Demon's Play

[Kittie_Cappuccino]

Hello everyone!

I was wondering if their is anyone out there that would be willing to read the first chapter or two of my story, and just tell me what you think?

Its a a dark, paranormal romance that follows a demon named Zaccur Nox, and a few of his little adventures. The main focus is between him and a girl named Neiomi Carter, who sees right through his romantic lies, and creates what he considered to be a 'challenge'. Of course, father along their will be twists and turns and more of the truth will be uncovered.

Basically, I would like to know if my first chapters actually draws the reader in, and if it makes you want to read more of it.

You can read it here if you're interested: https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3217647/1/Demon-s-Play

Thanks for your time!

[Kittie_Cappuccino]

Is anyone interested??