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sooo uhh whatcha azz holes talking bout :O?

huh? ;w;
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OMG ESAN YOU'RE WRITING
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It's nice, I like the vocabulary at the beginning. Although you could've used other words than "blush," as you've used it.. A LOT.

But it's okay. c:

i was silently hoping for a sex scene
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OMG ESAN YOU'RE WRITING
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It's nice, I like the vocabulary at the beginning. Although you could've used other words than "blush," as you've used it.. A LOT.

But it's okay. c:

i was silently hoping for a sex scene

idk what else to use for blush, then flush and 'cheeks heating up' ;3;
i might get banned if i typed a sex scene, and that would only make it more awkward D: you wouldn't imagine how flustered and embarrassed i was while typing just the innocent story ;3;
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Plox is always here. emotion_awesome emotion_awesome emotion_awesome emotion_awesome emotion_awesome

and here's the inspiration for my story, my beautiful sarah~ ;D

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you're beautiful to me, my love~ and you always will be >;D
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Plox was here too. emotion_awesome
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Plox is always here. emotion_awesome emotion_awesome emotion_awesome emotion_awesome emotion_awesome

and here's the inspiration for my story, my beautiful sarah~ ;D

Noohhh, I'm not "beautiful" r////r
PLOOOOX YOUR LIEING YOUR TOTALTTY HAWT
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Plox was here too. emotion_awesome
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Plox is always here. emotion_awesome emotion_awesome emotion_awesome emotion_awesome emotion_awesome

and here's the inspiration for my story, my beautiful sarah~ ;D

Noohhh, I'm not "beautiful" r////r
PLOOOOX YOUR LIEING YOUR TOTALTTY HAWT
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OMG ESAN YOU'RE WRITING
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It's nice, I like the vocabulary at the beginning. Although you could've used other words than "blush," as you've used it.. A LOT.

But it's okay. c:

i was silently hoping for a sex scene

I didn't pay much attention to his usage of "blush." xD I was too busy correcting his punctuation and grammar and stuff.

I was too.
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surprised gfdhfdgfbmj So beautiful ;w; Your grammar is amazing too, compared to mine D8

awwwww, ty sis~ ;D but my grammar isn't that good, sarah's pointing out over 9000 grammar mistakes as we type~ ;3;

Indeed. :v But your grammar is more better than mine -w-

your grammar was pretty good when i read one of your fanfictions~ we're equal in grammarness >;D


Plox still corrected it xD She corrects everything

oh XD she's like our own personal english teacher ;u;
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you're beautiful to me, my love~ and you always will be >;D


WELL, YOU'LL ALWAYS BE CUTE TO ME? r//r
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and here's the inspiration for my story, my beautiful sarah~ ;D

Noohhh, I'm not "beautiful" r////r
PLOOOOX YOUR LIEING YOUR TOTALTTY HAWT


FACK NO. >:C
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surprised gfdhfdgfbmj So beautiful ;w; Your grammar is amazing too, compared to mine D8

awwwww, ty sis~ ;D but my grammar isn't that good, sarah's pointing out over 9000 grammar mistakes as we type~ ;3;

Indeed. :v But your grammar is more better than mine -w-

your grammar was pretty good when i read one of your fanfictions~ we're equal in grammarness >;D


Plox still corrected it xD She corrects everything

oh XD she's like our own personal english teacher ;u;

Better than your personal Goddess... r///r
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"Cheeks tinted with a light crimson."
"A shade of red loomed over her face."
"Her cheeks flushed with color."

Lololol -- I roleplay o 3o


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He also had some grammar mistakes. classified_fu

i know because they were kissing and near a bed and stuff

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