Symphony

[Igby]

Holy HandGrenade

I liked it. At first I was kind of thinking that it would be a boring little thing on orchestras from some old person... (Despite the fact that we're on Gaia. Tee hee.)
I love orchestra music, used to go watch them play constantly with my mother when I was younger, but this was quite unique. I really enjoyed the whole 'conducting the screams' part. I didn't notice any errors, but that's probably because I was just reading, not correcting. GOOD JOB!

Many thanks! heart

Who's next? whee

[Igby]

6:23am...bumpz.

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Up.

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And again. heart

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Pleasez. blaugh

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Ideas on how this could be improved would get you ever so much love. heart

All you need is love, yo.

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Ta-da.

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Flump.

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Ok it seems no one else will point this out, so it's up to me. Damn my grammar nazi habits.

Second paragraph, fourth sentence. Used their when it should be there.

Ninth paragraph, last sentence. Spelled conductor wrong.

That's all I've come across. I loooove it. I think I've already told you, though. Heh..

[Igby]

peiormentis

Ok it seems no one else will point this out, so it's up to me. Damn my grammar nazi habits.

Second paragraph, fourth sentence. Used their when it should be there.

Ninth paragraph, last sentence. Spelled conductor wrong.

That's all I've come across. I loooove it. I think I've already told you, though. Heh..

Thank you! I'll fix them up soon. ^^ heart