Otaku_Keeii
I'm killing this forum*stab stab* DIE! >.< WHY DO I SUCK AT WRITING
I don't mean to sound rude, but why are you so angry at people who are trying to help you? They aren't doing this out of meanness or spitefulness. Your idea behind your story seems fine, but you're writing it as if the reader KNOWS what's going on.
I have the same problem. You have to remember that what you can see in your head must be put down in specific details. What does the surrounding area look like? What does the main character look like? Without detail and meaning, those are just words.
Also, I don't mean to be a grammar N***, but your spelling and grammar needs checking also. It's for the reader's benefit, too.
Don't become devastated. Revise and listen to your audience, taking in every thing they have to offer and thanking them. It's the only way to improve.