Post Your Poem

[Mad.Scientist.Miz]

Post whatever poem you wish to make public to the Gaian Eye, and let them be reviewed by whoever chooses. I will begin with my poem--

The air is thick with poison that stains my clothes,

It's smell sticks on the walls with yellow hues;

It's evil fills her body, from her head to her toes.

Shake the box and light the match,

It's plot will devour her, destroy her, and take her.

I can only sit and watch.

I count the hours, of her last days.

Dare not tell her, it might scare her.

But watching her cough and spit scares me in most ways.

Midnight hours, awake and barely alive.

It's the damn habit that keeps you up.

It's not just some insomniac drive.

Oh mother, how you lay there--

With your habit still lit.

How I wish i could have stopped you.

But I guess no one can stop it.

[Umiman]

Shouldn't this be in the poetry secion? 3nodding

Ark...