YOU & I (my first original poem)

[star_dust_dragon8910]

(this is my first original poem please comment and tell me what you think)

YOU & I

ROADS...
we're like two Roads shooting in oposite directions
fleeting apart at thousands of miles per hour
we're worlds apart..
how I long to be who we were befor
befor all of this

Diffrent Paths...
one travels east while the other travels west
befor we know it we're light years apart
i wish to be on the same path again...
walking side by side with you smiling
like we used to...

A Dream...
in my sleep
Thats all you are now
a faded dream
in a world where your no longer mine

The memory...
whats left?
foggy images
faint aroma's
and holo echo's
all pieces of a single shattered memory

Faith...
I have faith
the world is only so big
eventually our roads will meet again
and if even for a brief moment
we will walk side by side again SMILING...




NineTailFox8910

[The_Bosnian_Synergy]

Great poem man, I love it.
I used to write often and then school started and stress came in.
I'm trying to get back into the poetry writing because it always helped me out.
Good job once again.

[star_dust_dragon8910]

The_Bosnian_Synergy

Great poem man, I love it.
I used to write often and then school started and stress came in.
I'm trying to get back into the poetry writing because it always helped me out.
Good job once again.

Wow you think it's really good? Thank You! I never wrote in high school to be honest i all ways thought it was kinda of hard to do back then. but now that I've graduated I thought i'd give it a shot... i never was very good at this kind of thing back then but when i sat down to write it the words just flowed out... im glad to see someone really enjoys it thanks again.

[rutharami]

sabes a mi me gusta es lindo y agradable aun que no hay muchas personas que se interesen en esto crying

[Alexi Swen]

That's a really nice poem. I expecialy like how it starts off and ends!
Alexi

[star_dust_dragon8910]

rutharami

sabes a mi me gusta es lindo y agradable aun que no hay muchas personas que se interesen en esto crying

I'm really sorry i don't quite understand i don't speak spanish... i ran this through a translator and it still doesn't make much sense to me... but from what i do understand your saying you like it right?

[The_Bosnian_Synergy]

star_dust_dragon8910

The_Bosnian_Synergy

Great poem man, I love it.
I used to write often and then school started and stress came in.
I'm trying to get back into the poetry writing because it always helped me out.
Good job once again.

Wow you think it's really good? Thank You! I never wrote in high school to be honest i all ways thought it was kinda of hard to do back then. but now that I've graduated I thought i'd give it a shot... i never was very good at this kind of thing back then but when i sat down to write it the words just flowed out... im glad to see someone really enjoys it thanks again.

Oh yea I'm serious man it's a great poem.
And I was the same way, I didn't want anyone to know because it was kinda lame hehe.
But now I simply don't care lol.
I finally wrote a new poem yesterday and posted it on this forum.
Just a little comeback haha.

[star_dust_dragon8910]

The_Bosnian_Synergy

star_dust_dragon8910

The_Bosnian_Synergy

Great poem man, I love it.
I used to write often and then school started and stress came in.
I'm trying to get back into the poetry writing because it always helped me out.
Good job once again.

Wow you think it's really good? Thank You! I never wrote in high school to be honest i all ways thought it was kinda of hard to do back then. but now that I've graduated I thought i'd give it a shot... i never was very good at this kind of thing back then but when i sat down to write it the words just flowed out... im glad to see someone really enjoys it thanks again.

Oh yea I'm serious man it's a great poem.
And I was the same way, I didn't want anyone to know because it was kinda lame hehe.
But now I simply don't care lol.
I finally wrote a new poem yesterday and posted it on this forum.
Just a little comeback haha.

well thank you im glad to hear you like it! =)

[The_Bosnian_Synergy]

star_dust_dragon8910

The_Bosnian_Synergy

star_dust_dragon8910

The_Bosnian_Synergy

Great poem man, I love it.
I used to write often and then school started and stress came in.
I'm trying to get back into the poetry writing because it always helped me out.
Good job once again.

Wow you think it's really good? Thank You! I never wrote in high school to be honest i all ways thought it was kinda of hard to do back then. but now that I've graduated I thought i'd give it a shot... i never was very good at this kind of thing back then but when i sat down to write it the words just flowed out... im glad to see someone really enjoys it thanks again.

Oh yea I'm serious man it's a great poem.
And I was the same way, I didn't want anyone to know because it was kinda lame hehe.
But now I simply don't care lol.
I finally wrote a new poem yesterday and posted it on this forum.
Just a little comeback haha.

well thank you im glad to hear you like it! =)

Anytime smile .
Do you have anymore?

[star_dust_dragon8910]

The_Bosnian_Synergy

star_dust_dragon8910

The_Bosnian_Synergy

star_dust_dragon8910

The_Bosnian_Synergy

Great poem man, I love it.
I used to write often and then school started and stress came in.
I'm trying to get back into the poetry writing because it always helped me out.
Good job once again.

Wow you think it's really good? Thank You! I never wrote in high school to be honest i all ways thought it was kinda of hard to do back then. but now that I've graduated I thought i'd give it a shot... i never was very good at this kind of thing back then but when i sat down to write it the words just flowed out... im glad to see someone really enjoys it thanks again.

Oh yea I'm serious man it's a great poem.
And I was the same way, I didn't want anyone to know because it was kinda lame hehe.
But now I simply don't care lol.
I finally wrote a new poem yesterday and posted it on this forum.
Just a little comeback haha.

well thank you im glad to hear you like it! =)

Anytime smile .
Do you have anymore?

Not as of right now but if your really intrested in reading more i plan on writing some later i will pm you when i do

[The_Bosnian_Synergy]

star_dust_dragon8910

The_Bosnian_Synergy

star_dust_dragon8910

The_Bosnian_Synergy

star_dust_dragon8910

The_Bosnian_Synergy

Great poem man, I love it.
I used to write often and then school started and stress came in.
I'm trying to get back into the poetry writing because it always helped me out.
Good job once again.

Wow you think it's really good? Thank You! I never wrote in high school to be honest i all ways thought it was kinda of hard to do back then. but now that I've graduated I thought i'd give it a shot... i never was very good at this kind of thing back then but when i sat down to write it the words just flowed out... im glad to see someone really enjoys it thanks again.

Oh yea I'm serious man it's a great poem.
And I was the same way, I didn't want anyone to know because it was kinda lame hehe.
But now I simply don't care lol.
I finally wrote a new poem yesterday and posted it on this forum.
Just a little comeback haha.

well thank you im glad to hear you like it! =)

Anytime smile .
Do you have anymore?

Not as of right now but if your really intrested in reading more i plan on writing some later i will pm you when i do

Awesome, I'd love to read it.
I'll add you as a friend.
Here is mine if you haven't seen it:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/original-poetry-lyrics/where-did-you-go/t.77727639/?_gaia_t_=3936

[rutharami]

si me gusta es muy bonita 3 Asiente con la cabeza -: 3nod:

[star_dust_dragon8910]

Thank you