Demon (Now in eglish, yeah!!!)

[Suad Sparda]

Demon (Akuma-no-ryu), it's a project created by me, it's the first part of the history "Demon" I plan to wrote. The history tells the adventures of a boy called Jorge, he is half demon, that is in charge of hunting demons for protecting his village. Jorge will have to face a lot of challenges that not only put in danger his life, also the life of his teammates and his whole village...

[Suad Sparda]

== First chapter: ==

-" Is this the way you thought things would go?"-, John asked Jorge, both of them now were at their limit, but only one of them would leave the place in one piece,-"More or less, this is more interesting"- Jorge laughed, then he entered a battle stance, the energy both of them had used now was starting to crash, creating vortex to other places. John enetred a battle stance also, he looked at Jorge and growled, -"Lets end this, son of Sparda"- he launched against him, their swords crashed into a masive energy, the shock wave caused because of this started to destroy the place sorrounding them, then a thunder fell...

Martha opened her eyes, this was the second time she had that dream, -"Mmmm... that dream again, I wonder if it means something"-, she looked arround her bedroom, moving her eyes slowly to the clock, it was really late, Barrera would kill her if she was late for their finall test, she entered the shower and after taking a quick one, she left her home, running as fast as she could, until she noticed a guy that was standing in the entrance of the woods, he looked a bit irritated, she knew who he was...

-"Not even because this is the finall test you can get here on time"-, the man said to Martha, he looked to her eyes, -"Sorry Barrera, it was my clock's fault, the alarm didnt sounded"-, Martha said as she approached him, -"Besides, Marlen-sama isnt here, I think she forgot about this..."-, -"Who forgot about what?"-, a voice sounded from behind them, -"Ahhhh!!!.... Marlen-sama!!"-, they both said at the same time, she had surprised them, she wasnt there a minute ago. After regaining their breath, Marlen starts to explain their mission, -"2 days ago, a prisioner escaped from the Senbu headquartes, he was carring a scroll that contains some infromation about our defenses in the village, your mission will be to capture him and take him back to the village... if you can manage to compleat this, you will earn your crests and become Alfa hunters"...

Martha and Barrera nood, they start their way to the outskirts of the village, traicing the energy of the prisioner, Barrera finally sense it and lead the way, reaching the guy in like 10 minutes, but as he thought the guy wont surrender that easily, so they began a fight. Barrera use his fire techniques to make the guy step back, then Martha use a water technique, gripping the guy's leg with a watter chain, so Barrera can easily attack him, knocking him out and recovering the scroll, wich surpisely is in blank, the scroll never had important information, picking up the guy, Barrera and Martha began their way back to Alka.

Martha look at the sky, smoke is comming from a bit far away, -"Barrera... where is that smoke coming from?"-, she asked him, this was a bit strange, -"I just hope it dont come from the village..."-, he said as they started to run faster, only to find out what they could only describe as a nightmare, the whole village was in flames, -"What happened?"-, Martha was in shock, who could have done this?. Some rock moved and a hunter from Alka came from them, he was really hurted and fell to the ground, he looked up, noticing Martha and Barrera, he come closer to them...

-"Run boys, is the best thing you can do"-, he told them, -"We wont, were are from Alka and we dont run from battles"-, Barrera said as he looked at the soldier, -"Then... go to the supreme tower, there is a device that let us comunicate with other villages, ask for help"-, the guard closed his eyes, he was dead now, -"Lets go... we must reach the tower before something worst happen"-, Barrera started to move in the tower direcction, he wanted this to end. In their way they stop, a voice sound from the center of the village, -"Villagers from Alka, we have capture your leader, surrender if you dont want her to die"-, Barrera started to run faster to the tower.

They finally reach the tower, its compleately trashed, -"Lets find out that device, it must be somewhere near"-, they start their way when a sound catch up their attention, hunters appear from no were, -"By the autority of our general, you 2 are under arrest"-, before he could finish saying that, Barrera had created a fire wall, protecting them, but then more hunters appear and start fighting. Martha is scared so she cant react, Barrera notice this and starts protecting her, but a great attack from a hunter hit him, sending him to the ground, -"And now you little girl... "Ground hammer"-, the hunter tries to attack Martha, but Barrera moves and he loose his focus, hitting the ground and making a hole, Martha fell through that hole, and dissapeared...

-"Well... one less to take care, take the other one to the center of the village, their leader is about to get executed"-, Barrera is knocked out and dragged to the center of the village. The people look to were Marlene is, also another man is beside her, -"Why dont you surrender now Marlen?, Give me the village and I wont hurt any other villager"-, the man smiled to her, -"There is no way I would give Alka to the Yukons, general Juo"-, she said as she looked to his eyes, -"Well... its your desition, soldiers, start killing the hostages"-, he screamed as the Yukon hunters began to spread in the village. Martha woke up, the place was dark, then she used a flashlight so she could see, a lot of tunnels were in that place, -"This must be the old catacombs of Alka, were a lot of great hunters were buried"-, she said as she began to walk arround looking for a way out of that place.

One of the hunters sensed her chakra, -"That girl... she is alive, we must kill her before she can get help for the village"-, the hunters entered the hole they had made and began their way to Martha. Martha starts to get frustrated because there is no way out, until she sense something strange, energies are coming and in a fast way, -"Oh no... they found me, I better run"-, she does that until she reaches a dead end, -"There is no were to run girl, so just accept your fate"-, the hunter launches his attack but Martha dodge it, hitting the wall, making a hole in it, were Martha enters, just to discover that behind that wall is another room, falling from some stairs she notices that inside is a giant ice block, made from energy and that inside it is someone...

The hunters also enters the room, they slowly come near to Martha, she is now infront of the ice block, she closes her eyes, ready to take the blow when a voice spoke, it was inside her head, -"Hey... let me out... let me out if you want to survive..."-, the voice said, she noticed that the block had a seal, -"I want... I want to survive"-, she said as she tear appart the seal, making the ice melt and letting the one inside it free, the hunters launched against her, but they are sent back away, the guy inside the ice block protected Martha, and now helps her to stand up.

-"Are you alright?"-, the guy asked Martha, she only nooded with her head, the guy smiled, -"This isnt a place for you to be... lets get out of here"-, he said as they begin their way back to the hole from were Martha fall, it was pretty big, -"I dont think we can climb it up, we would fall down again...-, she was interrupted by the guy who hugged her, -"Hold on tight or you will fall"-, he smiled before he crouched a bit and then jumped, they were outside the catacombs, Martha couldnt belive that this guy could jump so high...

