Nadia's Story (To be retitled)

[Jaymis]

Clemence Amorette

Jaymis

thank you for the suggestions i was trying to figure out how to work the accident part thats what came to mind while i was typing.
thou im having a little trouble with the next part of it with y Raven didnt show up for the meeting/date/ what ever you wanna call it. still cant come up with a reason care to help?

No problem dear, glad the suggestions were helpful. ^.^ There can be a number of reasons since they're adults now. My examples are sort of based on what some people might say in real life if they missed meeting up with someone.

Some explanations could be:
His boss wouldn't let him leave early.
He was doing something and forgot to check the time which resulted in him completely missing the time set for the get together.
He could have been at his parent's place visiting and had to come up with a valid cover up so they didn't know it was Nadia he was meeting.
Perhaps he had an emergency with one of his friends/co-workers and had to rush them to the hospital.
Napped far too long.
His car had a flat or needed to be towed.
Got stuck with being at an event/gathering because someone couldn't make it. (More like a job thing)
Forced to go on a date even though he already had one. (Like some woman who really likes him that is pushy, and forces him to take her to the movies or out to eat. That sort of situation)

xox Man, there are multiple ways for him to not show up depending on how you have him set in the present time. So I guess depending on his occupation and his social circle will influence the reasons as to why he wasn't there. If you know what he does for a living (his job) and who he socialize with (his friends, family, co-workers, etc.) then you can factor that in for excuses for why he couldn't show up.

thanks i figure it out your suggestions were very helpful ill see what i can do about updating the story today