply.

“You come Siddharth no caravan. Maybe spy?”

He didn’t know what ‘Siddharth’ was but he suspected that he was being accused of attempting to spy on a foreign nation because he had travelled alone, rather than with a merchant caravan. Knowing his answer made little difference, he shook his head in denial.

“Maybe young boy. Maybe good spy.” He spoke haltingly before pausing for a moment. From his angle and due to the strangers’ attires, he could not read any emotion on the man’s face, but he was evidently thinking. Finally, he proclaimed: “You come Sahartha with us. Maybe execute. Maybe slave.”

With that, the two men holding him released their grip and resaddled. They manoeuvred their horses back into formation and the group began to ride again, dragging Aion behind them.

For what felt like hours, he fought to stay on his back, but the bumps and jolts along his uncomfortable ride threatened to tilt him onto his face. After a long process of trial and error, he found the best he could do was to stare at the back of the horse dragging him. Watching the large packs and bedroll hanging off the animal’s rump seemed to give him a little more sense of balance.

As the sky began to show signs of darkening, he could no longer fight off the creeping blackness that sought to overwhelm his consciousness. Dehydration was taking its toll on him and soon the large amount of cuts and grazes he had sustained would add blood loss into the equation. His skin was raw and bleeding and his vision blurry.

Soon the arid backdrop faded as transparent scenes played across his mind’s eye. He could still see the endless expanse of drought-stricken land but other images moved too, as if his delusion was a thin fabric lain across the solid colour of reality. Unable to muster to strength to stave off the memories that he did not wish to relive, he could do nothing but watch, delirious and helpless.

He saw the manila walls, no longer spotless but painted with blood. The horror was sharply contrasted by a series of brief memories, moments of happiness. He saw his first kill, his second, and every kill since. The final looks upon their faces were frighteningly vivid. He saw his dark, empty room from the corner where the bed nestled under the single window and recalled the countless nights where tears had broken through his mask and loneliness had gnawed away at his resolve.

The images surged on relentlessly.

Then he saw a young girl who always approached him as if he was just another boy. She made him feel normal.

“I’ve always thought of you as my friend.”

By the time it was dark, he was unconscious again, dragging limply across the floor with his head lolling lifelessly.



This time when he awoke he was not as confused.

He saw the same interior of the same tent, with its contents in almost the exact same position. He looked down at himself and was horrified. His skin was completely torn away in many places, the friction of his transport having torn through his clothing. Blood had soaked into his white bandages, staining them with little red flowers that bloomed on the now dusty orange material.

The only good thing about his situation was that his gag had been removed. Not that his mouth was any less dry. This was the fourth night he had spent with his captives and they had only fed him once – a small piece of strange, hard bread and a bit of dried meat. If he was conscious at night, they allowed him one mouthful of water.

Despite the time that had passed, nobody had spoken to him. Every day felt identical to the last, numbing his mind with the repetitive cycle of pain, unconsciousness and awakening. He knew it was the fourth night but if he did not think about it, he felt as if this was his daily life. The suffering just stretched on without any sign of abating. It did not help that they travelled leisurely, trotting along as if Aion was not close to death – as he felt – and that they had all the time in the world.

A rustle of movement disrupted the monotony of his captivity and thus piqued his attention. A few silent moments passed and then he could hear the crashing thunder of galloping horses.
Deadened by the monotony and unending pain, he rolled himself to the tent flap and poked his head out, desperate for any change in the daily routine so that he could feel like something might change.

Arrayed around the camp stood the six men that had captured Aion. They faced the oncoming horses with their knees slightly bent, their bodies taut and ready to explode into action. Each one of them carried a large, wicked looking sword fashioned from what looked like a single piece of metal. The hilts were only safe to grip due to their being wrapped thickly. There was no guard but curves and hooks near the base of the weapon could be used in a similar fashion. The weapons looked like a long, stylised image of a single flame and for a moment, he thought he could remember the name of the weapon.

As the riders approached, all other thoughts fled him. There were three strangers in long black cloaks, their hoods over their heads to protect their eyes from some of the dust. Two were normal sized and the last was huge, his cloak coming slightly short of his knees. Almost larger than his horse, this rider looked almost comical.

Suddenly, Aion was certain there was only one person in the world as big as that man. He didn’t know whether to laugh and run towards them or flee in panic.

The riders slowed their mounts as they neared the six men. Pulling up, they dismounted and approached slowly, with their palms up to show that they were not hostile. The giant and the shorter of the three riders flanked one man who reached up slowly to pull back his hood and reveal a friendly smile.