-"Oh no... the village... its destroyed"-, the guy said as he looked through the window in the tower, -"Its all the fault of those Yukons hunters"-, Martha said as she clenched her fists, Jorge noticed this and looked at her, -Dont worry... I will stop them, but first, were is the main office?"-, he asked to her, Martha lead him to the place, he entered it and looked at an old samurai statue, he picked up the katana it had, it was old and rusty, -"Now im ready to fight them, let's go"-, he said as they started their way to the center of the village, Jorge notices that villagers are inside steel cages so he left Martha behind, so she can realese them, he finally reach the center of the village...

-"Release our leader now... or you will suffer the consecuences"-, Jorge shouted to general Juo, he begin to laugh and also all the other Yukon hunters, -"Is this the best Alka can do?, they sent a teeneger to defeat me?"-, he laughed even more, then he made a sign, and 2 hunters launched their attacks, "The eart dragon", crashing in the place were Jorge was standing, after the smoke goes with the wind, Jorge isnt there, he is in the plataform of execution, behind Juo and Marlen, -"I told you that you will pay", he took out the katana and slashed at Juo, the blade cutted him and started to shine, it restored it appeareance, becoming again the weapon it used to be, the legendary sword Yamato...

Juo steped back, the wound was big and it was bleeding a lot, Yukon hunters came down and gathered arround him, entering a defensive position. Meanwhile Jorge moved to Marlen, she couldnt belive the fast movements he have done, he let her go of the ropes, -"Are you ok?, You better leave this place and take him to"-, he referd to Barrera who was beside Marlen, she nooded and started to trail back with him. Jorge turned arround when he noticed the energy that started to gather behind him, all the Yukon hunters behind had used their full energy to create an offensive shield arround Juo, -"Some last words before we kill you?"-, Jou shouted to him, he was in the middle of the formation...

Jorge smiled as he looked at them, that made them angry, they started to run against him, Jorge entered an offensive position, when they were close enough he made a quick move, slashing against them, he now was behind them. Marlen and Barrera looked at him, as Jorge put away the Yamato, all the hunters arround Juo fell to the ground they were dead, -"How did he do that?, I mean it was only one slash he gave..."-, Barrera was so impressed with the attack he had saw, Marlen smiled when she remembered the only guy she knew that could do the same, a former teammate, but Jorge seemed even faster than him...

Juo was scared about the fact that now Jorge was coming in his direction, he managed to mutter something, -"Please, dont... let me live"-, he said as he started to move back, Jorge just keep walking until he was infront of him, he took out the Yamato again, -"Sorry general, but today... was your last battle...-, he slashed him, for a moment a big scream was heard across the whole village, then a great silence, Martha looked in the direction of the scream, she was worried about Barrera and Marlen, but she had finally let go all the hostages...

It had been 2 weeks since Jorge saved Alka and the village had started to rebuild after the attack, only 2 people looked at the village from the main office in the supreme tower, -"What happened?, were is Danny-sama and my team?-, Jorge asked, everything was so different than he remembered. Marlen looked at the boy, she closed her eyes, -"This isnt a good thing to hear but... they are dead"-, Jorge couldnt belive it, all that he knew was no more, he was so confused, -"I know this isnt easy to take but... you were inside that block for 150 years"-, Marlen said to Jorge, who still wasnt sure about what to do now.

Jorge turned arround and started to walk away, when the door opened, Martha and Barrera were behind it, -"You called for us Marlen-sama?"-, Barrera said as they entered the office. Martha looked at Jorge and huged him, -"You are alive, thanks for helping us against the Yukons"-, she said but suddenly let go of him, -"You never told me your name, so what is it?"-, she asked him, Jorge was blushing, -"My name is Jorge S... Valentine"-, he smiled to the girl and the walked to the door again. Marlen looked at them, -"Ah yes... here are your crests, congratulation Alfa hunters"-, she gave Martha and Barrera their crests, Jorge was about to leave when he was stopped by Martha...

-"Hey... you didnt take yours"-, Martha gave a crest to Jorge, he was surprised about this, -"But why me?... I didnt do the test and...-, Jorge was interrupted by Marlen, -"You saved the village from destruction, and we need someone like you here, so... what you say?"-, Jorge smiled as he nooded, taking the crest. -"Well... then its done, you now will be know as team 7, go and be proud of be hunters from Alka"-, Marlene said as she looked at the boys that were leaving their office, she knew this was the begining of a great team... or not??.

[Ciarlare]

It sounds more like a chapter summary than the actual first chapter.

[Suad Sparda]

Thats the idea, they are summaries of the capters...

[Suad Sparda]

== Second Chapter: ==

The team was leaving the office, but still they didnt know a lot about Jorge, so Martha decided to go have some lunch. The arrived at a restaurant were they sitted and asked for some ramen, she looked at Jorge, -"So... you are now a hunter, what is your new goal?-, she asked him, Jorge smiled as he heard the question, -"Well... now I want to test my strength and become the best hunter that ever existed"-, he smiled to the girl, when Barrera stand up and looked at him, -"You better let those dreams of a little boy behind... there is no space for that in the real world..."-, he turned arround and started to walk away.

Jorge looked at Barrera, -"Hey... what is your problem?, if you dont have any dreams, is not my problem"-, Jorge shouted to him, Barrera turned arround and stared to him, -"You have a lot of nerve for talking to me like that... -, he was now infront of him, Jorge looked at his eyes, -"No matter how much you try, you will never be part of our team!"-, Barrera shouted to him, he was furious. Jorge stand up and pushed him back, -"If you have a problem, lets solve it in a little battle, you against me, if you win I'll leave the team, but If you lose... you will have to deal with it"-, Jorge said, Barrera smiled and turned arround, -"Enjoy your meal... it could be the last in your life"-, he had leaved.

Martha looked at Jorge, -"I cant belive you challenged Barrera to a fight, we are a team now so we must..."-, she was interrupted by Jorge, -"You better explain that to him, before he really gets hurt"-, Jorge stand up and also leave the place, he went to the appartments zone, looking for one to live in now. He was really happy when he noticed that his old appartment building still was in one piece and that anybody in the village had wanted to use it, he entered his old house and looked arround, -"Home, sweet home... but now I must prepare for my fight tomorrow"-. Martha was tired because of the things today... she only wanted to spend time with her team but now they were about to fight, she only knew one way to stop them, and her name was Marlen.

