**~Sweet Revenge~** Critiques Please! :D

Do you think I did a good job with the criteria I was given?

Yes :D	87.5%	[ 7 ]
No ^^'	0.0%	[ 0 ]
Could use some help...	12.5%	[ 1 ]
Total Votes:			[ 8 ]

[Faryn Von Ovine]

Fluffles Mcgee

I glanced down at the little black schedule book lying open in front of me on the desk before exclaiming, “It says here that you are our 1,000th customer! Congratulations! You have one a full-day, top-quality make-over on the house. My name is Addie and I will be taking care of you today.”

I assume you meant Won xD

Yes, actually. I had. The problem is I was writing this during class and my teacher kept walking past so I was extremely distracted while trying to hide it x3

[CupcakeAmi]

Pai-Pai the Awesome

CupcakeAmi

Pai-Pai the Awesome

CupcakeAmi

Pai-Pai the Awesome

CupcakeAmi

What are your lips btw? I'm lovin the evil avi. heart

My lips and eyes are a pair actually. Passionate Vocalist.

Ah, I thought that was familiar. T^T I have it in mah wish listy. Along with 9,685,866 other things. (_ _)

I have the same problem. <<... So many wants, so little moneys.

XD right. I keep thinking that maybe if I buckled down and saved everytime I earn some gold, that I'd have enough but, I get bored sometimes of the items I have so I buy a new one and break the bank. -_-; Happens all the time.

I know how that is. I have been struggling with that a lot lately in fighting myself off because there is something I REALLY wanna buy but it costs almost 3mil.

3mil!? What is it? O_O

[Faryn Von Ovine]

CupcakeAmi

Pai-Pai the Awesome

CupcakeAmi

Pai-Pai the Awesome

CupcakeAmi

Ah, I thought that was familiar. T^T I have it in mah wish listy. Along with 9,685,866 other things. (_ _)

I have the same problem. <<... So many wants, so little moneys.

XD right. I keep thinking that maybe if I buckled down and saved everytime I earn some gold, that I'd have enough but, I get bored sometimes of the items I have so I buy a new one and break the bank. -_-; Happens all the time.

I know how that is. I have been struggling with that a lot lately in fighting myself off because there is something I REALLY wanna buy but it costs almost 3mil.

3mil!? What is it? O_O

Lady Luck... I've wanted it since it first came out...