He spoke briefly with the leader of the six men who had taken Aion hostage, before looking over the man’s shoulder at Aion.

“I found you, lion cub! You’ve gotten yourself into some trouble here. I’ll get you in a second.”

Aion recognised the voice as the stranger who had given him the mission. He was an Exorcist!
Feeling his hopes rise at dizzying speeds his heart almost burst when the Exorcist was cut off. Shouting short sharp words, the leader of the six positioned himself between Aion and his would-be saviours.

The Exorcist replied in the same language but from the tone of things, negotiations weren’t going well. The two argued back and forth with rising intensity until finally, all six men crouched low and drew back their weapons to ready themselves for attack.

In response, the Exorcist threw the edges of his cloak over his shoulders with a deft motion of his hands to reveal a gleaming silver breastplate with a small stylised sun in gold over the heart: the mark of the Exorcists. His gloved hand moved slowly to rest on the hilt of his sword, its scabbard hanging so low at his side that it almost touched the floor where it glowed beside the metal plates sown into the black fabric of his aketon to protect his shins.

As if a switch had been flicked, the Exorcist stood with deadly poise, exuding power and menace so strong that it made the air thick with tension. The breeze died and it seemed the entire landscape went silent in anticipation. The strain was so great that Aion froze, unwilling to move a muscle, as if the slightest disturbance would cause the situation to explode.

The six men deferred to their leader, waiting for his signal. Finally, they saw a small shake of the head. Straightening, they clipped their large swords into the straps across their backs and the tension in the air dissipated as if it were nothing but a memory.

“A smart move,” laughed the Exorcist. “You might have been able to kill me but neither of us would profit from losing men to fight over a boy.”

Two of the men who had captured him approached and grabbed him roughly. Not bothering to untie him, they practically threw him at the Exorcist’s feet.

“You’ve had better days, I’m guessing.” He laughed, all traces of his former menace gone. “My name is Tenfis, I was the one who gave you this botched mission.”

Tenfis’s companions came closer and Aion saw that they were indeed Groot and Lux. Quickly, Lux set about freeing Aion from his bonds while Groot made an effort to avoid eye contact.

Aion struggled to his feet but collapsed back into Lux’s arms. Days of misuse made his legs unstable, as if for a moment he had forgotten how to stand. Hunger, dehydration and blood less made his whole body feel weak, and any movement he tried to make only resulted in an awkward trembling motion.

Tenfis’s look sobered for a moment as he observed Aion’s condition. “Better bring the horses, he won’t be able to walk for a while.”

Groot hastened to obey while Lux cradled Aion. While it would have been a stretch to call them friends, they both shared a common past and were united by both their plight and the Hunting Hall. If not friends, they were at least comrades.

As the giant figure of Groot returned with an equally sized horse, he grabbed Aion by the shoulders and lifted him up onto the back of the beast as if he was just another one of the empty saddlebags upon which Groot laid him. Clinging unsteadily to the horse’s dark brown coat, he felt fatigue from all the excitement sink in. Knowing that he had only moments of consciousness left, he took one last look around.

The six men that had taken him captive were crouched warily around their campfire. Their weapons were replaced by food but they looked no less menacing. Their leader made eye contact with Aion for a second and he marvelled at his good fortune. If he hadn’t been found, who knows what the future would have held? He’d either be dead or a slave for life.

Aware that Aion’s consciousness was slipping, Lux pushed him towards the neck of the horse and mounted behind him. Guiding the horse into a gentle canter, he followed the retreating forms of Groot and Tenfis.

The gentle bouncing of the horse’s back lulled Aion back to sleep where he dreamed of the past, of blood and regret and a time where his father had bounced him up and down on his knee.
By the way, I'd appreciate it very much if everybody still reading this could just say something. Even just a "Hello", so I know who's actually reading the new chapters.
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wink think I'm addicted.....the more I read, the more I want to read!!!!! surprised heart heart heart
gaaah its so good~ ~
i really wish i could write this goooood~ emotion_kirakira
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heart sweatdrop Now it gets harder. You have all these characters and must satisfy your audience as to each ending. By the way, I like picture one too. It's more in line with what we've read so. heart far......... heart heart heart
Personally, I am not the best at editing, I thought I would mention that you use a lot of adverbs. Every few lines there is an -ly. I cant help but think there could be a better way to put some things then with an -ly word. I think it would help it flow better as well.

Other than that I am liking it and going to slowly read through. I have Subscribed as well.

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