It was morning in the village, the sun shined and the birds sang, 2 figures were standing in the trainning grounds, Jorge looked at Barrera, -"You still want to do this... there could be another solution"-, he said, taking out the Yamato and pointing it to Barrera, -"Chikenning out?, I knew you were a coward"-, Barreras fists were now in flames, ready to fight Jorge, they rushed against each other and clashed, they steped back, Jorge could sense the energy of Barrera, it could grew a lot. Barrera looked at Jorge,- "I'll end this now... say good-bye to team 7"-, he rushed against Jorge when someone appeared, they were Marlen and Martha, Barrera stopped.

-"What do you think the both of you are doing?"-, Marlen asked to the guys, Jorge put away the Yamato, -"We were taking care of some differeces"-, he smiled to Marlen, -"Well you can make them aside now, you have a mission, follow me to the tower, the client is there..."-, Barrera nooded and they started their way to the tower. When they arrived, a man was sitted inside the office, he looked at the team and then to Marlen, -"Are you sure they can handle this?, I mean... they're only kids"-, Barrera was annoyed a bit because of the last commentary, -"We can take care of anything that come in our way"-, he gave a cocky smile to the man...

-"I know they look like kids but belive me, they really are strong"-, Marlen smiled, the man stand up and looked back at the team, -"I will trust them. Let me introduce myself, my name is Ota, Im a politician from Kiran.-, Marlen looked at the guys, -"You mission is to scort Ota to Oisen, were he will meet with the representatives of Machi"-, she gave them a scroll, -"It's a mission classified as C rank, this wont be hard for you"-, she smiled. Jorge looked at Ota, -"Wait... why are we going to Oisen, are you asking for help or something to Machi?"-, he asked, Ota looked at him, -"Yes. The last great war really damaged my village and Machi is one of the main nations, so we're asking them for protection while we rebuilt the village"-, Jorge couldnt belive that he was frozen when a great war happened...

The team 7 and Ota were now in the north gate of Alka, they were ready to leave, Barrera looked at Jorge, -"Remember the fight, we will end it when we return"-, he said as they started the trip, they were silent all the way to Oisen, when they finally arrived, a great and tall building were infront, they entered it. The place was empty, Jorge had a bad feeling about this, no other energy could be felt inside the place, so they decided to wait a bit. Ota got desperate and was about to leave the building when a knife cutted him in his cheek, he stepped back, he didnt know were the attack had come from, Barrera moved forward and looked at the celling of the place, it was really dark. -"Come out and face us, whoever you are..."-, Barrera shouted...

A man came down from the celling, he had a crest in his arm, he was from Nuria, a village in the mountains, -"Why are you here?"-, Barrera asked, entering a defensive position, he didnt knew what this guy was capable of. The hunter smiled and looked at Ota, -"Does the name Mel is familiar to you?"-, Ota eyes widen, -He is a politician from Kiran also... but what do you have in common with him?"-, he asked the hunter, who started to laugh, -"That man want your political power, so he plans to kill you...", he was interrupted by Jorge, -"I suppose he hired you to do his dirty job, but Im afraid we wont let you do that"-, Jorge took out the Yamato and entered an offensive position, the hunter looked at them, taking out a really big sword...

-"My name is Zeta, and I will be glad to kill all of you here"-, he moved so fast, now he was behind Jorge and slashed against him, but he stopped the hit with the Yamato, -"Nice moves... but speed isnt everything in a fight"-, Jorge turned arround and slashed against him, sending him a bit back, -"We must give them sometime to escape"-, he looked at Barrera and he jumped behind Zeta, they had him in a predicament. Meanwhile Martha took Ota out of the building, when she was about to return inside, the building was sorrounded by energy, not letting anyone enter or leave it. Zeta smiled at the 2 boys, -"Wow this is nice, I thought this would be boring because you were kids, but I was wrong..."-, in a quick slash he made Jorge and Barrera step back...

Jorge was surprised that Zeta could move such a big sword with that incredible speed, -"Barrera... this guy is more powerfull than he appears to be, so take care...-, Barrera growled at Jorge, -"I dont need you or anyone to tell me what to do!"-, he launched against Zeta, using his fire fists, he gave him a great blow, but the great sword bloqued it, -"You should have listened to your friend kid"-, Zeta moved the sword and attacked Barrera, he stopped the blow with his fists, but even the fire didnt protected him and sent him down to the floor, blood was starting to drip from Barrera's hands, he was surprised that the attack really damaged him.

Zeta was now infront of him, -"Im sorry kid, but this is the last thing you will ever see in your life..."-, he slashed against him and then pierced with his sword, those movements were so fast. Blood spilled in Barrera's face, he then noticed that he wasnt hurted, when he looked infront, he noticed Jorge had taken the blow for him, Zeta smiled, -"Well... that takes one of you out, now I'll take care of you and then the girl and the old man...-, he tried to take the sword out of Jorge's body but he couldnt, something stopped it, it was Jorge's hand that was gripping the blade. -"I told you that with those attacks you wouldnt be able to win me", Jorge was alive, he took out the sword, launching away Zeta, he stand up, Barrera couldnt belive that he was hitted by those blows and he still could stand up and fight back.

Zeta was also surprised, he knew that this would be harder, Jorge looked at Barrera, -"That really is a big wound, so we must thing in a way to end the battle now... as a team"-, Barrera eyes widen, he knew Jorge was right, but they needed a plan, when an idea came to his mind. -"Give me your sword"-, Jorge gave Yamato to Barrera, he put his hands over the sword and it started to glow, when he gave it back to Jorge, the blade had flames, -"Is all I can do for you, finish that guy now"-, Jorge turned arround and noticed Zeta rushing against them. Jorge rushed against him, Zeta was surprised that he was doing that, -"Well... if you wanted to die so badly, I'll gladly help you"-, he slashed at Jorge, but he dodged the blow, giving him a counter-attack with all his strenght, sending Zeta flying against a wall, destroying it. Zeta opened his eyes, but a shadow covered the sun, it was Jorge, he lifted up the sword and was ready for the last attack, but Zeta took out a pill, he put it in his mouth and started to chew it, his energy over-exploded and then his heart stopped, he was dead now...

