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Post: 6179965_1 created on Mon, 21 Feb 2005 14:37:49 +0000
Posted: Mon, 21 Feb 2005 14:37:49 +0000

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Post: 6179965_2 created on Mon, 21 Feb 2005 16:06:00 +0000
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I loved it! The description was brilliant the whole setting magical, everything moved a bit to fast, I felt but thats OK. And I didn't realise she was sitting in her room, you didn't explain that so I thought she was outside next to the house. Apart from that it was great!

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