"Dilly's Dream"

[star_warrior20]

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Brandon "Dilly" Dill has dreamed of a friend's death & return as a ghost werewolf three times & is afraid of what may happen to her if it comes true.

EDIT: Brandon "Dilly" Dill has dreamed of a friend's death & return as a ghost werewolf three times & is afraid of what may happen to her if it comes true. Yet there's something about his dream he misunderstood.

[Danube]

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