Jorge looked at Yamato, the flames were gone, he returned to the building and helped Barrera, leaving the building behind, they soon reached Martha and Ota. Martha started to heal Barrera's hands, they were bleeding a lot because of the wound, Ota looked at them when he noticed Jorge, he was a bit anxious because of the fight they just had, he needed to knew everything about that men called Mel and his intentios with Ota. Barrera looked at Ota, -"This wasnt part of the mission, we were supposed to bring you here only, but we entered a fight with a hunter hired to kill you"-, Ota looked at them, -"If we had knew that we would fight in this mission, it would be considered A rank, and mabye 2 teams would have come here, you lied to us"-, Jorge looked at Ota, he just smiled...

-"I cant complain, but I needed your help for stopping Mel, he would even harm my family to get my place"-, Jorge looked at Ota, -"I'll only have one last request, if you could help me finish this..."-, Barrera interrupted him, -"We finished our mission when we entered that building, now we must return to the village"-, Barrera was now compleately healed, he started to walk away, but he noticed no one was following him, he turned arround and looked at Martha and Jorge, -"You can leave if you want... but Im helping him"-, Jorge said as he pointed to Ota, he knew that was the correct thing. Martha looked at Barrera, -"Please Barrera, just think what the sensei would have done..."-, Barrera looked to the sky and smiled, -"He would have done the correct thing"-, he began walking in their direcction, soon joining them, Ota leading the way to Kiran.

The village was now ahead, Jorge noticed that the place was really damaged and that only few people were walking in the streets, the war really hurted this place. Soon they reached a house at the outskirts of the village, Ota opened the door and a woman greet him, -"Is good you are back now dear, oh you brought guests?" she looked at the guys, they smiled, -"Guys she is my wife, Karen"-, Ota smiled as he introduced them to her wife, when someone came down from the stairs, it was a young boy, -"Wow... nice to see you again Dad"-, he said refering to Ota, -"And this is my boy, Ru"-, Ru greeted them as he entered the kitchen, Karen smiled, -"Please take a seat, I'll get you all some water"-, she pointed some chairs...

Jorge noticed that a energy dissapeared from the place, so he stand up and told the others he would go out for a walk, after 10 minutes he reached Ru, he was practicing with a blade, Jorge come closer to him. -"You are using it in the incorrect way, if you take it like this... - Jorge took out the Yamato and slashed the dummy, it was cutted by the half, -"You can really hurt someone with this, so tell me why are you practicing..."-, Ru looked at him, he started to cry, -"Mel came to our house one day, he told me that if I joined the new army he was creating, he would leave my mom and dad alone and wont even try to harm us"-, Jorge put his hand in his shoulder, -"Hey, we are here for helping you, I promise you I will stop Mel so he wont harm your family, trust me"-, Ru nooded as he returned with Jorge to his house, it was in flames now...

Barrera and the others were outside the place, he explained Jorge that some people came and launched some fire rocks, and then shouted that Mel wanted to end this today, so Jorge asked Ota were the main political place in Kiran is, so they can reach Mel and end this once and for all. The main palace was big, they entered it and began their way to the top, were one man was waiting for them, -"And here I thought that you wouldnt come, what a surprise Ota"-, the man started to laugh, when Jorge launched a wind slash against him, the hit was stopped by a crystal shield, -"Oh seems like you got some help, now I know why Zeta couldnt kill you but... he will do it"-, a man came out from behind him, he closed his fist and the crystal shield disappeared.

Jorge looked at the man, his energy was very different from the one Zeta had, it was so weird. Mel looked at the team, -"Master Crystalix, please, take care of those pests"-, he started to walk away into his office, Crystalix nooded and jumped down, he now was infront of them. Barrera smiled, he noticed Crystalix didnt had any weapon, -"Do you think you can defeat us without a weapon?"-, and laughed a bit, Crystalix just looked at them, he then rushed and was now infront of Barrera, giving him a kick and launching him back, Crystalix followed him. Martha looked at Jorge, -"Go and help him, I'll take care of Mel"-, Jorge nooded and started to walk in the fight direction, he noticed the room was sorrounded by crystal, it must be a technique of that hunter, he then sensed Barrera's energy and continued his way.

Barrera attacked Crystalix, but he continued to create crystal shields to stop those attacks, then one of those shields crack, it was Jorge who attacked him, Crystalix was surprised, -"Im surprised kid, you are the first to break one of my shields-, Jorge was now beside Barrera, -"Any idea?"-, he asked Barrera, -"We must find his weak points, and then create a counter-attack"-, Barrera started to run behind Crystalix, ready for an attack, meanwhile Jorge distracted him, but he made a bad move, and Crystalix noticed Barrera, sending an attack against him, but Jorge stopped it, he smiled, -"Now I know your weak point, your friends"-, Jorge now had a big problem to deal with. Barrera looked at Jorge, -"We must stay away from him, if we are together, we are easy picks for him"-, both nooded and started to run in different directions, Crystalix just watched them...

-"Im tired of this, time to stop, Retention glass"-, crystal peaks came out of the floor and pierced Jorge's wrists, he couldnt move now, -"If you think this will stop me... you are wrong"-, Jorge tried to break the peaks, but they only pierced further in his wrists, -"They said that for destroying a man, you must break him until he wish to die"-, Crystalix looked back at Barrera and claped in his direction, wind started to blow, but that wind had little crystal shards that hurted Barrera, he fell to the ground. -"You b*****d... I will kill you"-, Jorge keep trying, but now he had lost a lot of blood and started to feel dizzy, Crystalix was now infront of him, -"Prepare to meet your maker kid... this is the end"-, from his hand, crystal started to came out from his hand, taking the form of a sword, lifting his hand, Crystalix was ready fro the final blow.

Jorge just closed his eyes, he couldnt belive that he didnt acomplished his promise, the sword started to came down, it finally hitted someone, Barrera was infront of Jorge and had reciver the hit, with the last of his power, he managed to give a direct hit to Crystalix in his chest, sending him back, crashing into a wall. Barrera fell to the ground, Jorge used all the strengh he had left and broke the crystal peaks, catching Barrera, -"Looks like now we are even"-, Barrera coughed some blood, -"Barrera, why?... I didnt... I didnt asked you to help me!!"-, Jorge said, tears started to roll down his cheeks, Barrera smiled as he looked at his face, -"I dont know... my body just moved by his own"-, more blood came out of his mouth...

