Finding Mr. Perfect - A Gay High School Romance (Updated)

Can you see the story working as a comic?

Yes	56.4%	[ 22 ]
No	7.7%	[ 3 ]
Somewhat	20.5%	[ 8 ]
Gold!	15.4%	[ 6 ]
Total Votes:			[ 39 ]

[nanase12]

Captain tohru honda

-cries- you can't go on vacation...i mean you can.....im not god and can't stop you...but like nuuuuuu!!!!!! now inate and sam are frozen...hehehe...........i might sound just a bit hyped..or tired? idk..i has been up since 4 am!!!!! w00t. go me.

I know!!!!!!!!!!!!! she can't leave!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (that's from someone who actually went to bed last night) Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!Ransack a computer and type! type!

[Celestial Terror]

Have fun on your vacation!

You're getting so many more readers. :3

But anyway, I really liked this section because of the communication between Inarte and Sam. The fight was also pretty entertaining and Inarte's sarcasm never fails to be amusing; we also get a hint of his past which serves as an explanation for the tough exterior which was nice. Am I reading into this too much...? xD

Regardless, keep up the good work as always. I won't bother pointing out the errors (if there are any, being that I didn't look for them) as you said this section was unedited anyway.

[Chasing Fireflies]

Oh my gosh. So I just read this whole story from start to finish and I LOVE it. <3 Inartè is so funny with his sarcasm and all, and Sam is just the biggest sweetheart, and Josh... just makes me laugh. XD Have fun on your vacation! Can't wait for the next part! ^__^

[Deathberry15]

I would be fangirling / sobbing over this update if my dad hadn't started to hover around the computer scene whenever i'm on nowadays.

but, the next update! >sigh< well, i hope you have a great time on vacation.

since you said this part wasn't really edited i won't go through and nitpick to find stuff, when you do get it edited if you want someone to reread it let me know.

oh and of course as always, I LOVE YOU!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!! >GLOMP!!!< heart xd heart

THIS IS AWESOME!!!YOU ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! I loved the fight......CAT FIGHT!!!!! ROWR! whee lol.

and i really hope Inarte' isn't destined to loathe all the girls who fawn over Sam, there's got to be one who isn't completely psyco....right?...................right? hello? >sigh< confused

anyway, you only really mentioned the name but why do i feel the need to rip this Kevin guy limb from limb after skinning him alive? odd.........anyway,

HAVE A GREAT VACATION!!!!!!!! wink heart

DB15
>did i mention how awesome you are? because you are you know, awesome i mean.

Poll: I love Inarte' really i do..........but I've gotta pick Sam, but Inarte's awesome! and his whole look and hiis awesomeness and his mindset.........but Sam............I DON"T KNOW ANYMORE! I PICK...........YOU THE AUTHOR! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!! xd heart

[Inspiration Staff]

-tis the ultimate fanboy of this thread and story-
<3 <3 <3
Ohmigod, Ohmigod, Ohmigod, Ohmigod, Ohmigod, Ohmigod, Ohmigod, I <3 the story sooooo much! Mina352 is the best author in the world!!!! -faint-

[coolchristy101]

I WANT MORE!!!
THIS IS SOOOO GOOD!

[Artificial Melodies]

Ah, this is really cool!
I like the concept that Inarte cannot really spread his sexuality due to the fact that he lives in a small town. I live in a relatively gay-diminished area, aside from most of my friends. I swear like 'm giving off sonar, and they all swarm around me! But, anyways, I really like this, and hope for more. I'm pretty open about my sexuality, always cracking jokes and making very suggestive movements/comments. And if you ask, I'll tell 'ya.
Transsexual-Pansexual. You either like me, or not.
That's my policy~!
I do really hope to hear more of the story, and I absolutely love all of the foreshadowing, making me read on!
Can't wait~!
~Ash

[Doctor Pips]

Sam is adorable. No seriously he's such a cutie in this chapter. I love the fight between Inarte and Julie it made me and Inarte reminded me of well me. And I love Inatre's hair! Haha.

I adored this chapter even with it being short. Its well written and basically overall it's really enjoyable and have fun on your vacation!

[Steve Loves You Muchly]

violet32

i don't like gays crying

crying crying crying

Hah. Sorry, couldn't resist.

Anyway, I really liked this chapter. I know you won't be reading this post for a while, but will we get to meet Sam's little brother, by any chance? =)

Have a great time on vacation!

[Elizabeth31]

Might I say that I'm incredibly pissed to have gone through all of the trouble of fishing out this story from the dregs of this forum only to get to the end and realize that the writer is on vacation? This stuff is horribly addicting.

[Azure Kitsune-Chan Dasuke]

Wow!! Amazing story hon!! biggrin I just read it from start to finish in about an hour... Maybe an hour and a half. Everything is just perfect to me. biggrin

I think it flows rather well. ^-^ Im tempted to go on google and try to find pictures of people that closely represent how I see your characters XD Or at least do that while waiting for you or something. I really cant wait for you to come back and update!!! *Clicks subscribe*

I really wish my stories could errupt with that much interest and other fun little details. Im such a bad writer. XD Ok well maybe Im not -that- bad... I just need a whole lot of help!!! XD I live inside fanfictions, I dont create original stories. X3 Except one Im starting, but its not going as well as I had wished. *Pouts*

In any case this story amazes me. You need to try to get it published. X3 I want it to be a book so I can shove it at my friends faces. This story would be good for the world to, so people could read the point of view from a [sarcastic] loveable gay guy!! I mean, seriously it might help.

Youre doing more here then you think you are!! ^-^

Oh geesh, please come back soon. X3 Youre giving too many hints that leave me wondering and trying to figure you out. What trauma happened to Inarte? Whats Sam's big secret [other then hes gay]? Whats Julia's big part in this story? Where did Inarte's model friend go? XD And when did Josh suddenly start caring about anything outside of sports? XD

Oh oh oh! Kitty has one suggestion!!!
The project in Inarte's photography class... Maybe you should resolve that a bit. You kind of left it hanging. You need to give Inarte some more experience outside of Sam and his few friends. Maybe a worse run-in then last time with the insane teacher. biggrin

Im so insane and Im writting a fricken essay!! XD Just all about how I cant stop reading this story. Im bloody exausted but I still had to finish that last chapter before I decided to go to bed!!

It kind of shocks me that I only found your story by searching and trying to find an active, gay thread. X3 Didnt really find any but I didnt search long. The title caught my eye. But really, I was just wondering what it was. Ive never seen a story on here, so I was like "The ********? Is that people rping a story?", so i just had to stop by!! Then when I got here I was like "Ohh. A story... Well Im probably gonna get bored but lets give it a try!" aaand now Im absolutely hooked. *Glances down at the pile of books by her bed* You really need to publish this!

KEEP ON ROCKING OUT LOUD!!!! biggrin

Anyway, on that note. GOOD NIGHT!!

[starsmaycollide]

That last chapter was extremely entertaining. I love it when Inarte gets a chance to be as sarcastic as possible! Also, liked the little clue into his past life. Hope there's more to come about Kevin.

Have fun on your vacation!

[mina352]

Hey everyone! I'm back! Tired as hell, so replying to comments will be a bit slow, but thanks for all the encouragements! (Oh Inny. Stop power pwning everyone on the poll xD)

[Elizabeth31]

Good. You're back. Let's get to writing, shall we? I'm rather addicted by this point...

[kaii4]

lol, wow what a fuss this story came out to be =3 truly great work^^