Death [Very short story, comment/critique please?]

[Cassandra022]

[Maru-Kitae]

*Claps*

Very nice, short and sweet. And it get's the point across.

But that reminds me more of a "summary" or "analysis" part of something that has happened already.

And...it fails to point out many other possible "subjects" regarding the action and conclusion of the final end.

But over all I find it pretty good. 3nodding

"* * * *" Four stars

[Cassandra022]

thanks ^_^