Jorge huged Barrera closer, he then heard something that made him compleately froze, -"I didnt wanted to see your dream end..."-, Barrera finally closed his eyes, Jorge couldnt feel any energy from his body, he started to cry. -"Is this the first time someone from your team dies in your arms?... then you better choose another job kid"-, Crystalix came closer to him, the sword appeared again, -"Soon you will join him, prepare to say good-bye"-, the sword came down against Jorge, but when it hit him, it broke in 2. Crystalix was surprised, he then sensed something from Jorge, a incredible energy was starting to gather arround him, when he turned to face him, his eyes were red as blood.

-"You are the one who will join all the people you have killed"-, Jorge standed up, the wounds in his wrists started to heal, and a weird red energy was starting to come out of his body, Crystalix stepped back, he didnt knew what would happen. Jorge was starting to come closer to Crystalix, so he made a defensive move, -"Crystal wall"-, a big energy came out from Crystalix body, he created a big wall that appeared infront of him. -"No one has been able to get through this wall, its impenetrable"-, he began to laugh, Jorge took out the Yamato and looked at Crystalix, -"I hope for your sake those words are true"-, Jorge rushed against him, the blade started to shine a red color, -"Ryu-ten sen-go-ku"-, Jorge slashed in a quick move, he was now behind Crystalix, he turned arround and walked in Barreras direction.

-"Is that all?, you didnt even make a scratch to..."-, a crack was heard, the wall then shatered and fell down, then a little cut appeared in Crystalix's cheek, then it was followed by a slashing sound that triggered all the other cuts that Jorge made him with his attack, he fell to the ground knocked out. The red energy disappeared from arround Jorges body, he lifted Barrera and began walking into Martha's direction, when she noticed them, she runned to them, she couldnt belive what had just happened, tears fromed in her eyes. A door opening sounded, it was Mel, and a lot of other people that was hired by him to kill Ota, -"You managed to survive the battle with Crystalix, but I bet you really are tired"-, he laughed as he saw Jorge, -"Well then... if you still have energy left, take care of my men"-, the people came down, ready to attack Jorge and the others, he hated to admit it but he was really tired, but something happened, the people was stopped by a crystal wall...

-"You defeated me... you have the right to survive"-, Crystalix was behind them, after those words he gathered all the energy he had in his body and started to create crystal peaks, destroying the building. Jorge lifted Barrera and gave the signal to leave the place, they left in the last moment, were the main palace of Kiran was, now a big crystal mountain appeared, were Mel and Crystalix were buried. Barrera opened his eyes, he looked at the crystal mountain and noticed Crystalix energy had disappeared, Jorge now is happy that Barrera is alive, he explained that the hit avoided his vital signs, so he wouldnt be damaged, exept for the scar that the slash would leave.

Ota and his family looked at the team that had just saved their village from a wrong politician, Jorge gave him the scroll, -"You must sign this... so the mission is over"-, he smiled as Ota did as he was told, -"Is this the last time we will see you?"-, Ru asked them, -"Mabye... only time will decide that"-, Jorge said as they started to walk away, now they were ready to return to Alka and said they had compleated their first mission as a team...

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== Third Chapter: ==

Jorge was tired, the whole way back the sun shined in the horizont and it was doing a incredible heat, when a bit far away a big wall was visible, they had finally reached Alka. -"Man... we finally did it, we are back"-, Jorge smiled as he looked at the village, it still was under construction because of the Yukon attack, but the villagers now returned to their business and to their normal life, the team said good-bye and they took their separated ways, Barrera went to his house, Martha went to her mothers house and Jorge returned to his appartment, finally they were at peace.

It had been a month since the mission to Kiran, Jorge and the others were relaxing at a park in the center of the village, -"One whole month and we didnt had any missions..."-, Jorge said as he looked to the sky, -"Yeah... we should be outside doing something fun"-, Martha said as she stand up, then some hunters appeared, they were with Marlen, -"Wow, nice I found you here, this is for you 3"-, she gave them an envelop, it contained a card, when they recived it, she disappeared...

Returning to the village of Alka, Team 7 is called by Marlene to her office, which gives them the news that the mission they had just completed gives them the credit to participate in the next tournament of teams in Alka, where the winning team will be promoted to the next level Senbu hunters. Jorge is excited because in this type of competition typically enter the best of the best and this time is no exception, because a team gets their attention, the team 10, consisting of Oscar, Victor and Miriam, who are the favorites of people to win.

After several tests that for the normal villagers are almost inhuman and impossible to complete, the teams 7 and 10 are the last left in the competition, reaching the final, Marlen knows that they are tired and gives them 1 month to rest so that the fight in the final is the best of the tournament. Jorge after watching that Oscar is the best melee fighter who he has seen in a lot of time, knows that if he want to defeat him he will need an strategy, so he leaves to a forest that is near the village and he starts his training...

The day of competition everyone is in the great stadium of Alka, including the big feudal lords, who have given a generously cooperation to sponsor the confrontation. Everyone is desperate when Jorge does not appear, after the regulation time, the team 7 is about to be disqualified when Jorge finally arrives, people get excited now that the fight is about to begin. The fights are started by Martha and Miriam, they give a real good fight, but ultimately the 2 of them fall to the ground, exhausted by the use of their energy to their limit, the first fight ending in a tie for both teams...

The second fight is between Victor and Barrera, which begins quickly and calculating. Victor has the unique feature of being able to use what is around him to power up and create great attacks of energy to damage the enemy, noticing this Barrera damage the place for Victor to lose its advantage in the end they both bumped with all his might, causing a shockwave that stuns them, preventing them from standing and the fight finish in a tie again, leaving everything in one last fight between the team captains, who are Oscar and Jorge.

The fight between the two is one of epic magnitude, Jorge and Oscar energy level increase more and more, his punches are even damaging the stadium. Oscar knows that Jorge is not very good at close combat so he manages to take Yamato from him, piercing the ground with it, putting a seal in the sword so it cant be used. Oscar starts a counter attack but is stopped by George and a strange gleam in his hands and legs, which then become combat boots and gloves that Jorge managed to craft in his training, again equating the fight between the two ...

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== Fourth Capter: ==

George and Oscar have enough time in their fight, no one thinks of giving up, but this changes when Oscar uses a technique called "Force ignea", this technique can increase speed and power 10 times, getting Jorge in some trouble, but has a disadvantage , who uses it gradually loses his sanity transforming into a savage beast who thinks only of killing his enemy.

