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Post: 6303300_1 created on Sun, 27 Feb 2005 21:37:47 +0000
Posted: Sun, 27 Feb 2005 21:37:47 +0000

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Post: 6303300_2 created on Sun, 27 Feb 2005 23:09:35 +0000
Posted: Sun, 27 Feb 2005 23:09:35 +0000

The punctuation was kinda lousy, sorry to say it. And for some reason your quotations have become strange symbols which make it hard to read. The sentence structure did'nt seem correct either.

Although with those factors aside I liked it.

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