Finding Mr. Perfect - A Gay High School Romance (Updated)

Can you see the story working as a comic?

Yes	56.4%	[ 22 ]
No	7.7%	[ 3 ]
Somewhat	20.5%	[ 8 ]
Gold!	15.4%	[ 6 ]
Total Votes:			[ 39 ]

[mina352]

Blue Torquise

HAHAHAHA This part was funny, and about the penguins hilarious but for a second i thought sam would say "Really? I think penguins are pretty cute" But your part was better, huh, i haven't read any gay stories but this one caught my attention. Continue the stories, I'll be sure to support you -thumbs up and grins-

I'm glad that you found it funny! This is your first gay story? Truth to be told, I don't know much more outside of fanfiction either... xD Thanks for your support!

[Steve Loves You Muchly]

Oh good, I only missed two updates. Or was it three? ...Anyway. I'm in the process of moving so I haven't had time to log in.

I thought the guy with the really good gaydar was interesting...why did he just disappear after that one incident? If he's not going to appear again, why mention him at all?
...I'm probably speaking too soon, aren't I? sweatdrop

I seriously lol'd, though, when he started trying to convince the guy that he wasn't gay.

And about the later parts, it's nice to see some actual real Inartè/Sam interaction. It makes it seem more...real...to call them friends at this point when they're actually talking to eachother. I hate it when writers just sort of tell you that two people are on friendly terms with eachother without actually showing any evidence of that at all.
Am I making sense? I don't think I am.

Great job, waiting for the next update!

[Artemai Takahashi]

I'm not one to read high school romances, but the title hooked me, and now... I'm hooked! XD
Very well written!

[Doctor Pips]

I love you in some strange way. When I first saw this I hoped against all hope that this wouldn't be one of those tries at creating homosexual characters that are absolutely cringe worthy.

You have proven me that there is some hope in the world because not only does this exceed my lower expectations (and thus raising the bar waaaay up there). You've kept me interested.

In other words, I adore the story, the characters, and the style you write this in.

[mina352]

>>LotusxLien

No worries, only two updates. xD Good luck with moving!

Oooh, Mike's difinitely coming back. All the characters introduced are re-occuring ones with maybe the exception of Sally in the beginning, but even then, there's no stone cold rule for her. xD

There was this one fanfiction that I read where the author took up fifty pages just to make sure the two people involved were friends before delving more into their relationship, and I was madly in love with the story due to that. Character interations go!

Thanks for still reading and the feedback!

>>ChewieMontijo

I'm rarely write highschool stuff and I almost never do highschool romance, so I'm very happy that you found it interesting enough for you! : D

>>Doctor Pips

I'm highly, highly flattered that you thought so. I'm a very character kind of person, so to hear that my characters are believable is possibly the highest compliment for me. Thank you very much for your praise, and I'll do my best to not disappoint you in future installations!

[Captain tohru honda]

*jumps around* i can't wait till next update! *pulls sam over to in private. screams* go out with Inarte!!! he likes you!!!!!! you like him!!!!!! *walks away*

[mina352]

Captain tohru honda

*jumps around* i can't wait till next update! *pulls sam over to in private. screams* go out with Inarte!!! he likes you!!!!!! you like him!!!!!! *walks away*

Of course Sam likes Inny! He likes everyone! *is shot* Tell you the truth though, Inny only likes Sam as of now. He's got a little bit more to go before he starts crushing on him. xD

[Captain tohru honda]

mina352

Captain tohru honda

*jumps around* i can't wait till next update! *pulls sam over to in private. screams* go out with Inarte!!! he likes you!!!!!! you like him!!!!!! *walks away*

Of course Sam likes Inny! He likes everyone! *is shot* Tell you the truth though, Inny only likes Sam as of now. He's got a little bit more to go before he starts crushing on him. xD

damm...sorry i keep getting you shot. *gives you another bandaid.

[mina352]

Captain tohru honda

mina352

Captain tohru honda

*jumps around* i can't wait till next update! *pulls sam over to in private. screams* go out with Inarte!!! he likes you!!!!!! you like him!!!!!! *walks away*

Of course Sam likes Inny! He likes everyone! *is shot* Tell you the truth though, Inny only likes Sam as of now. He's got a little bit more to go before he starts crushing on him. xD

damm...sorry i keep getting you shot. *gives you another bandaid.

Haha, no problem.

Huh, this is weird. On my thread subscription page, it says that sakuralove09 commented, but I can't seem to see her comment...

[Deathberry15]

HEY!!!! I was away on vacation but i'm back now and caught up and OMG I FREAKIN' LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!! heart 4laugh

hmmm, i seem to have missed my chance for edit help but i can't wait until the next part comes out! i only spotted one error but i didn't reread the updates so i can't be sure but deffinately you're getting better at catching the mistakes!

OMG!!!! I CAN'T WAIT until you update! >Squee~!< whee

[mina352]

Deathberry15

HEY!!!! I was away on vacation but i'm back now and caught up and OMG I FREAKIN' LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!! heart 4laugh

hmmm, i seem to have missed my chance for edit help but i can't wait until the next part comes out! i only spotted one error but i didn't reread the updates so i can't be sure but deffinately you're getting better at catching the mistakes!

OMG!!!! I CAN'T WAIT until you update! >Squee~!< whee

Hey you! Welcome back!

RD_the helped me with the last part, but it was mostly awkward sentences, so I feel like I have been better at catching my grammar mistakes too! Whoo hoo! *is sadly proud*

The next update won't be until for a few more days, but I'm glad you're still enjoying it! =D

(Also, LOL at the poll. Oh you guys. When am I ever going to re-do the opening? xD)

[Celestial Terror]

Was away at vacation which is why it took me so long to reply! x_x I won't bother to point out the few errors, assuming RD is your beta and such, unless you want me to. (:

Anyway...as Lotus mentioned, I love the Sam & Inarte interactions! So many people who write love stories just delve into the romance too quickly, which is so...unrealistic (not the word I'm looking for...but you get the point). And like Doctor Pips said, I don't read many gay romances either and I REALLY like this one. So many are just insanely sex crazed that they have like no plot, lol. Or at least the ones online.

Keep it up! : D Adore your characters.

[Deathberry15]

lol, the poll is pretty unamimous! xd

so that's that! Keep up the good work and get back to writing. >eagerly awaiting the next part< whee

DB15

[LeedleLeedleLee]

thats kewl story morrreeee biggrin biggrin biggrin morrreee of the story biggrin please biggrin