Jorge knows he has to do something, but now he is against the wall, Oscar launches his attack but is stopped by Jorge, which begins to emanate the strange red energy, he seems to have brought under control in his training, giving it a new twist the fight. Having extended the use of his technique for a long time, Oscar now begin to attack with more savagery against Jorge, and now even using the red energy, Jorge have trouble dodging and defending against the attacks from Oscar.

Jorge starts to get tired enough and knows that he must end as quickly as possible the fight, so in an opening he notice between the bouts of Oscar, he use the strongest technique he know with those gloves, "The fist of the dragon" , this manages to sent Oscar flying in the air and then he delivers a series of blows which sent him to the ground so loud, making a big hole. Everyone thinks that the fight was over but some bandages came out of the crater, which trap the body of Jorge completely and crush him several times against the ground, these bands are controlled by Oscar, which eventually went insane and has become into a bloodthirsty beast ...

With bands like weapons, Oscar began to crush the body of Jorge, who through the use of energy exes can not defend himself, only his right hand came out between the dressings, which begin to stain red with the blood of his body . Oscar jumps ready to give the final blow to Jorge, but using all the energy he has left, he manages to release Yamato from the seal, which cuts the bands and releases Jorge, giving him some energy that the blade had, so he could make a counter-attack against Oscar, but the attack Oscar launched also hits Jorge, sending both of them to the ground.

The counting starts and none of the 2 seems to stand, until it Oscar succeeds in doing it, winning the fight and also earning the promotion for his team. Barrea goes to help Jorge, which is badly wounded and was taken to the infirmary, where he finally awakes after 2 days. Barrera and Martha tells him that he lost the fight, but still Marlen wants them to go the ceremony, where a surprise is given to them that they too have been promoted to be Senbus, everyone begins to celebrate, but they do not realize 2 figures who watch from afar, 2 figures with very dark energies...

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== Capitulo cinco: Un contacto con el pasado ==

La noche cae sobrea Alka, toda la aldea se encuentra dormida, ni un solo ruido se escucha, de repente una luz ilumina el cielo y fuego se empieza a esparcir por toda la aldea, la gente grita y todo se comienza a volver destruccion, una persona mira desde la torre suprema, al voltear un resplandor de luz gigantesco deslumbra todo, Jorge despierta, -"Ahhh... otra vez no, dios, es la cuarta vez que tengo este sueño"-, se levanta y camina hacia el baño, se mira al espejo y echa agua en su cara, -"¿Me pregunto si esto significa algo?"-, voltea a ver su reloj, ya son las 5 de la mañana, -"Bueno, sera mejor que me vaya a entrenar y despues hablare con Lady Marlene acerca de esto"-, Jorge sale de su departamento y se dirige a los campos de entrenamiento. Martha y Barrera estan en el centro de la ciudad, ya son las 12 del dia, ambos estan sentados en una banca de un parque, -"Cielos, desde que pasaron las pruebas, hemos tenido menos misiones de lo que esperaba"-, Barrera mira hacia el cielo, -"Vele el lado amable, ya no nos despertamos tan temprano como antes"-, Martha rie al decir lo ultimo, Barrera solo escucha la risa de su compañera, -"¿Me pregunto donde estara Jorge?"-, dice al mirar la torre suprema.

-"Dices que comenzaron despues de que terminaron las pruebas"-, Marlene mira por las ventanas de su oficina, -"Asi es, no tengo ni la menor idea de que significan, pero en los sueños siempre la aldea es atacada"-, Jorge esta sentado en un sofa, mirando hacia donde esta Marlene, -"Aparte la espada, volvio a su antigua forma, no la puedo utilizar asi, ya lo intente todo y cambia otra vez"-, Marlene da la vuelta para ver a Jorge, -"Mmm... lo unico que te puedo decir es que te relajes, probablemente son solo sueños, y la espada, no se que es lo que puedas hacer con ella"-, Jorge sonrie al escuchar eso, -"Esta bien, ire a buscar a Martha y a Barrera para pasar un rato con ellos, a lo mejor tambien estan igual de aburridos que yo"-, sale de la oficina de Marlene y se dirige al centro, mientras Marlene lo observa, -<Yo tambien espero que solo sean sueños...>, Marlene se voltea y se sienta en su silla.

Los dias pasan volando en la aldea, nada raro sucede, hasta que una tarde 2 sujetos llegan a la aldea, ellos llevan puestas unas tunicas de color negro y usan sombreros, para que no puedan ver por completo sus rostros, -"Buenas tardes, venimos a Alka para hablar con su lider"-, el sujeto alto dice al guardia, -"Lo lamento, pero al parecer Lady Marlene no tiene ninguna cita con ustedes, tendre que pedirles que se..."-, el guardia de ja de hablar cuando el otro sujeto lo atraviesa con su espada, -"Tonto, no te estamos pidiendo permiso, avisamos para que nadie nos interrumpa"-, con un rapido movimiento lanza al guardia hacia el rio que esta cerca, el otro guardia manda una señal de ayuda, pero cuando intenta huir, el sujeto alto mueve su espada y la onda de aire provocada por el movimiento corta al guardia, lanzandolo al suelo, -"Tonto, preparate a morir"-, alza su espada listo para el ultimo golpe, pero cuando trata de darlo, la espada impacta un muro de piedra que sale enfrente, -"Parece que alguien mas trata de detenernos"-, el otro sujeto mira hacia la entrada, en ella aparencen varias personas.

-"Parece que llegamos justo a tiempo"-, uno de ellos dice, al mirar a los 2 sujetos, -"Vaya, estos tipos no tienen energia comun, esto podria ser complicado"-, otro sujeto de cabello chino dice al mirar, -"Vamos, estamos perdiendo tiempo, sera mejor que los detengamos ahora"-, la chica que los acompaña dice, sacando unas dagas de su cinturon, pero es detenida por uno de sus compañeros, -"Ocupense ambos del sujeto de atras, yo me encargare del que esta enfrente"-, entran en una posicion de batalla, lanzandose contra ellos. El sujeto alto detiene el ataque con su espada, -"Veamos, por como atacas tu debes ser Oswaldo, capitan del equipo 5"-, el tipo mira a Oswaldo, el cual da un paso atras, -"Asi es, y por lo que veo en tu brazo, tu eres un antiguo cazador de Alka"-, señala la cresta del sujeto, este sonrie y lanza un ataque contra Oswaldo, -"Eso ya no me interesa, vengo para acabar con Marlene y finalmente destruir esta aldea"-, la espada del sujeto se acerca a Oswaldo, pero este junta sus manos, -"Estilo de Tierra: Lanza de piedra"-, de las manos de Oswaldo se juntan piedras del suelo y crean un arma para detener el ataque, ahora estan a punto de comenzar su pelea.

