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Needs work. 0.21691176470588 21.7% [ 59 ]
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I just finished reading everything you wrote. I love it! You really need to work on your grammar, but other than that, the story is great. 3nodding
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Great story! biggrin

I was expecting Maria to wear the dress Anaya gave her to dance and that Bear would ask her to go with him though... confused
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wow. i just re-read those two chapters, which i forgot i had read. mrgreen
Hey! This is Chocolate Penguin xDD
I LOVE YOU STORY! xDD
Im so close to tears everytime she thinks about saying goodbye :O
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It's good so far, Chi... Can't wait for the next update. I'ts been so long since the last one...
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It's good so far, Chi... Can't wait for the next update. I'ts been so long since the last one...

it feels like years.....
it has been a very long time

[the former green_moment]
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*jeopardy music*
hurry up!!!! i cant wait.

*checks thread for anything new*
crying crying crying
updates pleassee???
chii???
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oh, come on, im going crazy over here!!!! *goes into fetal position* back and forth.......
Please...update this... *sad face*
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*walks up with a sleeping bag.* i am not moving until you post the next chapter! biggrin
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*sigh* Hope you post the next chapter soon.

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