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Post: 4918658_1 created on Tue, 07 Dec 2004 00:45:04 +0000
Posted: Tue, 07 Dec 2004 00:45:04 +0000

That's the name now though any segestions can be PMed to me!

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Post: 4918658_2 created on Tue, 07 Dec 2004 00:50:12 +0000
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Post: 4918658_3 created on Tue, 07 Dec 2004 02:35:57 +0000
Posted: Tue, 07 Dec 2004 02:35:57 +0000

Hum.....this is cute, Light. You've got a few mistakes here and there, but you've gotten a lot better! The only problem I have is how much Alex sounds like Elie...That kinda bugs me.

Other then that, I like it...especially Cody.... twisted

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Post: 4918658_4 created on Wed, 08 Dec 2004 05:43:13 +0000
Posted: Wed, 08 Dec 2004 05:43:13 +0000

Woot! Fear me, for I do bump up thyn thread! *glomps Light and ruffles her hair* ninja Rawr! *runs off*

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Post: 4918658_5 created on Fri, 10 Dec 2004 00:31:37 +0000
Posted: Fri, 10 Dec 2004 00:31:37 +0000

Yes sis I know it is a lot like Elie though only with here good stikes at the casino. She was doing awsome that day. With the tonfa blasters I have my character have them because I LOVE THOSE THIS! THERE AWSOME. IF I HAD TO CHOSE A WEAPON IT WOULD HAVE TO BE THEM.

P.s Alex takes after me not elie! Having money is fun!

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Post: 4918658_6 created on Mon, 20 Dec 2004 18:24:14 +0000
Posted: Mon, 20 Dec 2004 18:24:14 +0000

Light_Angel_Storm

Sorry chicka...but Alex does not remind me of you.....And I'd be the one to notice......

I understand about the blaster thingys.....but the whole lost memory as well makes it a little too like Elli.

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Post: 4918658_7 created on Mon, 27 Dec 2004 19:52:47 +0000
Posted: Mon, 27 Dec 2004 19:52:47 +0000

*pokes Light*

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Post: 4918658_8 created on Mon, 27 Dec 2004 20:12:20 +0000
Posted: Mon, 27 Dec 2004 20:12:20 +0000

Oooh Hi night
Well this is good maybe look at the way you jump into things. Like how Cory accepted an offer from someone he knew for 3 minutes. Also check the way your wording somethings otherwise really good

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Post: 4918658_9 created on Mon, 27 Dec 2004 21:15:13 +0000
Posted: Mon, 27 Dec 2004 21:15:13 +0000

Hi Meku! Happy now Light? Other people have seen your work! Now...why don't you get your lazy little behind off of the couch...and get on here...and update for us?!?! No more FanFiction for you!!!!!! And no more TV!!!!!!

Michael: You are such a hypocrite....

Night: *grins* I know! But that's what big sister's are for!

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Post: 4918658_10 created on Tue, 04 Jan 2005 03:07:11 +0000
Posted: Tue, 04 Jan 2005 03:07:11 +0000

Well thanks don't worry nearly done with the next section! I have more people reading it now! *starts twirling around*

Cory: Phsyco-path...

Light: *poats* But...it's my birthday...I'm just trying to have fun...*crocodile tears*

Cory: I give up. stare

Light: *starts jumping up and down* I did it, I did it... *cheesy victory dance*