Los otrso dos compañeras de Oswaldo miran al otro sujeton, -"¿Que esperamos Pepe?, hay que atacarlo ahora"-, la chica dice, -"No hay que apresurar las cosas Ara, hay que esperar para ver que es lo que intentara"-, Pepe entra en una posicion defensiva, el otro sujeto mira a ambos y rie, -"Esto es aburrido, asi que los matare a ambos de una vez"-, saca su espada y comienza a acercarse a ellos. Oswaldo voltea y ataca al sujeto alto, el cual retrocede dado que la lanza es mas larga que su espada, el sujeto se acerca de nuevo, -"Muy bien, creo que ya peleare enserio"-, con la espada parte a la mitad la lanza y corta tambien a Oswaldo en el brazo, este retrocede un poco. Pepe mira a Oswaldo y trata de ayudarlo, pero el sujeto con el que pelea lo detiene, lanzandolo contra Ara y los encierra en una celda de energia, -"Si fuera ustedes no tocaria esa celda, la energia los freira en un segundo"-, Pepe trata de ponerse de pie, pero esta demasiado cerca de la energia, Oswaldo lo nota y trata de ayudarlo pero es detenido por el sujeto alto, -"Es hora de que experimentes lo que es el miedo, Ilusion Imperial"-, los ojos del sujeto cambian de color oscuro a rojo, entrando en la mente de Oswaldo, obligandolo a ver como mueren Pepe y Ara una y otra vez, hasta que este quiebra y cae al suelo.

-"¿No piensas matarlo?"-, pregunta el otro sujeto, -"Si lo hiciera seria solo una perdida de tiempo"-, ambos sujetos se retiran del lugar, poco despues llegan los refuerzos, los cuales se llevan a Oswaldo al hospital, dado que su cuerpo esta muy lastimado y su energia esta en un nivel muy bajo. La noticia del ataque comienza a escucharse en toda la aldea, hasta llegar a un equipo en especial, -"No puedo creerlo, un ex-cazador de Alka atacando la aldea"-, Barrera dice mientras caminan por la aldea, -"Esto no suena nada bien, creo que le hare una pequeña visita al capitan Oswaldo, para platicar con el"-, Jorge mira a sus compañeros, -"Esta bien, nosotros iremos a platicar con el otro guardia, veremos que sabe de esto"-, el equipo se separa y comienzan sus labores. Jorge llega al hospital y entra al cuarto de Oswaldo, el cual esta leyendo un libro, -"Si vienes a terminar lo que empezaste adelante, no pienso pelear de regreso"-, dice al bajar su libro, pero se sorprende al ver que quien esta enfrente no es el sujeto con el que se enfrento, -"Creo que me confunde con otra persona capitan"-, Jorge rie al tomar asiento en una silla cercana a la cama, -"Vengo a preguntarle acerca de la batalla que tubo hace unos dias, ¿Puede decirme quien era el sujeto con el que peleo?"-, pregunta al capitan que esta recostado.

-"No tengo ni la menor idea, pero solia ser cazador de esta aldea"-, mira a Jorge cuando responde eso, Jorge se levanta y comienza a caminar a la salida, -"Si te sirve de algo chico, el sujeto tenia la misma energia que la tuya"-, Jorge se detiene, -"¿A que se refiere?"-, pregunta intrigado, -"Cuando uso su tecnica de Ilusion en mi, su energia era identica a la tuya cuando peleaste contra Oscar"-, Jorge no puede creerlo, solo conocia en todo el mundo a un sujeto que seria capaz de tener esa energia, pero si estuvo encerrado en el bloque de energia tanto tiempo, esa persona deberia de estar muerta. -"Gracias capitan, esa informacion realmente me serviara"-, Jorge sale del cuarto y comienza a caminar a la salida del hospital, mientras tanto Martha y Barrera salen del puesto del guardia, -"Su informacion no sirve de nada, es la misma que dieron Pepe y Ara"-, Barrera dice al salir del lugar, -"Sera mejor regresar con Jorge y ver que averiguo el"-, Martha lo sigue cuando se detienen al sentir una energia, una energia que es familiar para ellos, -"De todos los cazadores de Alka me debia de encontrar con ustedes"-, una voz dice, de repente 2 figuras aparecen de la nada, -"Lastima que tambien sere yo quien los mande a dormir, permanentemente"-, el sujeto alto saca su espada, apuntandola a ellos.

Jorge siente una energia cerca de la entrada, -"Sera mejor que me apresure, por lo que dijo Oswaldo, ese sujeto es muy peligroso"-, Jorge sale corriendo del hospital a la entrada de la aldea. -"No puedo creerlo... tu... ¿Tu eres quien ataco la aldea, por que?"-, Barrea dice al sujeto alto, -"Digamos que ahora es mi mision, pero solo veo a ustedes 2, ¿Donde esta Hugo?"-, pregunta el sujeto, Barrera mira hacia el suelo, -"El nos abandono igual que lo hizo usted Yair-sensei"-, Martha le grita al sujeto, este solo sonrie, -"Ustedes me estaban deteniendo en mi camino, asi que lo mejor era dejar a los debiles atras, creo que el lo entendio despues tambien"-, Barrera mira a Yair, -"No pienso pelear contra usted, solo se lo pedire de manera sencilla, vayase de la aldea"-, Barrera mira a su antiguo sensei, -"Lo hare con mucho gusto cuando haya matado a Marlene"-, el se comienza a acercar a Barrera, -"Sera mejor que te defiendas, por que no pienso detenerme si te pones en mi camino"-, Yair ya esta muy cerca de el, -"Preparate a reunirte con tus padres, ultimo hijo de Faeton"-, Yair levanta su espada para atacar a Barrera, pero una energia aparece en el lugar, llamando su atencion.

