It's nice, I like the vocabulary at the beginning. Although you could've used other words than "blush," as you've used it.. A LOT.
But it's okay. c:
i was silently hoping for a sex scene
idk what else to use for blush, then flush and 'cheeks heating up' ;3;
i might get banned if i typed a sex scene, and that would only make it more awkward D: you wouldn't imagine how flustered and embarrassed i was while typing just the innocent story ;3;