-"Vamos Barrera, defiendete"-, Jorge ha llegado al lugar, observa a Yair y al otro sujeto, -"Supongo que tu eres el remplazo de Hugo, Marlene dbe de pensar que tu puedes ayudarlos a ellos"-, Yair camina en direccion de Jorge ahora, el cual entra en una posicion ofensiva, -"Martha, Barrera, encarguense del otro sujeto"-, los guantes vuelven a aparecer en las manos y pies de Jorge, listo para pelear. Yair se sorprende que Jorge realmente quiera pelear, -"Esta bien, Jesus, si los otros 2 tratan de ayudarlo, entretenlos"-, Yair da la orden a su compañero, el cual se coloca enfrente de Martha y Barrera, -"Ya lo escucharon, sera mejor que los dejen pelear a gusto"-, Jesus rie al verlos, esto muestra que realmente esta dispuesto a pelear con ellos. -"Creo que asi sera mejor, no tendremos molestias"-, Yair dice al mirar a Jorge, el cual aparece detras de el, soltando un poderoso golpe, el cual es detenido por la espada de Yair, -"Veo que no pierdes tiempo, muy bien, me agrada eso"-, Yair comienza a lanzar espadazos contra Jorge, el cual los esquiva, sorprendido por la manera en que mueve la espada, parecido al estilo que el usa.

Jorge trata de golpear a Yair, pero el esquiva sus golpes de manera muy sencilla, -"Me aburres niño, sera mejor terminar contigo ahora"-, un ataque de Yair corta a Jorge, luego en su mano sale una bola de energia oscura, -"Toma esto: Bola de las sombras"-, lanza su ataque contra Jorge, el cual lo impacta y lo lanza hacia el puesto de vigilancia, destruyendolo. Yair voltea a ver a Martha y a Barrera, riendo al verlos, -"Bueno... ahora les toca a ustedes"-, la espada de Yair brilla de un color rojo, listo para atacarlos, -"Sensei, por favor, detengase, esto esta mal"-, Martha le dice, pero al parecer Yair ya tiene en su mente el acabar con ellos. <Maldicion, ese golpe si me dolio, creo que es hora de pelear enserio>, de los escombros comienza a salir energia, Yair voltea a verlos, -"Parece que ese chico es dificil de derrotar, bueno, veamos que sabe hacer"-, los escombros salen volando y la energia roja rodea a Jorge, -"Creo que ahora la pelea va enserio"-, Yair comienza a reir, -"Eres la segunda persona que veo que puede activar el Devil Trigger, al parecer tu tambien eres un mitad demonio como yo"-, Barrera mira a Jorge, ahora entiende por que es tan fuerte y por que despues de cada batalla su poder aumenta.

-"Veamos quien de los 2 lo usa mejor"-, Yair cierra sus ojos, al abrirlos cambian por un color rojo, energia comienza a salir de su cuerpo, lastimando la entrada de la aldea, pronto su energia equipara la de Jorge y comienza a sobrepasarla, Jorge no puede creerlo, -"¿Que pasa chico?, no me digas que, ¿Ya no piensas pelear?"-, Yair desaparece, luego golpea a Jorge en el estomago, enviandolo hacia atras, este trata de golpearlo pero su velocidad es muy rapida, solo se aprecian pequeños destellos de color rojo, Barrera no puede creerlo, <¿Que demonios son ellos?, su energia... es practicamente la misma>, Jorge esta reciviendo una golpisa por parte de Yair, el cual parece estar divirtiendose con esto. -"Muy bien, creo que es hora de usar esto, Estilo de trueno: Chidori"-, Jorge baja su mano y energia comienza a concentrarse en la palma de esta, la energia es tan fuerte que puede verse, Yair mira atentamente, -"Vaya, ese ataque se ve fuerte, si me toca tal vez me dañe"-, Yair entra en una posicion defensiva, -"Aunque trates de detenerlo te lastimare"-, Jorge se lanza contra Yair, la velocidad que lleva es increible, alza su mano y la estrella contra Yair, ocurre una explosion.

Cuando el humo se disipa, Barrera observa que Yair sigue de pie y Jorge esta incado, la mano de Jorge que tenia el chidori fue detenida por Yair, -"Esos ataques son muy peligrosos, no creo que debas usarlos asi"-, con un poco de fuerza, Yair aplasta la mano de Jorge, rompiendola por completo, -"Eso evitara que lo uses de nuevo por un tiempo"-, Yair suelta la mano de Jorge y lo pate hacia atras, este parece ya no tener energia, -"Ahora es mi turno, Estilo de trueno: Raikiri"-, la mano de Yair tambien comienza a generar energia de color roja, la cual se acumula en su palma, luego con una velocidad increible la impacta contra el pecho de Jorge, arrastrandolo hasta una pared, donde al quitar su mano arranca una parte de la ropa de Jorge, mostrando un raro sello en su pecho. -"Tu eres a quien estaba buscando, Arte de Sellos: Liberacion demoniaca"-, Yair entierra su mano en el pecho de Jorge, donde el sello comienza a girar, liberando una extraña energia negra, Jorge comienza a gritar de agonia, -"No trates de pelear contra el, mejor aceptalo y deja que te controle"-, Yair dice mientras la energia los rodea a los 2, creando un escudo alrededor de ellos, -"Es hora de que el infierno que esta dentro de ti, queme toda la aldea"-, el escudo se quiebra y un gran resplandor deslumbra el lugar.

[XInferna_ IncognitoX]

Why give chapter summaries and not the actual story? What do you want out of this?

[Suad Sparda]

To write the summary of the story, then I will put the whole one, so if you are interested you can read the whole thing... and also the original is in spanish, because im mexican... so its a bit difficult form me to translate the whole thing to english

[XInferna_ IncognitoX]

Suad Sparda

To write the summary of the story, then I will put the whole one, so if you are interested you can read the whole thing... and also the original is in spanish, because im mexican... so its a bit difficult form me to translate the whole thing to english

I understand that your Spanish (that is all you had to mention, but ok) however, I still do not understand why put chapter summaries first and then the whole story? It will only create a mess and not really interesting because you gave a summary. You are taking the element of surprise from your audience. If I am one of your readers, I want to read the story, I want to read what you bring to the table with your writing. I want to critic your writing. Not your chapter summaries. Understand? But a further explanation I could use, since I still don't understand the purpose of chapter summaries before the whole story.

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Im starting to edit the chapters so now they are full, have fun reading them...

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Bump, bump bump, read please

[abortions are fun]

ew, stop.

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ammm... no